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Past Sins : Are her sins really hers?Once upon a time, a long time ago, there were two sister who were princessess.
The older one was praised and loved by all the subjects;
The younger one never had nearly as much love and praise as her older sister.
The Glory and Admiration towards the elder created envy in the younger one,
Disgust, Sadness and Malice slowly creeping into her heart.
This created the "Monster" of hatred and despair.
"The Monster" was trying to do everything to help her host, to make her beloved and praised.
But it did so without knowledge or experience, with the foolishness of a Newborn.
This foolishness resulted in the "Monster's" and the princess' banishment from the kingdom.
In time, the two return to the kingdom, but it was only the young princess who was forgiven her sins.
Every shred of malice was attributed to the "Monster", said to be the source of all the evil.
Not even the fact that the "Monster" was born of the two siblings could change anything.
Born from their mistake. Their fault. Their fight. Their sins.
And what has "The Monster" ever done? It was only what the younger princess wanted.
So then ... are "The Monster's" sins really its?
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Comments: 229
vavacung In reply to ggg123666 [2013-12-06 15:49:19 +0000 UTC]
Celestia :I am your Father!
Nightmare Moon : Nooooooooooooo!!!!!!
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Alexander-Krozz In reply to ??? [2013-12-03 14:17:34 +0000 UTC]
HA i like that... our daughter! rofl
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Randomreader-001 In reply to ??? [2013-12-03 06:58:52 +0000 UTC]
*reads the last scene* ...pfft! pah....BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! Tia's expression! LOL
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Sunnburst In reply to ??? [2013-12-03 06:52:57 +0000 UTC]
Oh god that's just Perfect! xD i can't stop Laughing xD Oh how I would love to see how Moon would react if she would have had heard that sentence from Luna.
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vavacung In reply to SomaShield [2013-12-03 09:01:06 +0000 UTC]
When you said to much word in short time. It can't help if you said wrong word! XD
(Except Pinky Pie.)
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Changsta-187 [2013-12-03 05:34:41 +0000 UTC]
Man, such a bitter sweet comic with that ending. Guess we'll find out whether Luna's intervention can change Celestia's perception.
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vavacung In reply to Changsta-187 [2013-12-03 09:00:05 +0000 UTC]
Even Celestia, The Sun goddess still need to learn Friendship Lesson too!
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Overthelakepancake In reply to ??? [2013-12-03 05:03:32 +0000 UTC]
I really like the bug eyed Luna and Celestia, you should do more of that kind of thing.
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kt-kats [2013-12-03 04:28:53 +0000 UTC]
ok after reading it i totally forgot what i read and had to read it agian after seeing the look on Celestia's face at the end!
also this is getting interesting... but will it last?? mhm... Only Time will tell now
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sigel4ever [2013-12-03 04:15:58 +0000 UTC]
mmmm curiously, both definitions are correct: is sister of both because are alicorns of a type of magic and is daughter (kill me later, please) because is the hate of luna and the desire of love for be the same as Celestia, sooooooo
please, she deserves a second chance, Celestia Forgive Monny!
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kt-kats In reply to sigel4ever [2013-12-03 04:31:18 +0000 UTC]
*5 hours later* "It's later and It's Time To Die!" *Lullay Moon Kills Thou* "Mission Accomplished." : P (had to do it)
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sigel4ever In reply to kt-kats [2013-12-03 17:09:09 +0000 UTC]
ok, ok no problem, after all I DIE BEFORE, MUAHASHAHAHA!
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sigel4ever In reply to sigel4ever [2013-12-03 04:17:00 +0000 UTC]
aaaand the face of both sister...
so cuuuuuuuuutie!
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CommanderCTC In reply to ??? [2013-12-03 04:14:29 +0000 UTC]
Does the tittle hinted on the story "Past Sins" or is just me?
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tigertommy9898 In reply to CommanderCTC [2013-12-04 12:52:27 +0000 UTC]
I am the Traditional Chinese translator(Well,form Simplified Chinese to Traditional Chinese).
So whan I see the title,I was so excited.
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vavacung In reply to CommanderCTC [2013-12-03 08:58:02 +0000 UTC]
My Past Sins isn't a reference to Past Sins that write by Pen Stroke. It's my original. We just have same title but complete different story. (The same thing we have is It's about Nightmare Moon)
In Pen Stroke story. The word "Past Sins" is belong to NIghtmare Moon. Past Sins of Nightmare Moon.
But in my story. The word "Past Sins" are belong to Celestia and Lunar. Past Sins of Celestia and Luna.
Nightmare Moon born from Celestia and Lunar sins.
Celestia's sin is "Ignorance" and "Foolishness" (Ignorance and Foolishness are sins in Buddhism)
Lunar's sin is "Envy" and "Wrath" (Envy and Wrath are sins in Christianity)
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AduroTri In reply to ??? [2013-12-03 04:01:12 +0000 UTC]
Now there's a serious slip of the tongue.
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