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Published: 2013-12-03 03:58:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 77050; Favourites: 709; Downloads: 325
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Description Past Sins : Are her sins really hers?

Once upon a time, a long time ago, there were two sister who were princessess.
The older one was praised and loved by all the subjects; 
The younger one never had nearly as much love and praise as her older sister. 
The Glory and Admiration towards the elder created envy in the younger one, 
Disgust, Sadness and Malice slowly creeping into her heart. 
This created the "Monster" of hatred and despair.
"The Monster" was trying to do everything to help her host, to make her beloved and praised.
But it did so without knowledge or experience, with the foolishness of a Newborn. 

This foolishness resulted in the "Monster's" and the princess' banishment from the kingdom. 

In time, the two return to the kingdom, but it was only the young princess who was forgiven her sins. 
Every shred of malice was attributed to the "Monster", said to be the source of all the evil.

Not even the fact that the "Monster" was born of the two siblings could change anything. 
Born from their mistake. Their fault. Their fight. Their sins. 
And what has "The Monster" ever done? It was only what the younger princess wanted.

So then ... are "The Monster's" sins really its?

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Comments: 229

chuck-vic-norris [2014-06-02 01:46:45 +0000 UTC]

Celestia: Creator, please smite me where I stand...

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dnj110 In reply to ??? [2014-05-29 23:24:27 +0000 UTC]

This idea will traumatize Tia for the rest of her life....Good job Luna.

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DarkShade75 In reply to ??? [2014-05-29 02:39:14 +0000 UTC]

Cannot be unseen...

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Evilhumour-Author In reply to ??? [2014-05-29 01:44:22 +0000 UTC]

PURE YES FACTOR! New headcannon is formed!

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Drakenhof In reply to ??? [2014-05-24 15:15:56 +0000 UTC]

endogamy! xDDDDD

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omnimon11 In reply to ??? [2014-05-19 00:38:46 +0000 UTC]

 

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Jazz-The-Cabbit [2014-05-16 23:17:50 +0000 UTC]

"Ignorance" of Tia... "Envy" of Luna...
Strange but at my ears, it sound like : the "Father"... aaand~ the "Mother"...


Trololol ?

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MacyIsHere In reply to ??? [2014-05-11 23:58:50 +0000 UTC]

im sing of laughter on celestia's expression and luna's for what luna said

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Keyrel6202 In reply to ??? [2014-04-30 01:43:24 +0000 UTC]

X"D Tia's face in that last panel...my....my lungs...! *dies*

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Flamilingo In reply to ??? [2014-04-27 05:01:06 +0000 UTC]

Awkward.....

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ArcticLeader In reply to ??? [2014-04-24 00:34:57 +0000 UTC]

XD That last panel.

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iIsMe95 [2014-04-23 04:03:23 +0000 UTC]

That title.  I see what you did there.

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GeekyRockCandy [2014-04-21 01:52:48 +0000 UTC]

Whoops 

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Cenrtergg [2014-04-19 16:26:33 +0000 UTC]

Parents???

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Zeroxee [2014-04-19 12:54:57 +0000 UTC]

 

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altair307 [2014-04-11 19:30:24 +0000 UTC]

I almost fell out of my chair laughing at that last bit 

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the-rainbron3 In reply to ??? [2014-03-31 20:39:55 +0000 UTC]

same as Luna and celesta . !!!!!

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Fermhreisatum [2014-03-31 19:52:31 +0000 UTC]

DONT... DROP... THAT TUN TUNANAM...
don't drop that tun tu anam hey...!

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Yourmove17 [2014-03-31 08:54:57 +0000 UTC]

It just got all 'woona' at the end there...love it. 
Though we all know who really is to blame for nightmare moon...
...Blueblood.

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izzyo816 In reply to ??? [2014-03-29 01:37:59 +0000 UTC]

lawl 'daughter' thts a little wrong of a word but its k we know wht u mean

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izzyo816 In reply to izzyo816 [2014-03-29 01:38:40 +0000 UTC]

sry i didn't mean this as a grammar mistake, it was pointed towards Luna   

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SeraphineFrost In reply to ??? [2014-03-27 03:53:00 +0000 UTC]

Pffffffffffft

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SteelShoe16 In reply to ??? [2014-03-20 17:03:05 +0000 UTC]

wow drop the bomb much Luna

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pepper12345 In reply to ??? [2014-03-14 20:37:18 +0000 UTC]

"Ack i meant our SISTER"

Wow Luna...talk about a Freudian Slip!

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MoppyPuppy In reply to ??? [2014-03-14 02:26:30 +0000 UTC]

She's their daughter.
CONFIRMED.

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superlink1425 In reply to ??? [2014-03-13 00:35:01 +0000 UTC]

lol  

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Gui-Omatsu [2014-02-01 01:17:34 +0000 UTC]

I'm probably wrong, but was this a reference to Penstroke's "Past Sins" fanfic? Also, Luna, you really need to choose better your words. Lol

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Gui-Omatsu In reply to Gui-Omatsu [2014-02-02 18:58:59 +0000 UTC]

Forget my question, you already asked that in the comments below! xD

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Gui-Omatsu In reply to Gui-Omatsu [2014-02-02 19:00:07 +0000 UTC]

*Answered

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weasselK [2014-01-29 20:38:24 +0000 UTC]

And that is why you must never speak in on a hot head!

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Phaedrolous [2014-01-23 07:07:57 +0000 UTC]

This is starting to get weird again...

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sweetymimy22 [2014-01-16 17:57:08 +0000 UTC]

hahahaha the times went wrong luna haha

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locuas In reply to ??? [2014-01-15 17:48:34 +0000 UTC]

"Paper...dear...you are a mother now..."

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PrincessCrystalSnow In reply to ??? [2014-01-09 12:02:22 +0000 UTC]

Pfft...

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ScarletandLunaRcool In reply to ??? [2014-01-05 17:42:12 +0000 UTC]

Luna must be feeling very awkward right now.........

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nathanl9 In reply to ??? [2013-12-29 22:25:55 +0000 UTC]

*facepalm* really Luna you really just said that without thinking about what you were saying first….. oh well now you have to face the consequences..

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waffle911 In reply to ??? [2013-12-28 02:13:57 +0000 UTC]

Last panel reminds me of Egophiliac's style. Works well for that context, I think.

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Marlieset In reply to ??? [2013-12-21 09:31:25 +0000 UTC]

xD

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FormerlySam In reply to ??? [2013-12-16 11:16:33 +0000 UTC]

why do i feel like the whole "Past sins" stuff is a reference to past sins?

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vavacung In reply to FormerlySam [2013-12-16 13:06:38 +0000 UTC]

My Past Sins isn't a reference to Past Sins that write by Pen Stroke. It's my original. We just have same title but complete different story. (The same thing we have is It's about Nightmare Moon)

In Pen Stroke story. The word "Past Sins" is belong to NIghtmare Moon. Past Sins of Nightmare Moon.

But in my story. The word "Past Sins" are belong to Celestia and Lunar. Past Sins of Celestia and Luna.

Nightmare Moon born from Celestia and Lunar sins.

Celestia's sin is "Ignorance" and "Foolishness" (Ignorance and Foolishness are sins in Buddhism)
Lunar's sin is "Envy" and "Wrath" (Envy and Wrath are sins in Christianity)

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Freefox In reply to ??? [2013-12-16 07:45:13 +0000 UTC]

Luna speak the truth here.... actually blow my mind

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revan1801 In reply to ??? [2013-12-13 16:14:18 +0000 UTC]

My Guts can't take it anymore *tries to push myself up into my chair again after near death by laughter*

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CommanderEX In reply to ??? [2013-12-06 17:22:23 +0000 UTC]

So many references, pure gold.

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ocaptrong In reply to ??? [2013-12-06 02:32:00 +0000 UTC]

Ha ha you two made

involuntary incest

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HJSDGCE In reply to ??? [2013-12-05 08:22:41 +0000 UTC]

I just noticed how that last panel reminds me of Egophiliac.

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vavacung In reply to HJSDGCE [2013-12-05 10:08:21 +0000 UTC]

Moonstruck's style! XD

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HJSDGCE In reply to vavacung [2013-12-05 14:17:17 +0000 UTC]

   

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the-moep [2013-12-04 02:52:58 +0000 UTC]

This comic has on eof the best story line I have ever seen. It is plain awesome!

(But the gramatical errors are throwing even me as a not native speaker of sometimes...)

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the-moep In reply to the-moep [2013-12-04 02:54:53 +0000 UTC]

I mean it got way better, but there is always room for improvement, i guess.

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d715 [2013-12-04 02:25:22 +0000 UTC]

Well the show now more or less states nightmare is just an form luna took

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