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"Sorry. I'm just lost control my power..."Shipping and Descendant Warning :
Spike X Rarity(Nightmare pony) = Sparity(Daughter)
Pinkie Pie X ??? = Super Surprise(Descendant)
Warning : This story takes place 100 years after Rarity dead. This story base on season 4. So anything that happened in season 5 will have nothing to do with this story.
Warning : This story's an alternate universe and is really crazy at times. Sometime it's none sense too!
Warning : a lot of 4th wall breaking and referencing. Sharing universe with "To Love God - To Love Mortal" but in the future and more crazy. *You don't need to read "To Love God - To Love Mortal" to understand this story. It's just have many easter egg for that story here.*
If you confused about chronology of this story, You can watch this timeline to help you => vavacung.deviantart.com/art/Cr…
English Editor : dracoblair.deviantart.com/
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Comments: 192
DCarrier In reply to ??? [2014-10-17 20:46:15 +0000 UTC]
Isn't the moon only supposed to have that image if there's somepony trapped there?
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vavacung In reply to DCarrier [2014-10-17 20:50:54 +0000 UTC]
Because It already have someone on it.
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vavacung In reply to penawii [2014-10-17 22:24:36 +0000 UTC]
Oh. A same one from the last time. Nightmare Moon.
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TerraHv1 In reply to QuantumBranching [2014-10-17 23:32:51 +0000 UTC]
In Vavacung's world Luna and Nightmare Moon are now two different ponies. She was good for a few decades after the events of season 4 but apparently somewhere down the line she must have relapsed or something and had to be sent back to the moon.
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vavacung In reply to QuantumBranching [2014-10-17 23:21:53 +0000 UTC]
Nope. That's not Luna. That's Nightmare Moon.
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QuantumBranching In reply to vavacung [2014-10-23 06:05:14 +0000 UTC]
Huh? Isn't Nightmare Moon currently incarnated as Rarity's half-dragon daughter?
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vavacung In reply to QuantumBranching [2014-10-23 18:07:29 +0000 UTC]
Nightmare is some kind or curse. That make the darkside of pony have a form and own mind.
Luna --> Nightmare Moon
Rarity --> Nightmare Rarity
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conflagrated [2014-10-17 20:06:58 +0000 UTC]
We all know Pinkie Pie doesn't need a mate.
She just reproduces asexually through the power of smiles.
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whostolemybox In reply to ??? [2014-10-17 17:40:23 +0000 UTC]
Didn't think she was that powerful
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Dante-Wynter [2014-10-17 16:38:08 +0000 UTC]
What happens when you have fantastic powers, and you loose your concentration for a moment.
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AnnieRoshino [2014-10-17 16:24:27 +0000 UTC]
Since when does Nightmare Rarity can change the day night cycle...
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vavacung In reply to AnnieRoshino [2014-10-17 17:04:21 +0000 UTC]
Since Discord and Twilight can do it too. XD
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AnnieRoshino In reply to vavacung [2014-10-17 22:42:02 +0000 UTC]
Discord its because of chaos and Twilight was never able without Celestia and Luna's TALENT. Rarity have nothing to do with sun and moon even in Nightmare Form.
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vavacung In reply to AnnieRoshino [2014-10-17 23:21:22 +0000 UTC]
Than. Why Star Swirl The Bearded and his unicorns group can raise and low the sun and the moon?
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AnnieRoshino In reply to vavacung [2014-10-18 00:53:10 +0000 UTC]
They were loosing their magic by doing this.
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vavacung In reply to AnnieRoshino [2014-10-18 09:07:29 +0000 UTC]
If you careful read it. You will see that Star Swirl said "Alicorns possessed a level of magic of far beyond anything a Unicorn could ever imagine, Raising and lowing the sun and the moon would't cause us(Celestia and Luna) any harm"
It's obvious that if you has enough power, you can control the celestial objects too. Nightmare Pony have a power that nearly equal to Alicorn after all. Celestia and Luna may have sun and moon cutie mark to tell everyone that they good with Raising and lowing the sun and the moon. But It don't mean they the only one in the world who can do it.
....*Sigh* Why people this day always try to find a logic in the world of magic anyways...
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AnnieRoshino In reply to vavacung [2014-10-18 09:22:26 +0000 UTC]
Well i can easily counter logic that. Its clearly stated multiple time that the Talent is more then just "Oh i can do this with ease" Only Unicorn with a talent in magic can perform all kinds of spell while the others are mostly limited to spell related to their talent. It doesn't mean a Unicorn can't learn spells out of their Talent but its mainly the case.
Now putting Celestia and Luna into this does the same. Another Alicorn of the same power as Celestia and Luna wouldn't be able to move the sun and moon as well as them without consequences... So even a Nightmare Pony wouldn't really be able to do that let alone without even noticing it.
Starswirl himself couldn't do it and when the Unicorns did it before Celestia and Luna, they were losing their magic forever, the only reason why Twilight could to it and even then without struggling like she was fighting against someone even with the power of 3 powerful Alicorn is because she had not only their magic but also their talent since when they gave her their magic, their cutie mark vanished.
So. Nightmare Rarity or Rarity with Nightmare Rarity's power, can't move the sun and moon without proper training/spell and else.
And for your last question. Because magic does have a certain logic behind it and if you really just take that out. There will be no limit and no fun. Anypony can just do everything. Lyra raise the Sun and Moon. Lets see Rainbow Dash grow mountain out of the ground and see Applejack fly by flapping her legs :3
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vavacung In reply to AnnieRoshino [2014-10-18 09:31:10 +0000 UTC]
Fuck me please, I'm done with you... *Sigh*
This story is crazy. The end...No more logical answer.
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AnnieRoshino In reply to vavacung [2014-10-18 11:14:14 +0000 UTC]
Well its your choice to simply take the path of nonsense... lol
A crazy story doesn't mean bad writing you know? Because that's a plot hole right there.
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AmadeusCreations In reply to vavacung [2014-10-17 17:18:00 +0000 UTC]
Really that explains it
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frederiksd [2014-10-17 15:57:58 +0000 UTC]
I don´t think rarity knew she could do that
This could cause some problems if she does not know how to turn it back :S
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SchwarzerRitter [2014-10-17 15:50:48 +0000 UTC]
Why is the Mare in the Moon back?
That must be an interesting story.
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dres870 In reply to ??? [2014-10-17 15:35:54 +0000 UTC]
I dont want spoilers.
But i want to atleast will we ever know why nightmare is on the moon?
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juliuspeters [2014-10-17 15:34:34 +0000 UTC]
this Rarity face in the last square is comic and this Comic is good to start a day in a good mod tanks for doing it
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MarkWhitee In reply to vavacung [2014-10-18 16:47:55 +0000 UTC]
being an Asperger it pains me to see information left undone, plus I have a fascination with the human body and anatomy in general, along with merging technology with anatomy
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vavacung In reply to MarkWhitee [2014-10-18 17:32:56 +0000 UTC]
Mmmm...I don't think I'm smart enough for that. I'm just a kid with unlimited imagination. I never let any logical stop me to dream and imagine. So sometime, It have something that can't explain. Sometime it's don't have any sense and people always ask me to explain it...I'm just tired with it....I don't like to bring logical of real life to the world of imagine...
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MarkWhitee In reply to vavacung [2014-10-19 08:07:41 +0000 UTC]
I'm no0t asking you to think of logic, I'm asking if I may do so in your place
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Kopago In reply to Crelyous [2014-10-17 14:57:21 +0000 UTC]
Still don't get how she can do that and not freak the town out. Don't unicorns need to focus to use magic to move things?
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Crelyous In reply to Kopago [2014-10-17 16:13:37 +0000 UTC]
Sometimes a moment of "Surprise" can do certain... Magic tricks.
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vavacung In reply to Kopago [2014-10-17 17:44:12 +0000 UTC]
Go and ask Twilight when she was filly. => www.youtube.com/watch?v=zBJ4e6…
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SchwarzerRitter In reply to Kopago [2014-10-17 15:51:42 +0000 UTC]
Twilight's magic sometimes get out of control, when she is startled.
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