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Published: 2014-12-19 12:50:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 64769; Favourites: 514; Downloads: 253
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"Who want to be a prince!? Prince is bad and boring guy!"Shipping and Descendant Warning :
Spike X Rarity(Nightmare pony) = Sparity(Daughter)
Pinkie Pie X ??? = Super Surprise(Descendant)
(Spifire X Soarin) X (Daring Do X Ahuizotl) = Aerial Ace(Descendant)
Big Macintosh X Fluttershy = Apple Eden (Descendant)
Twilight Sparkle X -- Top Secret -- = Alternate Dawn(Son)
Warning : This story takes place 100 years after Rarity dead. This story base on season 4. So anything that happened in season 5 will have nothing to do with this story.
Warning : This story's an alternate universe and is really crazy at times. Futa-spell or the magic that can make female pony impregnate another female pony doesn't exist.
Warning : a lot of 4th wall breaking and referencing. Sharing universe with "To Love God - To Love Mortal" but in the future and more crazy. *You don't need to read "To Love God - To Love Mortal" to understand this story. It's just have many Easter egg for that story here.*
If you confused about chronology of this story, You can watch this timeline to help you => vavacung.deviantart.com/art/Cr…
English Editor : dracoblair.deviantart.com/
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Comments: 251
Latter they fall in love, married, thay mated and have babies. The end. [XD]
Alterity it's 20% cool!
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Something tells me Sombra's the father. Based on the eye style and muzzle shape, I don't see any other possibilities, really.
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Sparity's look xD
i like this page and i like Alter ^^
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Wow :33 It's amazing how fast you do these comics!!! I love the plot too!
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"Who wants to be a prince!?" Why, I'd be proud if Twilight was my mother....besides you get to live in a castle full of books!
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Warning, possible ship on radar! Battlestations engaged!
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All battle station ready commander!
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Good. Let's see how this plays out
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No, he can notice the fact she's Nightmare.
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This ship.....it's Madness!
Madness?
THIS IS SPAR-DAW!!!!!!!!!!
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Alterity!
sounds funy and easy to remember. [:3]
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Same with Spardaw. Someone asks "What's this ship?" "THIS! IS! SPARDAW!"
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.....He's cute! XD Seriously though he looks like Twilight! It's adorable!
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He's Twilight's son so he clearly doesn't know how rude he is being. But I still think she should tell him off or something. Then afterwards I'll go back to shipping them.
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Spalter, im calling it, Im so calling it. Or at least Spariter.
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owo'
TWILIGHT, LOOK I FOUND YOUR SON!
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Calling it now. *puts on a Captains hat and boards the S.S. Sparity.Alter* Alter and Sparity are the main ship in this series!
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I may receive negative replies, but I want to do a fair critique of this comic strip.
Pros:
I love the art style, really. The characters are drawn with a solid, yet smooth line that is enjoyable to watch. The story WAS interesting, and I invite you to the ''Cons'' paragraph.
Cons:
The not-so-good part of this comic mainly resides in the storyline and the dialogues.
The story was at first interesting: Rarity coming back to life by doing a dark deal with a nightmare pony and coming back to ponyville. But I quickly lost interest: We are now at part 49 and ~30 parts were used to present characters and make sexual innuendos.
The dialogues are, well, special. I understand that 4th wall breaking is fun. I understand that making not-so-subtle references is funny. But too much is just too much. Let's talk about that ''waifu'' moment (Part 40-41). It completely destroyed the momentum of the story. I was almost embarrassed to read the rest of it. I can understand that Twilight is anxious to talk about her husband (coltfriend, whatever), but using the term ''waifu'' just broke everything.
Let's not forget the pokémon reference: That moment just didn't make sense at all.
I don't know the goal of this strip: Is it for personal fun or made so people enjoy it? If it's for personal fun, then go ahead.
To conclude, the art is beautiful, but the storyline should be the most important thing. Not presenting all the characters at once.
This is my opinion and respectful replies would be appreciated. Thank you.
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What about nonsensical silly replies like: Dancing Kiwis?
I'm must say that I was very proud of myself for spelling nonsensical correctly without the need of a spell check.
And now to end this reply with a simple saying as Buzz Lightyear. "Shippers. Shippers everywhere."
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Dancing kiwis?? I think I missed that part XD.
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All part of Shipping madness. It is best not to think about it too hard as it is just silly nonsense.
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I was very unsure about the name Alternate Dawn. But Alter is a nice nic name. You have played your cards very well.
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They haven't met? How have they not met? Their parents are incredibly close.
And wow, the Nobles of Canterlot are pretty much universally hated by now.
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No, only the autor hate the nobles of Canterlot.
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Every one wants to be a princess! Even me!
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But we talking about prince....
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