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Published: 2014-12-29 12:27:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 71714; Favourites: 504; Downloads: 275
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Description
"The End"Shipping and Descendant Warning :
Spike X Rarity(Nightmare pony) = Sparity(Daughter)
Pinkie Pie X ??? = Super Surprise(Descendant)
(Spifire X Soarin) X (Daring Do X Ahuizotl) = Aerial Ace(Descendant)
Big Macintosh X Fluttershy = Apple Eden (Descendant)
Twilight Sparkle X -- Top Secret -- = Alternate Dawn(Son) *Dead*
Warning : This story takes place 100 years after Rarity dead. This story base on season 4. So anything that happened in season 5 will have nothing to do with this story.
Warning : This story's an alternate universe and is really crazy at times. Futa-spell or the magic that can make female pony impregnate another female pony doesn't exist.
Warning : a lot of 4th wall breaking and referencing. Sharing universe with "To Love God - To Love Mortal" but in the future and more crazy. *You don't need to read "To Love God - To Love Mortal" to understand this story. It's just have many Easter egg for that story here.*
Warning : I'm kidding.
If you confused about chronology of this story, You can watch this timeline to help you => vavacung.deviantart.com/art/Cr…
English Editor : dracoblair.deviantart.com/
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Comments: 470
"Warning : I'm kidding. "
I was worried for a second!
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mmmmm a very bad joke
but seriously, didn't rarity shopws her self control? i can suppose not
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He didn't raise the right flags and got th ebad ending.
Everypony get the bad ending the first time....
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I bet I was clone and some kind of double ganger.
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........... WHAT!!!!!!!!!????????? this is not the end..... please tell me this isnt the end,,,,,,?
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tell me that this isn't the end of teh comic
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X'D Oh. My. Gawd.
That was.... just too much, I laughed my ass off. Poor Alter. May he rest in ashes.
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he must have gotten away some how but he must have gotten a little burned anyways i do like what she did she is kind of cute as half dragon half pony thought.
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Youu. Why you end comic in a time like this
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Read all of the description.
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wat dont let it end like this there are sooooooo many questions left
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He probably just teleported away (or GOT teleported away, remember what Spike normally uses his fire for). I'm curious though if Sparity actually transformed into a 'dragon-form' briefly to burn him. She looks kinda cute in that form... you should do a sketch!
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And the ashes are 4 or 5 veeeeeeery precious books from Canterlot Library.
Sparity dragon form?... I want to see that ^^
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Is this really the end of the comic...because that is just plain depressing man. I know that Alter was a bit of a perv, but he didn't deserve to die over a kiss.
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there are people in prision for less
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I'm really sorry if i offended you in any way with my comment..i was just really shocked about that "ending" is all.
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I am not offended, just wanted to share my opinion. That is why we can comment, isn't it?
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It tells you that the story isn't really ending. He says that is just a joke.
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Oh!!! now i get it, thanks...and i'm sorry about asking a dumb question in the the first place man, i didn't really want to waste your time or anything like that.
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Oh, no, it's fine. I like helping people out.
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Bad End: starts playing Kanashimi no Mukou he
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Eh... Alter would have expired before Twilight anyway.
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please continue it. It could'nt end like this. I mean, the story goes in nowhere.
and it was just a terrible ending. sorry, but i loved the comic. i really wanted more.
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He deserved it.
But now what? Is it really the end of this story?
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Reload save file time. Maybe now he'll have learned his lesson.
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Welp, let's hope that she... saved her game before she did the fire breath? Let's just chalk this up as an Imagine Spot of what could have happened depending on what happens next.
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Unfortunately it is a Nuzlocke challenge.
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Lets play the "who actually read the description game".
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I see some who are failing at that game.
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Just going to paste this from the description so less freak outs...."Warning : I'm kidding."
Yeah, don't freak...please.
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Just like that? It ends like this? Woah, abrupt ending.
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.__. So does this mean the end of the comic?
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She not burned him, just sent tooo.....Luna?
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Please tell me there anymore. Please tell me there anymore. You can not end well. What would happen now with sparity? ¿Alter revive? Or what else? Tell me you'll do a second part KILL YOU OR AS BRONIE¡
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He's not dead. From my perspective of view, he'll be reborn from the ashes like a phoenix.
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I forgive people for missing the "I'm kidding" as it is slipped in with the same warnings we've all read dozens of times.
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And this is why you have as many savefiles as possible.
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I was like: "NOOOoooo...!"
Then I saw a warning: "I hope you are..."
And yeah, he deserve it.
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Reset game reset game! Oh man I hope I remembered to save before that fight!
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