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Prev: [link] // Next: [link]Moonlight is thought to transform some people into strange creatures to drive others mad...
......Does the moon actually possess such strange powers or is it all just....lunacy?
Inspired by Godsmack's "Moon Baby"
Info:
References to Yaoi pairing. Goku x Vegeta. This is about Veg (full name Vegeta Jr.), their child.
This storyline takes place about 6 months after the Cell Saga. Goku didn't stay dead and Veg is about 3 1/2 years old...
Welcome to the madness that is "This Time Imperfect"
Author's Note:
I must say that the class I took two years ago in perspectives has really paid off in the layout/background of this comic ^_^;
I couldn't sleep until I had this page posted. I feel more accomplished and it leaves you with a hint of things to come... And yes, you heard Chichi right...IN my version of this story chichi's gonna have twins ...but I will say no more. that'd just spoil the fanfiction when it comes to being written that far along.
Enjoy.
Dragonball Z, Gohan, Chichi © Akira Toriyama
Veg © me
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Comments: 40
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Woow Goku, so it wasn't good enough to keep dying, now you leave them all together willingly? -_-
Sorry, Goku is a horrible father lol XD I love you'r style by the way, and as much as I'm not a fan of yaoi or mpreg especially...(I just find it rather silly) I will continue this because I like how you draw and every once in a while a story comes along that despite myself I really enjoy. Yours seems to be one of them. ^^
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Are Gohan's kids boys or girls? He did say he was pregnet with twins.
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It was chichi to get pregnant not gohan I thought that to the first time
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wait wait a minute how the heck did goku get pregnant O-O? 
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Wohwohwohwohwohwohwohwohwohwohwohwoh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHAT???????? idk wats happening
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VEGETA DID WHAT???!!!....... sorry i dont know if i can read the rest of this story
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Ignor people like that okay, they're just jealous of your wonderful gift...x
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hahahaha goku left chi-chi for vegeta ^^ I was wonderin what her reaction would be, and this really sound like somethin' that chichi would say, great job ^^
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Ohh 
Is Goten and Trunks gonna be in this??
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This works very well. I like how you set up an alternate history for the character Vegeta Jr. and showed the implications of him choosing to be with Vegeta rather than Chichi. It's very realistic and her reactions are as well. Also it plays up Chichi's role as someone that Goku would not wish to remain with. Each of her words add up to this reality.
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The way you drew ChiChi's hair has improved lots! 
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Woman, your artwork only becomes more and more awesome!
I love how you have made these characters your own.
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Wow, awsome. Love where the story going. And not just cuz of the yaoi reference.
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Gohans face in second panel = D8) "ohnoes!"
I don't entirely hate Chi-Chi, but I have to admit, I can imagine her probably saying all those things if she was in the position she is in now in this fan comic.
As for Gohan, I'd imagine him maybe being a little hurt at first, then once he realizes his father still loves him, he'd be more accepting and learn to love his half brother more. As for Vegeta, from the small intereactions they've had on the show, I'd say Gohan doesn't hate him per se, but is certainly put off a little by his crude disposition.
So now that I managed to go completely off the topic of duscussing this piece I shall redeem myself, and say that it's very good and I like it...and such.
No but really, from what you've revealed so far about this story, seems your going pretty extenseive to essentially rewrite most of the series, which I don't think is bad, it's actually very interesting and I commend you for that.
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bastard child... Well I'm sure Chichi would probably say that for sure... XD
AAAH! Twins spoiler... AW! Well its soemthing to look foraward to... Goku's been busy... XD
Good details on the book case and even better on the wooden table.. *LOVE IT*
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love how you made chichi and gohan so child looking ^^
most gohan pic of him cell saga i have seen he looked more as a teen but here i love how he look chibi!! ^^
the look of the perspectives are really good ^^
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...You're a goddess when it comes to drawing pregnant people. >>;;;
ChiChi looks fantastic. I love her outfit. Hee~ and Gohan looks adorable. x3 I like the second panel, where he's slamming his book down. You really illustrated the feeling of surprise well there. 
And the book case in that panel is so amazing... What's the bowl for?
Oooh, ChiChi's cruel words. But hey, from her point of view, she has a right to be angry. =/ The last panel makes me giggle..I love the little 'ticked-off' squiggly above Gohan's head. x3
I'm excited to see where this twin theme is going!
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good eye. it's a heavy mortar and pestal (medicine bowl for grinding herbs) it's something of goku's that still remains there... but I'm sure that will eventually be confiscated by either him or gohan if it's needed.
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Twins? Will there be THREE Goku's running around? O_O'
Anyway, I like how you drew Gohan and Chichi ^^ They both have these nice bangs that I adore! But the speechbubbles (I have no idea how that's spelled) are a little sloppy 
I like where this is going... Keep up the great work ^^
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speech bubbles just suck to draw...and now that I've got the first five pages out of the way, I'm going back to do some work on them...which means cleaning up a bit more on adobe photoshop and blacking out the night skies and adding a few stars. So yeah, you're pointing something out that I'm already aware of. (not trying to win a popularity contest)
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Twins! yay! but love the bookshelf I suck at BG's I cheat now with photoshop T.T
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You write Chichi too well, its horrible the why she thinks.
I'm lovin it so far though, keep up the great work!
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wow, chi chi's a bitch! lol. but then again we all knew that. i like how you've drawn her hair
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oh wow. I dled to read it, then as I scrolled down on the third panel, I suddenly noticed Chi-Chi was pregnant! It was fabulous! Almost like it was set up to do that, though it wasn't.
Anywho! Very nicely done. Chi-Chi looks expecially good. I really like how you've done her hair.
Twins huh? Quite enticing!
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Wow o-o Twins? That's totally a new one to me o-o;;; Nice idea! And jeez, Chi Chi is as b*tchie as always DX;;;
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Gohan~! :3 I haven't seen him in ages.
Twins? Interesting plot twist.
Though I hope Chi-Chi doesn't influence them too much.
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Oh my god, Gohan's cute. And I like the idea of twins. I can't wait. You love putting suspence in your comics, don't you! D:
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Wow! I like how you draw Gohan, as he's one of my favs. 
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