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Prev: [link] // Next: [link]Moonlight is thought to transform some people into strange creatures to drive others mad...
......Does the moon actually possess such strange powers or is it all just....lunacy?
Inspired by Godsmack's "Moon Baby"
Info:
References to Yaoi pairing. Goku x Vegeta. This is about Veg (full name Vegeta Jr.), their child.
This storyline takes place about 6 months after the Cell Saga. Goku didn't stay dead and Veg is about 3 1/2 years old...
Welcome to the madness that is "This Time Imperfect"
Author's Note:
Vegeta couldn't pull his punch in time once they sensed Veg's transformation but both parents are very aware of what's happening.
By the way, the squiggly speech bubble means Vegeta's talking telepathically. I'll use this sort of speech bubble from time to time since the two are mated and sometimes like to talk privately.
Dragonball Z, Goku, Vegeta © Akira Toriyama
Veg © me
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Comments: 22
I'm....not such a big fan of yaoi pairing, and the thaught of vegeta being gay, but when i put those feelings aside, this is really great ^^
poor goku XD you can see that he's in pain
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Ouh! >X/ That's gotta hurt...
This page looks so very great 
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Oh dear! Hehe, whoopsie! Poor Goku; that had to hurt!
I love that Vegeta's yelling to him - like Goku could actually move to get out of the way, though Vegeta can't even stop on time 
I agree with Chi about the actions lines. Perfectly done!
As always, I adore your drawing style. This is a wonderful peice! Kudos my dear!
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HAPPY HALLOWEEN! ^^
OMG OMG, Im so happy to see the two sexy saiyans drawn by your once again! EEE! 
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OUCH poor Goku! Hahaha! I love your work. *smothers you in kisses*
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heh, i like how vegeta's like: "fuck!".
that punch looked painful.
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your lineart ownz, man 
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as you know, the mama is always gonna notice these things first... there's just something about a maternal bond between a mother and child that is even greater in intensity...
But, Vegeta actually noticed in panel 2 but he was also just about to hit Kakarott and was unable to stop the momentum of his fist in time.
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ohhhhhh, I see. Interesting. I can notice it better now
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I really like the panel arrangement on this page.
I love the expressions going on in the first panels, too. You can tell how startled the two of them are and how suddenly they stopped their battle [which seems to be quite the intense one since they're both SSJ] as well, which I think is great that you captured that moment!
Another thing I like about the top panels are the action lines you drew in. I think you spaced them out well - and I like how you varied them with each panel - sometimes people either don't have enough lines or they have too many, so the action isn't quite as effective as it could be.
The bottom panel is one master piece in itself. You can definitely see the concern and surprise that Vegeta and Goku are experiencing as they sense their son transforming. I love how stiff/frozen they are, too, and how Goku's responding to the hit. 
Whenever I read your stories or look at your pictures/comics..>>; I can totally see your stuff as a movie. The stories/emotions/actions/dialog...I don't know. D: It would make a great movie.
I agree with Chuquita. It's so great to see your Vegeta and Goku again! 
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actually, about half a year after cell, I figured they'd finally accomplished level 2..so they're level two but it's very difficult to distinguish level one from 2 unless it's made apparent... but I think I'll try to find a way to bring that up or something...
I'm sure that when they're trying to take care of an ozaru they'll stay in that level to even be capable of handing a special child like veg.. yes, there is a secret about the little boy that not even YOU or anyone knows...
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Alright, you already had me on the edge of my seat with everything that's currently going on in the story...but now that there's even more to know, I'm practically on top of my monitor! jkfasfhaskjdh I wanna know!
I agree, it's especially hard with Vegeta because his hair hardly ever changes besides it's color. Goku at least..his bangs go up in level two. >>; I'm eager to see how they handle this - I'm sure they don't want to hurt their son...and something in me tells me that they won't want to remove his tail either.
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Happy Halloween to you too! ^_^
I love your expressions althou i gotta admit, this nevegta that you drew in the bottom panel does look sorta diffrent then how you were drawing him before as far as his faces goes. I mean i know its a shocked expression but still... something seems diffrent . Maybe its just me...
I gotta say I love all the panels, but the bottom panel with both Goku and vegeta have the BEST stances! Very good postures for both of them.. Vegeta slightly to the sides... Goku leaning back a bit and on one knee.. GREAT touches on all the details of their clothes.
I enjoy the detailing work for the glove being gripped too.
...put simple... this entire PAGE rocks!
I wonder thou if they will go out an dhelp their cub and be risked by the moon lighht as well... I guess as long as they both don't look at it but then again their chibi will be Oozaru by then so they might need to transform aslo...
I can't wait to read more of the next chapters! I havn't read it in a while thou either so i should give a refresher read ^_^
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well, I certainly hope that my way of drawing vegeta isn't a bad thing and yes, I have noticed the style has changed but I think it was a change for the better... It's always good to improve.
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HAI always ^_^ I was mearly pointing out that it looks diffrent. :hugs: its such awsome work!
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Ahh! Your Goku and Vegeta! I missed them so much! X3
Happy Halloween!
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