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VertreV — Flash practice- Pony Run
Published: 2011-04-28 09:13:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 1622; Favourites: 43; Downloads: 40
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WOOO yeah...The back legs are... offf. Not sure which frame really needs to be fixed though :\
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This looks really good! You might want to prologue the period in which her (?) legs are stretched a frame or two, it'd give it a great sense of weight and pull. Other than that, really smooth and beautiful!
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It looks pretty good! I'd say the only thing that "appears" off is that it looks like you animated it on threes (one picture every three frames). When compared to the show, which doesn't use frame-by-frame animation for their run cycles (they use shape tweens) it "appears" off - even though it's accurate.
Great job! You gonna do any more?
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What the one below said. It also feels very stiff.
Other than that it's a good run cycle.
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Yeah. I'm still working on getting better flow with the body. I'm working on a second version of the run cycle now(ish) x3
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The problem with the back legs lies in the fact that they appear to be moving as a whole, you need to make them appear to move more independently of one another. Mind you I suck at flash animations so if I sound a tad unenlightened, I am.
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Actually, I'm pretty sure you hit the nail on the head. Just cause you cant animate well doesn't mean you dont have an eye for spotting things :3
Thanks for pointin that out.
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