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Aya-DNA [2018-07-05 10:28:18 +0000 UTC]

Hello there I'm come from 

Beautiful drawing indeed
First, I really like how you chose the concept to this drawing, like this owrld is your own canvas that you can draw it freely, you can make the world become more lively and interesting by your own imagination, and the colorfull of this image says that our world is also "colorfull" and full of different things that we can try to reach and find out, really stunning concept yet you also put it vague. So people who see this, have their own opinion seeing this image, make it become more stand out and eye catchy

But did you know that your drawing can be more perfect again than this? The first step to make it perfect are by giving more attention to the details, like the grass, the tree or even those girl clothes
The most important thing to consider whenever you are drawing clothing or any type of fabric is the direction the fabric is going to be pulled in. Folds are caused wherever the fabric is being stretched or pulled... figure out how exactly you want the fabric to move, and the rest is pretty easy. Always remember to consider the figure beneath the clothing, the cloth should reveal the shape of the figure beneath.

The other things that can make your drawing depth are take care fully to its value
Your drawings can appear flat rather than three dimensional when you use too little contrast in values. Unless you are trying to achieve a specific mood or want the subject to look flat, always use a full range of values. The first thing to understand value are understand where the light and shadow are on the object ^^

Again, as I can said, a really well done piece, with only a few relatively minor flaws. Hopefully you'll find my pointers helpful.... If you find a problem about how to understand it nicely don't forget to research, google are the best place to gather information 
and sorry for some typo and broken english hhhhh

There’s no “right” or “wrong” way to draw, but rather an acceptance of diversity and recognition that every drawing... no matter how much you dislike it, provides a chance for you to figure out something new. The key to knowing when you’ve practiced a specific skill enough is when you’re happy with your results 

Despite all that this is an amazing art ^^ the pose, expression and composition are awesome   

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Shironekoz [2018-07-01 08:57:27 +0000 UTC]

Hello, I'm from !
-You have great control with the lights! I love that you experiment with spotlights, sunsets, etc. Anyway if you ever see yourself with difficulties I can pass some images of tutorials, although is always good to make a round on the internet and find the ones that interest you most.
-I see the shadows are too flat and they take away the depth of the drawing. I recommend that you apply darker colors to give it more depth. But remember that never in gray / black colors!
-The textures of the plans should be deeper, because it becomes transparent and see what is behind, with adding more layers of shadow / light this will be solved.
-The lines make the drawing look more flat, but with the previous tip this will be solved.

I hope these tips will help you, keep it up! ^^

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Ink-Slasher [2018-06-25 21:46:10 +0000 UTC]

Shading and value would be nice. I like the idea of making it look like a painted canvas but value would help so much to define the colour a bit and also a little more work on skirt wound be greart/

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HazelGatoya [2018-06-25 21:45:43 +0000 UTC]

Huh. I don't often see things that make me immediately pause submitted to Project Comment. Better give my two cents, then.

I absolutely love how dynamic the center character's pose is. It doesn't look quite natural to me, but I think that's because I'm imagining how much that would be stretching out one's back. I also love the background and the work you put into making it realistic when it comes to proportions yet whimsical with all of the colors, flowers and Christmas lights. Sometimes you can tell which of the details are real, which one's are from the girl's head, and sometimes you can't, but it is all grounded in reality at least. It all has the possibility of being real, and that makes the imaginative bits even more magical when paired with the title and the quote.

Extremely well done here.

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adam-ant2 [2018-06-25 21:22:11 +0000 UTC]

This reminds me so much of my High School art club.

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Naarok0fKor [2018-06-25 20:46:34 +0000 UTC]

I wuw the title...do plan on reworking the background?

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frufffydoo [2018-06-22 22:00:53 +0000 UTC]

a really cool idea done really well!

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