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Published: 2015-10-24 01:10:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 1751; Favourites: 147; Downloads: 8
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Each one tells a story, butthey heal
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I really like the curves, the shading, and the colouring. I think you did everything pretty well, except perhaps the face. You can add a little more shading to the face, and the shape of the hair doesn't match the head very much. The hair feels rather poofy. Perhaps a little more dimension to the head in general? I really like how you did the body. The curves and shading is all very smooth and awesome, and the head feels a little bland (for lack of better word) compared to the body.
But otherwise I like it very very much! Real nice. Awesome. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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To start off I REALLY love this concept, It's been done before but it really leaves a mark on you - No pun intended.
~ The use of color is spot on compared to the rest of it.
~ Shading and light work can be tweaked a bit but it doesn't really drag the picture down.
~ Contrast is great and I really like how you've used it.
~ The line work is solid and very clean, I also like the randomness you've put into the scars and varying thickness.
* All I can really say is to work on proportions. Great job!
- To explain this in more depth, It might just be the angle but her hips seem too wide compared to her body and shoulders too broad, Although it also might be the back extending forward. I wouldn't stress too much about it but with these cartoon-like styles I can never tell whether or not realism is wanted in the general style the artist is using. Hope I helped. c:
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Thank you so much for the review ^^ I really appreciate the input
though I would like to add that the shoulders and hips hold a bit of a personal meaning like the rest of the piece. I grew up as a girl who always thought her shoulders were too wide, and now that I've transferred to male I absolutely hate my hips.
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Ah! I also have wide hips, As a gender fluent person I can completely understand.Β
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The saturation of the color red is the first thing I notice when looking at this photograph. The chest are red. her heart is red. and only her heart is red. She is had a beautiful style while standing, but not all natural; she has a visible scars and a few piercings. (These are quite attractive.) I also shapes the stomach. The scars draws attention to her skin, that stomach, and that leg, which is pierced. The natural and the artificial combine, to the effect of creating beauty. The drawer's mood is tranquil. The image has an effect, therefore, of encouraging tranquility in one who views it.
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Ahhh this was so nice to read thank you so much <3 I really appreciate it :,)
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wow! cool animation! the body looks really good.. and the hair! the face isn't my style but I love seeing different art styles than my usual. That's why I love to follow you haha and nice journal entries too.
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Lovely animation!
Also a pretty drawing, I really love seeing your art (even though I don't comment too much), I'd like you to know that. c:
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Interesting (this is the first animation I favorite)... I really like the design of the girl; I especially like the heart glows as the scars appear like she still remembers/feel the pain/suffering. Great job
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Dat's so COOL!! i would write aΒ Critique but i'm not good at explaining things.....'^^
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I love this so much, I hope my critique helped. It was really fun to do!Β
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This is a really nice piece of art with a lovely message. Lots of people have scars they don't want, but in the end all scars do heal.
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