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Published: 2015-02-20 19:54:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 855; Favourites: 75; Downloads: 0
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Description For the min-kin 's prompt of Lesson Learned. Zartan, featuring pinemartenartin 's Kismet.

It had been a rainy week, and the ground was rather moist. A lot of puddles had formed, and it was rather hard to make your way through the area if you wanted to keep your hooves dry. Zartan had found it rather impossible to do so, and had given up on trying to avoid the various wet spots scattered across the soil. He just walked through, seemingly amused by the sopping sound of his hooves sinking into the muddy earth, then being pulled out. He didn't quite enjoy the mud spatting up, though. "Bah!" he exclaimed as his hoof pulled along a splatter of mud which was sent flying into the air and hit right under his eye. "If only this stuff wasn't so cold."

Zartan then noticed another Minkin wandering near. It was Kismet, whom he had seen briefly before, but he had not yet acquinted himself with the fellow Minkin. Now he could have walked up to her and introduced himself. But seeing as Zartan was an absolute idiot at socializi- eh, seeing as how he liked to do things in an extraordinary way, that was not what happened. Zartan was always up for a little mischief, and so he snuck up to Kismet, slowly approaching as he kept an eye on the puddles near her. He saw one right next to Kismet. "Perfect", he thought. "If I keep sneaking up carefully, then suddenly charge and take a leap right into that puddle as she stands there... Oh boy, this will be great." He snickered at the thought of Kismet covered from head to hoof in mud, and moved closer.

Finally, he thought it was the perfect moment for his charge. So suddenly, he jumped up, and started running forward. Kismet did not seem to notice. He looked at her absent-minded expression in triumph, and was about to make the leap to the puddle, as his hoof was janked away from under his body, as if he had stepped on a bar of wet soap. The next thing he felt was a great splash and the sensation of cold mud entering his nostrils. Coughing and snorting and shaking his head violently, he struggled to get up immediately, and failed multiple times as his hooves kept slipping away on the muddy mess. He didn't even hear what the other Minkin said - or did he try his best not to hear anything? - and he escaped in a hasty trot, slipping and stumbling and with a blurry vision, trying to get the bits of mud out of his eyes and nose.

Kismet was too stunned to follow him, and just watched him leave with a mix of astonished and worried feelings. Then, as she realised what had just happened, and she saw him move away so hastily yet clumsily, she couldn't hold back a laugh. The poor rascal had failed to execute his prank, and was the one who ended up filthy and wet instead. Lesson learned? Probably...

pinemartenartin drew a picture for this prompt too, except with Japur:   Go check it out

This took so long to draw, but I kinda like this picture a lot.

Made with DeviantArt muro .
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Comments: 30

Roxalew [2015-02-25 07:09:56 +0000 UTC]

OH! That poor poor guy

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Vuurstern In reply to Roxalew [2015-02-25 09:40:21 +0000 UTC]

Yea D:

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Roxalew In reply to Vuurstern [2015-03-04 08:05:07 +0000 UTC]

^^

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quirkyorangetiger [2015-02-23 17:09:32 +0000 UTC]

I'm always Kismet in this sort of thing
                  

I've learnt from experience though

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Vuurstern In reply to quirkyorangetiger [2015-02-23 18:13:37 +0000 UTC]

I see

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JayLights [2015-02-22 00:52:02 +0000 UTC]

the pink one is me as a minkin and the blue one is you 

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Vuurstern In reply to JayLights [2015-02-22 09:30:10 +0000 UTC]

Accurate.

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JayLights In reply to Vuurstern [2015-02-23 13:52:02 +0000 UTC]

Very.

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L-y-n-e-a [2015-02-21 18:54:19 +0000 UTC]

It's nice to see that you're drawing Zartan again and not giving him away.
And this picture is just awesome, I really love the story that you wrote for it. xD Poor Zartan though

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Vuurstern In reply to L-y-n-e-a [2015-02-21 19:49:50 +0000 UTC]

Yea, I was considering an offer that was very tempting, but after thinking on it for three days the thought made me sick. I pretty much know I couldn't trade him away now, even if I wanted the thing I would get in return
Thanks so much!

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L-y-n-e-a In reply to Vuurstern [2015-02-22 17:10:24 +0000 UTC]

I know that feeling, I just can't give away my characters even if I don't use them. xD
You're welcome ^^

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Vuurstern In reply to L-y-n-e-a [2015-02-22 17:11:31 +0000 UTC]

Same, there always is that connection

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L-y-n-e-a In reply to Vuurstern [2015-02-22 17:18:39 +0000 UTC]

Haha yeah And always that thought "maybe I want to use it in the future again" xDD

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Vuurstern In reply to L-y-n-e-a [2015-02-22 17:19:35 +0000 UTC]

Yep And just the personality you have for it and
tyhbythbyjhyu

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L-y-n-e-a In reply to Vuurstern [2015-02-22 17:46:54 +0000 UTC]

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Ymia-the-cheetah [2015-02-21 10:44:15 +0000 UTC]

Zartan is so perf omigawd

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Vuurstern In reply to Ymia-the-cheetah [2015-02-21 10:49:25 +0000 UTC]

I know right, precious bae ;u;

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34retro-gaming [2015-02-21 02:16:45 +0000 UTC]

How did you make sparkles with muro?:0 Awesome it's so cute!

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Vuurstern In reply to 34retro-gaming [2015-02-21 09:35:42 +0000 UTC]

I used the sketch tool and made it very small, then drew little crosses
Thank you!

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34retro-gaming In reply to Vuurstern [2015-02-21 18:46:32 +0000 UTC]

Oh
Np

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tulua [2015-02-20 22:10:20 +0000 UTC]

very cute

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Vuurstern In reply to tulua [2015-02-20 22:13:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank you c:

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CelestialRainicorn [2015-02-20 20:23:31 +0000 UTC]

Wow it's quite colorful

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Vuurstern In reply to CelestialRainicorn [2015-02-20 20:25:07 +0000 UTC]

Indeed They are quite colourful characters.

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pinemartenartin [2015-02-20 20:16:39 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha oh man, this is awesome! You did a great job with the expressions, and I love the story you wrote to go with it! I also loved watching the video draw; I might have to try the muro feature! Thanks again for being my prompt partner!

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Vuurstern In reply to pinemartenartin [2015-02-20 20:19:32 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much, I'm really glad to hear you like it ^^
Muro is fun to draw in, I enjoy it way too much!
You're very welcome, and thank you too, I enjoyed your part a lot and it was nice to draw Kismet again!

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ll-Coffee-ll [2015-02-20 19:56:35 +0000 UTC]

Oh my gosh, poor Minkin xD

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Vuurstern In reply to ll-Coffee-ll [2015-02-20 19:57:29 +0000 UTC]

He deserved it, but I guess his ego might be a bit dented now.

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ll-Coffee-ll In reply to Vuurstern [2015-02-20 19:59:24 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha this is for sure

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Vuurstern In reply to ll-Coffee-ll [2015-02-20 20:00:36 +0000 UTC]

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