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Description ArtIII 5th Six Weeks Assignment 1

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EDIT////Cleaned it up a bit, miraculously, considering that I don't have a PS. xDDD


NGGGHHHH I THINK STARFIGHTER IS TAKING OVER MY LIFE FFFFFFFFF. AND I STILL CAN'T BELIEVE I FINISHED THIS THE NIGHT THAT HAMMIE POSTED A PAGE. IT WAS LIKE. PHENOMENAL. TOTAL COINCIDENCE. SERENDIPITY DUDE.

In a sad attempt to escape my imprisonment (my mom grounded me from drawing. FROM DRAWING, WHAT.), I drew STARFIGHTER. For my art assignment. .___. I'm a pitiful being. -sobsob-

I actually started doodling at 6PM on Tuesday, the night before my assignment was due, and I was like, "man, I wish I could draw something I really wanted instead of this stupid project." Commence with the brainstorm and BAM! I sketched out two thumbnail drawings of Cain and Abel, unintentionally. You could probably guess that I used them for class (and if you couldn't, I fear for your mental health). It took until 1 to finish it. x___x Shading was a pain in the ass, but it was worth it. : )

Argh, but I'm so disappointed. My teacher didn't like it at all, and she scolded me for not using my original characters. She didn't mind when I drew YJ, so why now?? Is it because she doesn't think it's my style? Honestly, this is probably the closest I'll get to "my style" when I go into art class. She hasn't seen anything yet. IT'S JUST....ARGH. I get it, I'm influenced, but it wasn't that bad. I mean, I didn't use references or anything. It doesn't look ANYTHING like her style; it was a challenge enough to make the characters recognizable. I don't know if this is a valid excuse, but I'm an imitator. I tend to do better at copying other people's styles and concepts than when I try to develop them myself, because, well.....everybody likes the pro's work better. That's all. .______.

I'LL STOP COMPLAINING NOW. llllOTL


The following paragraph(s) is what I was required to write in order to explain the motive behind my work. It's kind of annoying really, because I really like to see people's interpretation first, without the little background info. :/

"Safe Port in a Storm"
In a (perhaps fruitless) attempt to kill two birds with one stone [I have to make 2 drawings per 2 weeks], I created a pair of pages which could be read in a sequence, or separately if you wish: the first, "Safe Port in a Storm," and then "Scary Animals." I wanted to use these themes in a non-literal sense, but figurative language requires....language, so it inspired me to make a comic --- something that conveys both art and an adequate amount of dialogue. These pieces [pages 1 and 2] are unlike the other sketchbook assignments I've done considering that previously I would draw a single scene with inserted dialogue. I hope they are to your liking. : )
These two characters are Cain and Abel, named cleverly for their completely opposite personalities. Their story is set in a space war in which their main goal is to obtain territory (AKA other planets) for colonization. I admit, these two are not my original idea at all, however, I felt compelled to draw this comic because the nature of the original STARFIGHTER comic intrigued me. I wanted to portray their characters as obviously as possibly, more than anything else actually, since their creator [HamletMachine] did such a wonderful job in doing so in her own work. Hopefully I did them justice! : D
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Perhaps I should elaborate on how these relate to the themes. The first page I had used the title itself in the speech. It was meant to be figurative, although it could certainly be examined in a literal sense. In the middle of a space war, there are no "safe havens", and Cain's works allude to the notion that he won't become Abel's "safe haven" either. From the beginning, Cain is ruthless, merciless. He obviously doesn't provide comfort nor sympathy for Abel.


On another note, happy birthday HamletMachine!
I don't even know how I didn't realize this until now lllllorz

STARFIGHTER(c)*HamletMachine
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Comments: 10

HamletMachine [2011-03-28 02:41:10 +0000 UTC]

Aww, sweetheart! These pages are amazing! Haha, I don't know-- if I was your teacher, A++ all the way! I really love the top panel and how you drew the space.. but also that you change perspectives to keep the narrative dynamic! Plus, you have such a lovely, soft style! Thank you so much for this fantastic gift, darling! You're awesome!

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vythefirst In reply to HamletMachine [2011-03-29 20:48:52 +0000 UTC]

Ahhh, thank you for your kind words!

I know this isn't really your forte, but I was kind of wondering.... Do you have any suggestions for making a traditional comic page (for example, using color pencils or ink) more professional looking? Or is it just better/easier/more efficient to CG?

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chaos-of-vinnie [2011-03-27 15:56:36 +0000 UTC]

Cool. Nice work I like the lines

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vythefirst In reply to chaos-of-vinnie [2011-03-29 20:34:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! : D

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FillDeLaDouleur [2011-03-26 05:13:05 +0000 UTC]

your mom grounded you
seriously
;_;

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vythefirst In reply to FillDeLaDouleur [2011-03-26 15:11:20 +0000 UTC]

YES, YES SHE DID.

But my grounding has lifted. : )

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FillDeLaDouleur In reply to vythefirst [2011-03-26 17:10:36 +0000 UTC]

OKAY GOOD :3

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vythefirst In reply to FillDeLaDouleur [2011-03-27 03:50:57 +0000 UTC]

LET US CELEBRATE!

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FillDeLaDouleur In reply to vythefirst [2011-03-27 06:05:11 +0000 UTC]

Awwww yea :D
-dance-

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vythefirst In reply to FillDeLaDouleur [2011-03-29 20:23:21 +0000 UTC]


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