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This looks near-perfect for me. My only gripe are that the eyes look...weird. It's like they're either too tiny or too far apart, yet they line with the nostrils (which is what my drawing teacher told me to do when drawing a face).
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Oh wow what a harsh critique from above but eh you get them and you handled it well, and even fixed a few mistakes he/she pointed out.
I'm not much for Star Trek unlike my dad and grandfather who are obsessed with it (my grandfather actually has a bookshelf filled with their vcr versions or dvds of the show) but i really like the shading and the way the characters are placed. And to make someone think you copy-pasted the star trek logo, yet you didn't, shows you did a good job! And as long as the commissioner is satisfied, that's all that really matters.
Good work, keep it up.
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haha yeah mebbe some people are really just hard to please 
seriously I havn't watch any episode from the show, I only got to watch the movie hahaha... anyway thanks thanks for keeping up the morale high!
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I see problems with it but really wouldn't give it such a bad critique as
Trekies, just can't satisfy em.
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nah its ok! hahahaha i think made a little mistakes on their colors
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Honestly? Not all to impressed. I mean the lines are good, but the details are very off (I should know, I was involved in the gathering of references for this commission) The uniform colours are off, badly, the Comm badges are too small and not even on similar locations on each characters uniform. You seemed to miss the fact that Ben Walker is an older man showing his age and it honestly looks like you copy-pasta'd the left corner logo from the Comic reference.
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Im really sorry for that, anyway I have shown how the pencils and the inks to =M1A2Tanker but he approved on it... if there some revisions on this he should've complain , secondly thelogo was just a free for the commission, logo art on this wasn't paid... It took me a lot of time re tracing the star trek logo...
Anyway you still look at this commission awful am really sorry for that.... if you think this won't work at all please feel free to advice =M1A2Tanker to cancel the second commission.
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Do not worry good sir, there was nothing wrong with the pencils and inks at all, which was why it was approved. I have no problem with keeping the second commission with you at all.
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I greatly appreciate your willingness to make a last minute adjustment.
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hey its all ok! its my pleasure
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if you have revisions on the colors you can note me the corrections. . . .
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I think you're missing the point. Tank approved your lines, the lines were ok, the problems here are most of the details. The fact that Ben and Slain's uniforms are purple and pink, when the collars should be red, shoulders indigo, and rest a very dark grey. That Ben's hair should be gray because he's old not a light blond. That the Comm badges should be larger and look like the DS9 one in the upper left corner, not the TNG one.
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ok then imma fix it ....
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I realize I may have come across as overly harsh. Not my intent really. I just felt it should have been pointed out, considering the details had been provided at the get go. I may have come across as an ass, if so, I do apologize, the over all intent of my comments was not to harm, but point out the errors.
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