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Published: 2010-02-11 19:44:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 216; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
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And now the macabre question arises,How to kill you with my artful devices.
Flail? Morningstar? Or sword?
In your last moments I'd not want you bored.
The flail I'm rather sure you'll agree,
Is barbaric. I'll save you that discourtesy.
The morningstar I feel much too imprecise,
Nay, I'll use the sword, it's delightful to slice!
Come now, don't look all folorn,
You've not cried like this since you were born.
Don't you see? In highlighting your vulnerablity,
I bestow in you a most poignant humility.
You have nothing! No control, no power,
So please relax, there's no need to cower.
Haha, see just there your abdomen aquiver?
I do believe I've just perforated your liver.
Anyway, back to the point, which is currently inside
You. Haha, your pancreas is trying to hide!
What was I saying? Ah yes, a profound disillusionment
Of every single thing you thought important.
I'd take your place if only I could,
Or later swap roles, please know that I would!
But you'll be much too dead, I'm afraid,
Fear not, for this service I don't expect to be paid.
Truth be told I rather enjoy this,
The splutter of your flesh as I carve a piece.
And the beautiful colour of your viscera sanguine,
Oh what a carnivorous ecstacy I'm in!
Your last breath now, and do try to remember,
The purpose of this exercise. You're now a member
Of the enlightened few, who tortured to the last
Find a new kind of peace, and escape from the past.
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Comments: 2
Jakkar [2010-04-22 00:47:56 +0000 UTC]
You definitely enjoy the words 'sanguine' and 'viscera' at least as much as I do.
This piece has a better feel than Violence, because it disjoints and derails half way into a maniacal rambling, foresaking rhyme but gaining an edge of the psychotic, becoming a dramatic spoken-word rather than a song. It would be suitable for the stage, were it a little more subtly worded.
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Jakkar In reply to Jakkar [2010-04-22 00:50:18 +0000 UTC]
I chose to read this aloud to myself after writing the comment, I think you might enjoy the result. Hop on a program that supports voice chat someday, I'd like to know if I captured it correctly.
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