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Published: 2011-06-22 19:41:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 738; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 1
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Honeykit stumbled out of the nursery when she heard the warriors come back. They had gone out on a really important patrol today. As the little kit raced towards the camp entrance, she suddenly stopped. The air was tense. She knew that something was wrong, it had to be. As the warriors entered the camp, she immediately began to search for her parents. All the cats of the patrol passed by. She looked at them, no Gingerfur, no Frostcloud. When she was about to give up, the last warriors entered the clearing. Three warriors, dragging two limp bodies. The one on the right was silver, the other ginger. Honeykit's eyes grew wide. Gingerfur and Frostcloud were left at the middle of the clearing, cats gathered around them to pay their last respects. A she-cat brushed Honeykit's fur. 'They were really brave and fought well, but the mountain lion was too strong for them' she said. Honeykit didn't want to listen. The kit ran to her fathers side and then to her mothers. 'Wake up! Wake up!' her cries filled the clearing. She sank into her mothers bloody red fur and cried. As she did that, the stars reflected in Gingerfur's misty eyes and Honeykit felt how two warm pelts brushed her fur, just before two new stars appeared at silverpelt.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
This is how Honeykit, my RapidClan kitteh, lost both of her parents. They died when their patrol bumped into a mountain lion. There was no other option then try to fight and lure the beast out of the territory, but this went wrong.
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SailormoonxDbzxCats In reply to Wazilikie [2011-06-27 19:13:53 +0000 UTC]
Your icon is very cute :3
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Wazilikie In reply to SailormoonxDbzxCats [2011-06-27 20:29:08 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, Breezebolt made it. ;3
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M-a-r-z-y [2011-06-24 14:37:14 +0000 UTC]
Thats really sad...poor Honeykit TT.TT
But the picture is really great =3
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Haileymander [2011-06-23 00:41:53 +0000 UTC]
Awwww, thats so sad! But cats don't have teer glands XD
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Wazilikie In reply to Haileymander [2011-06-23 09:19:45 +0000 UTC]
I know, just to make it more.. sad x'D
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Haileymander In reply to Wazilikie [2011-06-23 14:31:05 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I agree. It's kind of Ironic that both of our parents died on a patrol...
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Riverheart95 [2011-06-22 23:05:44 +0000 UTC]
aww!!! poor honeykit!!! but i'm kinda glad i'm not the only kit without parents. but i'll put a picture of brushkit up soon
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Wazilikie In reply to Riverheart95 [2011-06-23 09:19:03 +0000 UTC]
I'd love to see your picture of Brushkit :3
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Riverheart95 In reply to Wazilikie [2011-06-23 11:26:19 +0000 UTC]
i'm going to put up a pucture of her soon
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Riverheart95 In reply to Riverheart95 [2011-06-23 11:53:32 +0000 UTC]
i got it up ^_^ i kinda feel bad doing this to her, but that's her story
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Dreamuur [2011-06-22 22:25:52 +0000 UTC]
omg
i read it and thats really sad
i almost cried lol
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Wazilikie In reply to Dreamuur [2011-06-23 09:18:30 +0000 UTC]
Aww.
I love drama but it's still hard to do this with your characters.
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Dreamuur In reply to Wazilikie [2011-06-23 21:29:03 +0000 UTC]
ya but i stile
think you did a great job ^^
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Wazilikie In reply to Sparrow-puff [2011-06-22 19:59:57 +0000 UTC]
I know D:
I feel terrible for giving her this history.
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Sparrow-puff In reply to Wazilikie [2011-06-22 20:10:13 +0000 UTC]
Aww.. I love her < 33 I spiltted my cats up XD The two brothers. One is in Tideclan and Stag is in Rapidclan lol xD
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Wazilikie In reply to Sparrow-puff [2011-06-22 20:11:05 +0000 UTC]
Ah, well it gives you more inspiration I think
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Sparrow-puff In reply to Wazilikie [2011-06-22 20:14:52 +0000 UTC]
No xD Your is mich better I love Honeykit < 33
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Wazilikie In reply to Sparrow-puff [2011-06-22 20:16:05 +0000 UTC]
Haha thank you
It will be a lot more fun when she's an apprentice. Right now I can hardly RP with her.
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CrimsonOctopus [2011-06-22 19:44:31 +0000 UTC]
The expression is sending mixed messages. The eyes are filled with tears, but the mouth is smiling. If you cover up the eyes, you'll see what I mean.
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Wazilikie In reply to CrimsonOctopus [2011-06-22 19:51:42 +0000 UTC]
Little mistake of mine.
I hope it's better now.
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CrimsonOctopus In reply to Wazilikie [2011-06-22 20:10:49 +0000 UTC]
Much better! Good work.
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Wazilikie In reply to CrimsonOctopus [2011-06-22 20:12:23 +0000 UTC]
Thank you
And thanks for the critic.
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