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“Why do they have to make these damn suits so uncomfortable?” Ggrrby motioned and squawked in irritation. “I can hardly even spread my wings in this thing!”“If you rather go out naked, that’s fine to me,” Kbrddsss chirped in a dry tone. She looked out into the desert environment that was the surface of the Moon, known as Ytkddoffb in her species’ tongue. The cold environment of the satellite glared back at her, as if daring her to venture out of the protection of her ship. “But I’m putting on this suit for my own safety.”
Ggrrby attempted to twitch his wings in dismissal, but found the thick protective suit too restrictive do so. Instead, Ggrrby resorted to snarling, “It doesn’t mean that the engineers can’t make a more comfortable suit. Those guys are all just lazy live-birthers.”
Kbrddsss only locked her helmet on her head and said in an exasperated tone, “Come on, we have a video to film.” Ggrrby clicked his teeth together in response and secured his helmet as well. He then walked toward the tightly sealed door that kept both of them separated from the cold depths of space.
After shooting a glance at Kbrddsss, Ggrrby unlocked the door to the Moon. For a second, a small gust of wind flew out of the ship as the air escaped into space. Then, silence. Ggrrby turned to Kbrddsss and asked, “Is the camera ready?”
Kbrddsss lowered her head for a second and used her claw to awkwardly turn on the camera attached to the side of her helmet, “Yep, feel free to start.”
Ggrrby snapped his jaws in the suit, looked at Kbrddsss and said as loudly and articulately as he could, “Well, Cttlops of Rtdr, we have just landed on Ytkddoffb.” He then looked out into the open lunar wasteland. Folding his body as if to launch into flight, Ggrrby said, “This is one small flight for a Cttlop,” he proceeded to launch from the ship and glided for a few seconds in the vacuum before landing about 10 feet away, “One giant flight for Cttlop-kind.”
“Don’t be so reckless, show-off” Kbrddsss hissed. “You could have sent yourself into deep space.”
“Oh you’re no fun,” Ggrrby growled in annoyance. He then looked over to the quiet expanse. “I wonder if we’ll find any alien technology here.”
Kbrddsss remained silent for a short time. Ggrrby’s eyes snapped back at her. He couldn’t see her body due to her wearing the suit, but he could tell she was flashing out a hysterical laugh. “Oh yeah sure, Ggrrby,” Kbrddsss chirped sarcastically, “We’ll find portable radios, colored televisions, and slow-moving aircrafts! It’s all just waiting for us in the next crater.” She then became silent, but took on a position that clearly showed that she was flashing out a wave of laughter.
Gggrrby felt his wings get hot from embarrassment. In sever annoyance, he yipped, “I was just making a comment. I don’t actually think we’ll find anything.”
Kbrddsss chirped, “Come on space flier, be a bit more optimistic! Maybe we’ll end up finding something and we’ll give the viewers something exciting to see!” She then strode across the landscape with determination. Ggrrby followed at the exact same speed, but with much less bravado than before.
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7 minutes later, Ggrrby ended up walking in front of Kbrddsss, in order to give the potential views a sight of their celestial neighbor. While she first had a difficult time acclimatizing to the alien gravity-no preparation could get her ready for the weightlessness she felt-by now she was fairly adept at walking across the surface. She continued to think to herself up until she hear Ggrrby’s voice squawk through the speakers, “What in the darkest depths of the sea is that?”
Kbrddsss snapped her head up and said indignantly, “Watch your gullet! This is being filmed publicly!” Ggrrby didn’t seem to hear her though, seeming focused on the ground. Kbrddsss strode next to him and snapped her head to the ground. To her surprise, what she saw was 7 parallel rows depressed into the ground. Compared to the otherwise irregular landscape, this looked almost as if it was Cttlop-made…
“Do you think some other Cttlop got here first?” Kbrddsss asked to no one in particular. She looked up to spot the culprit’s getaway vehicle. To her dismay, she saw nothing within sight. Just as she finished looking 360 degrees around her, Ggrrby said, “No, I don’t think so. We would’ve probably heard radio chatter about the incident if that was the case,” he paused. “It probably is just some fluke. I mean, Ytkddoffb’s been around for 4.5 billion years, so this print could form.” His voice said he wasn’t convinced.
Kbrddsss gave a sharp jaw snap as an affirmative, although she had similar doubts that Ggrrby had. She suddenly got to thinking of the aliens Ggrrby had mentioned earlier, and how they could have visited the natural satellite to analyze the inhabitants of Rtdr. Had they come here to simply research, or to plan an atta-
She tightened her jaw and changed her skin color in attempt to shut out the seemingly irrational thoughts. After suppressing the ideas, she looked up and saw that Ggrrby had walked off into a large crater, as if to investigate something else. Kbrddsss said through her radio, “Where are you going Ggrrby?” The accompanying cosmonaut replied, “There’s something else here, it looks like…”
“Looks like what?”
“By Lord Dovakin… Kbrddsss, you should get over here,” Ggrrby finally responded, “Now.”
Kbrddsss moved as fast as the suit allowed her, occasionally making flap movements in order to move even more quickly. When she reached the lip of the crater, she stopped in her tracks. Inside the crater were Ggrrby, and two peculiar large and heavy metal doors that showed evidence of being battered by several meteorites. She scrambled down the crater and walked up behind Ggrrby, in total silence. The large Blast doors looked as if they once could withstand a volcanic explosion with little problem, but after who knows how long, the doors looked as if they would break at the slightest nudge.
Just was that thought had entered her mind, Ggrrby suddenly slammed into the doors, snapping the terribly weakened armor and sending them flying inward. Kbrddsss suddenly jumped with a squawk, interrogating, “What are you doing?!”
“I’m going to get to the bottom of this and find out what is going on here”, Ggrrby said stonily as he regained his balance.
“You idiot,” Kbrddsss snarled in anger, “You could have ruptured your suit by doing that! Be more careful!” She then peered into the dark cavern that the doors had flown into. As her eyes adapted to the darkness, she spotted something that took her voice away. The cavern was obviously designed, being unnaturally rectangular with the exception of occasional areas where the walls collapsed and revealed the natural rock formations behind the artificially refined metals. But what was inside the construct was even more astonishing. Mechanisms that seemed straight out of a science fiction were slung all over the area, most seeming in disrepair. Some of the technologies in there weren’t even recognizable, their use being totally unknown to her.
She didn’t dare walk in the cavern, afraid that one of the mechanisms would destroy her. Ggrrby suddenly jabbed his head forward and said, “Look, one of the aliens is lying there dead!”
Kbrddsss snapped her head in the designated direction and felt her heart leap to her gullet. Down in the darkness, one of the aliens lay on the ground with most of the fluid drained from its body, frozen in its final and failed attempt to reach the doors for salvation. After a few seconds of looking at the extraterrestrial, Kbrddsss suddenly realized something.
“This isn’t an alien,” she thought out loud, “It’s a Tuckfr!”
It was true that it looked nothing like how any of the images illustrated them, with them usually being big, hairy and crested animals, but the skeleton matched a Tuckfr perfectly. Vaguely, she heard Ggrrby say, “Turn off the recorder!” but she did not respond, trapped in her own thoughts. If we weren’t the first to reach space, then how did the Tuckfr get rendered extinct?
She looked up into the endless expanse of space with a new look. Suddenly the shining stars no longer looked beautiful. They now looked absolutely menacing. Each one of those seemingly innocent stars could hold a potential threat, just waiting for the chance to attack again. We weren’t the first, Kbrddsss thought.
We weren’t the first.
These, in case you couldn’t guess, are the descendants of the Tepazepies of Not of this World, although they’ll probably keep the same name do to my laziness. Here, the Tepazepies reach the space age, doing their first successful land on the Moon. While the flight is merely planned to be propaganda, it becomes so much more…
I’m thinking that finding humanity’s lost relics on not only the Moon, but on Mars, Titan, Io, Europa, and around Neptune and Uranus would have huge implications on how the Tepazepies will interact with all things having to do with space. They’ll probably be very paranoid and will attempt to mask any sign of their existence for centuries to come, for a good reason of course. When it comes to their civilization in general, I think the state of the world will definitely have an effect on them. Since they can fly long distances and since the world is much more flooded than today-causing the fragmentation of many continents, communities will likely not be into the business of warring over territories when they are already so fragmented. They’ll probably be more into trade, and thus might be considered a bit greedier than us. Also, I think the Tepazepies will be a little less into playing fair during wars than us, since we’ve been in it so long that we form up rules to make the wars more official than before. But, once again, I don’t think wars would be a common place for them. What I do think will be more of a common place are plagues, as the frequent trades will lead to diseases being transported to unprotected areas, where the viruses would ravage the populations.
Artistically, I didn’t want to color this, so I just used line work to make the illusion of shade. I think I really got the perceptive right this time around, since I edited some of my work so that the walls and horizon all met at a two point reference area.
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Comments: 27
MistaSilentKiller [2013-06-22 18:30:40 +0000 UTC]
What would happen if a Tepazepy meets a real life Human?
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Whachamacallit1 In reply to MistaSilentKiller [2013-06-22 23:28:40 +0000 UTC]
Well since all that remains of actual humans are just fossils, not much out of the ordinary would happen.
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MistaSilentKiller In reply to Whachamacallit1 [2013-06-23 08:24:38 +0000 UTC]
but what if?
lets just say a time travelling human
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Marmot-of-Doom [2012-05-06 06:30:07 +0000 UTC]
Wow, thats a really original story, you should make a noval out of it seriously!! "She tightened her jaw and changed her skin color in attempt to-" wait a second...they can change their skin color?? Interesting
But I don't quite get why the fact that humans went into space before them is so bad, I mean they are extinct anyway. Or is it the possibility that they survived in another star system? That still wouldn't mean that we are going to be hostile towards them. I'm pretty sure people would find it incredible and exciting if it would be discovered that dinosaurs did it into space... right?
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Whachamacallit1 In reply to Marmot-of-Doom [2012-05-06 15:14:11 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the compliment! But I don't think I'll make a novel out of this; I don't have the skills to go on for 100s of pages
And yes, they change color in a similar way that cuttlefish do. Just a little adaptation I put in to make them cooler.
But about your question, the thing is that the Tepazepies knew humans existed, but since our city-or any sign of our achievements-were long since destroyed on Earth, the Tepazepies just guess we were about as smart as a chimp and were just a really successful species of animal. The thing that horrifies them is that we were so intelligent and powerful that we have stations throughout the solar system, but that did absolutely nothing to stop our localized extinction. And I guess there might be other humans in other star systems, but they're not likely to be Homo sapiens by this point in the future.
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Marmot-of-Doom In reply to Whachamacallit1 [2012-05-07 06:18:45 +0000 UTC]
Ah ok, so it's more the fear that this could happen to them as well. So they are deciding to keep their discovery as a secret now and the public and their paleontologists will never find out about this?
It's weird that they wouldn't find any remains of our civilization other than our bones, stuff like furniture, tools and machinery could fossilize as well and there is lots of plastic stuff around now, which can't be decomposed or corroded by any germs as far as I know. On the other hand I don't know much about fossilization XD
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Whachamacallit1 In reply to Marmot-of-Doom [2012-05-07 14:56:12 +0000 UTC]
I guess I must have not made this clear in the story, but this was all being filmed live. So every Tepazepy who was watching their version of TV knows that there was another sophont species on Earth.
And for the possible fossils, well, we don't build anything on very fossil-friendly areas because those places tend to be inhospitable. Our cities are places in fairly humid area that are precariously close to the ocean and have long since been obliterated by a rise in sea level after Antarctica moved North of the south pole. Our interior places were either placed in humid area, and thus were quickly degraded into rust, or were so sparsely placed that the chance of fossilization is pretty low. Now plastic is the one thing that does stay for a while, but mechanical weathering grinds plastic into dust, and judging by the fact that a bacteria has already evolved to consume plastic, I would not be surprised that in the future they'll be even more species of bacteria that have evolved intop plastic eating bacteria. All this combined has pretty wiped out all but one piece of evidence of our successes: animal and plant redistribution. Essentially, there are a lot of animals that live on islands that have no signs of their presence prior to our existence, and this alone had confused the Tepazepy paleontologists for a very long time.
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Marmot-of-Doom In reply to Whachamacallit1 [2012-05-08 01:36:39 +0000 UTC]
Aah ok, now I get it XD So it was a bit like our moonlanding, they filmed it live too, right? Thanks for your patients by the way
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electreel [2012-03-16 19:19:08 +0000 UTC]
What an incredible story! I haven´t seen such an original stuff for a very long time. And you did a good job with the picture. Would you mind if I tried to colorize it?
PD: All this reminded me of a book I´ve read some time ago called Inherit the Stars, by James P. Hogan, in which a 50,000 year old human body inside a spacesuit is discovered in the moon surface.
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Whachamacallit1 In reply to electreel [2012-03-16 20:40:08 +0000 UTC]
Oh wow, that would be great if you colored this! I'm pretty sure you can think of how this would look colored, and I bet some of your ideas are outstanding, but if you need any help, just ask!
And no, I haven't heard of that book. I'll probably have to buy it though, sounds interesting!
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electreel In reply to Whachamacallit1 [2012-04-04 12:27:40 +0000 UTC]
Well, first of all I'm not able to guess what is under their helmets.
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Whachamacallit1 In reply to electreel [2012-04-04 14:05:23 +0000 UTC]
Well at least when I was making this, I didn't think that the head would be visible inside the helmet. Looking at a real life astronaut helmet, it seems as if the visor reflects almost all the light off of it, and the head of the astronaut is completely hidden. I mean, unless you think it'll look better with the actually head.
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electreel In reply to Whachamacallit1 [2012-04-13 18:38:34 +0000 UTC]
Allright... So what it is being reflected on the right tepazepie´s helmet? ... a human skeleton somehow?
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Whachamacallit1 In reply to electreel [2012-04-13 18:44:17 +0000 UTC]
Matter of fact, yes! It's supposed to be a dehydrated husk of a human. If you're wondering by what I mean, I mean that I'm thinking the husk looks like this [link] or this [link] .
But it probably would be best if it was in the position of trying to crawl toward the blast doors. Oh, and feel free to give what gender the corpse originally was, I'm fine with either.
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electreel In reply to Whachamacallit1 [2012-04-14 09:11:16 +0000 UTC]
Right One last thing... which colour do their spacesuits have?
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Whachamacallit1 In reply to electreel [2012-04-14 13:12:11 +0000 UTC]
I was thinking white, but feel free to make it more jazzy if you want.
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platypus12 [2012-03-08 04:59:34 +0000 UTC]
Oh, sorry. I made a mistake about that part about the contest.
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platypus12 [2012-03-08 04:57:08 +0000 UTC]
That…was…amazing. Amazing. Is this by any chance for that contest in Age of Avians?
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Whachamacallit1 In reply to platypus12 [2012-03-08 05:01:48 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much! It was originally intended to be one, but I thought the contest was finished by the time I got this up. If it isn't though, than yes, it is!
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platypus12 In reply to Whachamacallit1 [2012-03-08 05:06:49 +0000 UTC]
Oh, great then! There was a bit of a delay, but I'll be ending it in a few days. You came just in time.
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kargaroc586 [2012-03-08 03:57:33 +0000 UTC]
This is a really cool story!
If a bit depressing, for me atleast
But still cool!
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Whachamacallit1 In reply to kargaroc586 [2012-03-08 04:11:23 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! And it's understandable that you would feel a bit depressed by this. The localized extinction of humans in the Solar system can be a pretty uncomfortable subject.
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AJBrownDesigns [2012-03-07 22:17:52 +0000 UTC]
KOOL! how long did it take you to write this?
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Whachamacallit1 In reply to AJBrownDesigns [2012-03-07 22:27:28 +0000 UTC]
I don't know exactly, but I'm going to guess it took about 3 hours-but that was broken up by homework and youtube videos, so the actual writing times was probably 45 minutes.
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Whachamacallit1 In reply to Dragonthunders [2012-03-07 21:35:34 +0000 UTC]
They're wearing space suits. I based them slightly off real space suits.
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