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WhisperInTheShadows — Taste of Bliss
Published: 2004-09-07 02:21:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 34; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Ah vampires...fascinating creatures, though I may have a few errors on this pic, as usual critiquie me! I wish to learn to do better at this!Related content
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The highlights on the coat are well done, as well as the hair. Only one thing really bothers me about this picture. It is the vampire's mouth. If that is blood coming out of it then why is the rest of his mouth stained with blood? If he had been feeding then his fangs would have taken on a coladoscopic appearance between the white of the tooth and the darker greys that would have been the blood.
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Good point...now I should point out that you have managed to become effective and giving a critique for artwork, as I said you could.
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And I suppose I'm to say thank you back, so I shall. Thank you.
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Your gratitude is accepted, but I knew I would be right anyway
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Oh really? That confident in your ability to judge? Comendable.
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Possibly not so much a confidence but rather a sort of understanding, the way you put words together, and the fact that you are a poet imply thought and observation, along with an ability to analyse. That tends to make a person capable of a critique.
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Perhaps, though I must admit I am not so sure about my 'critique' abilities as you seem to be. I am flattered by your words, thank you.
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If you can tell me what you like and don't like, and why you feel that way, you are good. You are great if you can include how you feel as well, if you include why you feel that way, you are amazing. Critique is more about honesty and self analysis than anything else, at least to me it is.
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Truer words were never spoken.
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I like it i like it!It's a good pic of a vampire. And of course his victum.^^
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