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WhisperInTheShadows — Taste of Bliss

Published: 2004-09-07 02:21:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 34; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Description Ah vampires...fascinating creatures, though I may have a few errors on this pic, as usual critiquie me! I wish to learn to do better at this!
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wordswithoutheart [2006-10-10 19:36:54 +0000 UTC]

The highlights on the coat are well done, as well as the hair. Only one thing really bothers me about this picture. It is the vampire's mouth. If that is blood coming out of it then why is the rest of his mouth stained with blood? If he had been feeding then his fangs would have taken on a coladoscopic appearance between the white of the tooth and the darker greys that would have been the blood.

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WhisperInTheShadows In reply to wordswithoutheart [2006-10-11 19:49:34 +0000 UTC]

Good point...now I should point out that you have managed to become effective and giving a critique for artwork, as I said you could.

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wordswithoutheart In reply to WhisperInTheShadows [2006-10-11 23:56:18 +0000 UTC]

And I suppose I'm to say thank you back, so I shall. Thank you.

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WhisperInTheShadows In reply to wordswithoutheart [2006-10-12 20:57:59 +0000 UTC]

Your gratitude is accepted, but I knew I would be right anyway

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wordswithoutheart In reply to WhisperInTheShadows [2006-10-12 21:57:58 +0000 UTC]

Oh really? That confident in your ability to judge? Comendable.

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WhisperInTheShadows In reply to wordswithoutheart [2006-10-12 22:11:58 +0000 UTC]

Possibly not so much a confidence but rather a sort of understanding, the way you put words together, and the fact that you are a poet imply thought and observation, along with an ability to analyse. That tends to make a person capable of a critique.

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wordswithoutheart In reply to WhisperInTheShadows [2006-10-12 22:17:15 +0000 UTC]

Perhaps, though I must admit I am not so sure about my 'critique' abilities as you seem to be. I am flattered by your words, thank you.

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WhisperInTheShadows In reply to wordswithoutheart [2006-10-12 22:51:49 +0000 UTC]

If you can tell me what you like and don't like, and why you feel that way, you are good. You are great if you can include how you feel as well, if you include why you feel that way, you are amazing. Critique is more about honesty and self analysis than anything else, at least to me it is.

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wordswithoutheart In reply to WhisperInTheShadows [2006-10-12 23:01:06 +0000 UTC]

Truer words were never spoken.

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tiger-girl [2004-09-08 01:23:22 +0000 UTC]

I like it i like it!It's a good pic of a vampire. And of course his victum.^^
Amanda

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