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WhiteRose2132 — The Confrontation (chapter 4)

Published: 2019-01-27 14:37:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 542; Favourites: 70; Downloads: 0
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Description Having repaired, as it turned out, the last shrine , Ramona was teleported on top of a huge mountain, but now it was not alone. A creature of immense size looked at Ramona from top to bottom with a very arrogant gaze."You have been on quite the journey," he grumbles. "I do not know what took you to those shrines; it was not me." I do not know what your intentions were, but you have greatly affected my mountains, stranger." He said. His voice was harsh and rolling like thunder has scared Ramona, but she dared to answer him.  "The force brought me every time to a new shrine and asked me to fix them ..... I hoped that if I helped her, I would go back home."  The owner of the mountains only kept silent, but his eyes became a little kinder. Then he replied. "Sure.....sure , but ....... who are you little stranger?" Ramona said . "I'm Ramona ....the force took me from desert " She awited that unknow creature can sent her back home ,but he said . "Ramona, hmmm ..........I'm Raaga the Wanderer and owner of the mountains .I see you're expect returning back to your home , but this is not what I'm gonna  give you now .....good intesions  should be rewarded ." Ramona gasped. "Then why did I come here?"Raaga said strictly ."Hush child, gifts first! " He said it in such a way that Ramona fell to the ground not daring to look at him. He said. "Leave the fear, you have passed all my lands , and done it by  your will or not, but a good deed ..... Receive my blessing!" The power enveloped Ramona and filled her whole being. She felt something new in herself and wanted to respond to Raaga, but in that moment she realized that she was at home among her native rocks and sands. Now everything has changed, she became stronger, and the little creature that followed her from the beginning of her journey remained with her, like a wonderful gift that  she found on her neck  .....
Base Score: 10 AP (Shaded Illustration)
+5 AP (Full Body)
+20 AP (Full/Scenic Background)
+5 AP (Personal Work Bonus)
+20 AP (NPC Bonus)
+25 AP (Event Bonus)
+10 AP (Esk Interaction Bonus: 10 AP * 1)
Total AP per submission: 101

Base Score: 4 GP (Shaded Illustration)
+2 GP (Full Body)
+6 GP (Full/Scenic Background)
+12 GP (Event Bonus) event + pallete
Total GP per submission: 27.5
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Comments: 2

Chaccra [2019-01-29 17:34:00 +0000 UTC]

This turned out amazing!*0*

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WhiteRose2132 In reply to Chaccra [2019-01-29 19:42:27 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.^^

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