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WhiteWitchsDaughter β Bio. Sheet - Rena Fox
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3/3!
Here's Rena's bio. I sure hope it's easy to understand...
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They do a bit of a harsher version, but take this as a wake up call.Β
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I am going to be straight forward and honest out of the kindness of my heart.
Its awful. The character is very weak in originality. Let me list the cliches:
-Tail's GirlfriendΒ
-dead parents
-last of species
-has pets not common in canon
-loved by everyone
-has hidden powers
-magic skills and powers at a very young age
Design wise:
I can see a pretty close resemblance to tails.Β
Outfit from the last avatar
Things out of place in the canon:
Dragons
witches
I'm just going to say it. She's a mary sue. Listed with cliche after cliche, this is another weak character in the fandom.Β
Completely redo this character with original characteristics.Β
I understand that you are probably not expecting a message after awhile, but Its my right and my best interest to tell you how a character can be improved. As well as pointing out flaws. To get my point across, I have to be blunt.Β
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hey can u send pics of kalad, haku, kikki. supernova, shelly, and heather
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Why don't you look in my gallery? I don't have refs for them but I do have pics.
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never mind i'll just use reen, kalad, heather, and shelly srry
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Ok, the stories I come up with pale in comparison to this!
NICE BACKGROUND STORY!
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Thanks Jane! ^^
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your welcome! ^^
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XDD My name is in there. lol. XDD
Cool bio. :3 I'm gonna make a ref sheet of my characters soonish too.
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Really? I didn't realise XD
Cool!
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xD Yep. Heather. :3
I will... Eventually...~
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XD That's two Heathers I know then
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xD That makes ... uhh.. -counts on fingers- Too many Heathers~ xD
Apparantly there are a lot of Heathers in NY. :3
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XD I'm no where near NY
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I know, you live in the UK, da?
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xDD I knew it! *shot because you told me before*
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i read stuffies on left....
rest too hard for brain DX XD
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Just cause you're not much of a reader XD
Taken a look at the script yet?
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yeah XD
and uhm ehhh...
ehhh....ehh... ^^'''''
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I should have known XD
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Hey, no super rush ^^
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Thankies ^^
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Thankies Penny
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yw ^^
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Thanks Miya ^^
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