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LavenderCorncall [2010-12-23 21:43:21 +0000 UTC]

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Well first of all I just have to say the characters are very nice and original! I like the girl's shading and clothing and same t the boy. I love the drawing style and the shading and coloring is very well it really fits the characters. I like the fact that you make each one of your characters different and oriignal. I love this comic,it always puts me un suspence to find out what happens next. I would rate this page about 4.5 star. The only flaw I saw was the hedgehog eyes were alittle big and low. Good job though I love it!

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Soniclifetime [2011-09-16 17:00:15 +0000 UTC]

Aww cute and lol X3

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XMarcieXTheXFox [2010-12-24 04:13:04 +0000 UTC]

Cute!(especially the 4th panel )

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AriannaStriker [2010-12-23 20:38:45 +0000 UTC]

lmao, i thought she was gonna kiss him. XDD they look kinda cute together. o.O just sayin'. XP lol good job! can't wait to see the next part. :3

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Nine-MileStudios [2010-12-22 23:10:22 +0000 UTC]

Gotta love the look she gives him in the fourth panel XD
Layout looks good as does the coloring and shading. And you expressions look great as well. ^^ There could have been a greater dramatic effect if a panel had been added between the fourth and fifth. Kind of a dramatic pause before she discovered the wings on his back.

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MidnightTheHedgehog1 [2010-12-22 22:14:11 +0000 UTC]

oooo something awesome is about to happen...wait wait... no that already happened when u started this comic~! X3

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LavenderCorncall [2010-12-22 17:30:20 +0000 UTC]

Awesome I love it! xD

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CelestialElement [2010-12-22 15:47:46 +0000 UTC]

She found out. Hehe... Third panal he's like what are you doing?

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Cobalt-Chaos [2010-12-22 12:53:21 +0000 UTC]

is he a mellow miran? o3o
cause i think thats what the wings mean xD
anyways that devistating stare she gives him is fucking hilarias
i almost fell out of my chair XDDDD
oh god XD
hahaha...ehh..
anyways its very funny
but also dramatic
i like it alot
awsume job fluffs =3

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Lightningstrike1313 [2010-12-22 07:40:36 +0000 UTC]

Cool

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XoX-JaneFoxy-XoX [2010-12-22 07:32:30 +0000 UTC]

Awesome as always X3

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