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Published: 2015-06-03 22:58:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 3593; Favourites: 53; Downloads: 0
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No draft of wellspring drawsthe same effusive sigh
as wildflowers on the grass
when windstorms fly
in violent, happy, gusts
through speckled shoots of blooms
and cattail reeds bent over banks
cut deep with clouding plumes.
I feel in weathered breaths
this sudden shock of spring:
then drops of rain; your parted hair
to which they cling,
and suddenly the flush
of overburdened clouds
all rushing to the drier ground
to weep their desperate joy aloud.
The dampened scent of sweet
enthralling gentle flowers
enraptured in the air,
weighed low from bowers
of starlit blossom trees
now settles on your skin
and draws between your dusted touch
to cloud the rushing blood within.
I drink of clouded wells
deep in the draining earth
where water tastes of blood
and then--of birth.
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Comments: 15
CastleOfWonders [2016-12-18 09:41:58 +0000 UTC]
I absolutely love your vivid description of nature, it reminds me of how Jeff Vandermeer wrote his Southern Reach trilogy.
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LindArtz [2016-11-23 19:16:14 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful!! Β Β Congratulations on your much deserved DD!Β Enjoy the limelight.
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pansydiv [2016-11-23 14:03:47 +0000 UTC]
I love how this is formal & yet not cryptic. Does that make sense?
I'm glad you got a DD on this; it's well deserved
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williamszm In reply to pansydiv [2016-12-14 05:45:53 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, I think that does make sense!
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pansydiv In reply to williamszm [2016-12-26 03:08:33 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad it does, at least to you <3
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ThornyEnglishRose [2015-06-03 23:12:18 +0000 UTC]
I absolutely love this - I think it's really beautiful. Lately I've been reading poetry by Keats and BrontΓ« and Rossetti, and honestly this reminds me a bit of all of them. I find the final line in each stanza particularly striking because of the powerful images. I think it's amazing!
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williamszm In reply to ThornyEnglishRose [2015-06-10 09:09:47 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! Those are all some amazing poets, so I'm honored you would compare my work to theirs.
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