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Why do the birds go on singing?
The sweet feminine voice crooned from some broken recording device within the hearts of the desolate city, its only audience that of a slender form draped in a dark cape. As the slightly distorted sound filtered through his ears, the language was parsed instantaneously into his native language. Without so much as a pause, he continued forward, his liquid-like form sliding over the ground smoothly. Turning once to the left and then the right, he took in his surroundings with nary an expression on his silver-colored face. His single grey eye never blinked, roving around as he moved through the empty streets.
He was not a being of this planet and so his stay would be brief. He had only set foot on this foreign territory because of a calling. A calling that had awoken not only him, but others from different sections of the universe. It was a call that needed answering and so, he had left his home planet immediately to travel to this distant land. The others should be close behind or possibly, already here on this rock to observe and put to rest the last of the crying souls.
Not many beings knew this and certainly not the species that previously dominated this land. But every planet has a voice and a spirit. They are sentient beings, powerful yet humble and graceful. They bless the soil and air around them, welcome new species into their embrace and allow them to live on their grounds.
Alas, there exist those that dare to exploit their open and trusting spirit. Such was true of the two-legged species that dominated this rock which they called Earth. What resources the Earth provided, they took for themselves and lusted for more. When no more could be offered, they decimated its natural landscape and carved out their own.
And so their Earth screamed of pain. But their kind did not listen. The few that did cried out for action but their pleas fell on deaf ears. Soon even the few petered out and the species called Man continued walking down their path of destruction.
Unable to put a stop to Man’s actions using their passive ways, the Earth’s screams turned to rage. Tsunamis rained down on major cities, earthquakes tore large cracks into the land, and volcano eruptions melted all their manmade structures. The Earth was cleansing itself of the ungrateful species who walked its land.
So as per the tradition of his century-old civilization and that of the others’, he had arrived to conduct a last ceremony. Moving through the destructed city, he took in the tall structures that hung limply, broken, and shattered. His eye scanned over the multitude of beings of Man, lying bloodied on the ground. Their limbs were sprawled in all manners, their two eyes opened wide in fear or in resignation as they watched the Earth take away their souls.
Why do the stars glow above?
He did not feel rage or pity for Man. Only a deep sense of melancholy. As he entered the center of the city, he threw his two hands to the sky. Whispering a few sentences in his language, he gestured a few times to the bright stars that twinkled high above, asking that they guide the souls of the taken into their embrace and bless a new species to flourish on such a beautiful land.
Don’t they know it’s the end of the world?
He touched the ground beneath him reverently, humming under his breath as he felt the life force that pulsated underneath its surface. It sang back to him of peace and tranquility, and of a fresh start. Its voice was full of anticipation, ready to begin the process of preparing its land for the new beings who would once again live on it.
Satisfied that the Earth was once again at one with the universe, he looked up, ready to leave this rock and go home. Yet something caught his eye, a movement of some sort from up ahead. He moved towards it, his eye focused on the area which he had detected the movement.
Drawing closer, he noticed a bundle of white cloth tainted with the brown soil of the land. A hand laid limply near it, its owner a being with long black hair. Its eyes stared, unmoving, at the bundle. Observing its body, he noticed how it was oriented as if this being wanted to protect whatever rested inside the mysterious white material.
His curiosity piqued, he used a single finger to unwrap the material. As it fell apart, exposing its contents, his eye widened at the sight of a small being of Man lying within. Its two legs kicked out as it squirmed uncomfortably, unused to the sudden exposure to the harsh air. The youngling stared straight at him, its black eyes unknowing to the state of its world or that of its kind.
To say that he was surprised would be a severe understatement. The cleansing of a planet was thorough, with no exceptions left alive. Yet a youngling was alive right in front of his eyes. He pressed his hands to the ground once more, awaiting an answer. Squeezing his eye shut, he listened carefully until moments later, he heard a silent whispering of forgiveness.
Understanding the wishes of the graceful soul of the planet, he gently picked up the bundle and held it close. The youngling squealed in delight, its two hands outstretched as it tried to touch him. He held out a single finger and the youngling took it, grabbing on.
With the youngling secure in his arms, he headed back towards his spaceship, gurgles of its laughter echoing in the empty land. He would take this small new being back to his homeland since that was what the Earth had wished for. Though it had performed a cleansing of this being’s species, it must have seen some potential in them after all. A potential that could only be reached through the untainted souls of the young.
It ended when I lost your love.
And so as per the Earth’s wishes, he would educate the youngling in his culture and his ways. But always would he remind the child of where he came from, of why his kind died, and of how it would rebirth. A place called home. A place called Earth.
Because like this youngling, there would be others of his kind, living in different colonies. And when all of them reunited back on their home planet, they would rebuild their species once again as the new generation.
Generation XI
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Comments: 62
WindMeister8 In reply to ??? [2018-01-01 05:10:33 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much for reading and critiquing!!
Oh I haven't read those books before but they certainly sound interesting. Thanks for the recommendations! XD
Ah I envisioned it as sort of like a slug, although I think that did not come out clearly enough. Description of details is still something I struggle with, so I will keep that in mind when I describe the material next time.
That's true. Hmm I wanted the story to be from a more "outside" perspective, but you're right. I think I could have better showed it instead. The idea of something ceremonial is good! I'll remember that for the next time I rewrite this.
Oh the italicized sentences were the lyrics from Skeeter Davis's song "End of the World"! I guess it wasn't that clear, but I was trying to work the lyrics into describing mankind's lost of the Earth's love.
And thank you so much for the great feedback!! I'm glad you like the story and I'll take note of your suggestions for the next time I write it. XD
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Shade-the-AshClad [2017-12-14 10:01:06 +0000 UTC]
Wonderful story. The imagery is quite vivid and the theme is very touching.
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WindMeister8 In reply to Shade-the-AshClad [2017-12-14 19:59:21 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!! I'm glad you enjoyed it~ XD
If you're interested, please do check out my other works (poetry, prose, stories) too!
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Shade-the-AshClad In reply to WindMeister8 [2017-12-15 08:59:01 +0000 UTC]
Okay. You can check out my literature , as well.
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Firemaster1 [2017-07-17 17:08:11 +0000 UTC]
I recently got in touch with the author through a mutual discord group and I must say that this is indeed a very well writen short story. I would love to see more, maybe a book writen with the theme of star watchers.
I am very glad I found this author I like the emotions shes putting into her work and I will be sure to follow her
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WindMeister8 In reply to Firemaster1 [2017-07-18 04:12:50 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much!!
I'm actually working on a book (not about the star watchers) but which is set years into the future. This short work acts more like a historical past of the Earth. XD
I'm glad you like my work! I really appreciate it~ <3
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WindMeister8 In reply to darkmotherpoetry [2017-06-28 21:40:34 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much!! I'm glad you liked this short piece of mine.
And thank for the watch as well!!
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Ikeepboothin [2017-06-01 20:22:58 +0000 UTC]
run on sentences are a really hard habit to break, but otherwise you're pretty damn talented
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WindMeister8 In reply to Ikeepboothin [2017-06-01 20:29:38 +0000 UTC]
Ahh thank you so much!! I really appreciate it~ <33
Oh could you tell me which sentences are run on so I'm aware of the mistakes?
And if you're interested, do check out my other works as well!
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Ikeepboothin In reply to WindMeister8 [2017-06-03 16:26:54 +0000 UTC]
"Whispering a few sentences in his language, he gestured a few times to the bright stars that twinkled high above, asking that they guide the souls of the taken into their embrace and bless a new species to flourish on such a beautiful land." --- there's one
I don't have a lot of time to edit today but I also noticed that you're struggling with the tense of the story.
past vs present tense is actually kind of a bitch if you're used to using one or the other
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WindMeister8 In reply to Ikeepboothin [2017-06-03 16:50:02 +0000 UTC]
Ah ok thank you! XD
Hmm I don't struggle with tenses normally since I always use past tense. So I'm not sure which part is the one that has mistakes. I know you don't have a lot of time but would it be okay if you just pointed me to one example so I know the general mistakes I'm making? Thank you again, I really appreciate the feedback!
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Ikeepboothin In reply to WindMeister8 [2017-06-07 20:49:50 +0000 UTC]
I can comb through and find a few examples
Present Tense "The others should be close behind or possibly, already here on this rock to observe and put to rest the last of the crying souls."
Shit that's literally the only one, let me shut up and focus on my piss poor excuses for shorts
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WindMeister8 In reply to Ikeepboothin [2017-06-08 07:01:58 +0000 UTC]
Lolol it's ok! XD
Hmm I see what you mean. But I thought since it's "to observe and put to rest", that's fine?
How should I correct the sentence then?
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Ikeepboothin In reply to WindMeister8 [2017-06-08 18:11:26 +0000 UTC]
It doesn't sound as good but, "The others should have been close behind or possibly, already on this rock to observe etc..."
Otherwise I'm pretty sure you were just stylistic with your phrasing which is accepted and even encouraged
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WindMeister8 In reply to Ikeepboothin [2017-06-09 03:24:39 +0000 UTC]
Ahh ok got it! XD
Thank you very much for the help~
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Ikeepboothin In reply to WindMeister8 [2017-06-11 19:31:37 +0000 UTC]
feel free to criticize my crap any time lol
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WindMeister8 In reply to Ikeepboothin [2017-06-11 21:43:29 +0000 UTC]
lol i'm sure it's not crap! XD
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Ikeepboothin In reply to WindMeister8 [2017-06-12 15:30:56 +0000 UTC]
depends on your definition of crap lol
Contest Entry: I didn't even get it AutographedI was having such a great day. Work gave me tickets to the Reds game, right center field. My boss bought me five nine dollar beers and a six dollar hot dog just for showing up today. As if it wasn’t enough, I caught a home run hit by Adam Duvall.
For what it’s worth, I’ve never really followed baseball, but I’ve always known enough to really enjoy the few games I’ve been able to see in person. I also loved knowing that my boss was a fanatic, so I took a little bit of pride in robbing him of a homer hit by his presumably hetero man crush.
I remember being just a little bit tipsy while we walked down to the pavilion. I was rubbing my home run ball in his face, he was considering buying it from me for a good chunk of change, and then seemingly out of nowhere everything went to hell.
I have no idea exactly what went down, only the knowledge that it went down fast. I think it was a terror attack, because I remember seeing a man in a black mask wearing an except
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WindMeister8 In reply to Ikeepboothin [2017-07-07 03:53:58 +0000 UTC]
Ah lol sorry I took so long to reply! ><
Congrats on winning second prize for the entry!! And the concept was really interesting and cool~
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StrangelyShiny [2017-03-23 05:21:14 +0000 UTC]
I love this story. Post-apocalyptic settings don't often do it for me, but I love the vague glimmer of hope here. It's left up to the reader to wonder how the Earth will fare, and what will become of the child.
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WindMeister8 In reply to StrangelyShiny [2017-03-23 06:40:12 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!!
Indeed~ I'm intending this to be the prologue of my original story, so we'll certainly know what happens to Earth.
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StrangelyShiny In reply to WindMeister8 [2017-03-23 07:16:39 +0000 UTC]
Oooooh, a spicy start! :3
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WindMeister8 In reply to StrangelyShiny [2017-03-23 14:53:35 +0000 UTC]
Hehehe the original introduction is already spicy, so it's gonna be exciting to add this on!
If you're interested in the rest of the story, you can check it out here too~ XD
--> Somebody To Die For
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RA-DO [2017-03-11 05:10:03 +0000 UTC]
One of the best "end of the world" stories I've read so far.
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WindMeister8 In reply to RA-DO [2017-03-11 05:52:12 +0000 UTC]
Ahh thank you so much Rado!
I'm glad you think so~ XD
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JulianaGalardo [2017-03-04 23:59:49 +0000 UTC]
That was really deep and significant. Like, wow. Your way of writing is amazing. Love the story and your style of telling it to us.
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WindMeister8 In reply to JulianaGalardo [2017-03-05 04:42:42 +0000 UTC]
Ah thank you so much!! I still have a long ways to go in terms of improving my writing~ ><
And I'm happy that you like it~ XD Do check out my other works (stories, fanfics, poetry) if you're interested as well!
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Suzuka-sama [2017-03-03 12:04:19 +0000 UTC]
I'm shook. I can't even explain what I'm feeling right now because one, it's a spot on description of our present and a realistic prediction of our future, and two, it kinda hurts to see mankind repeating that stuff in Somebody To Die For. I guess humanity's mentality will never really change, no matter how much time passes.
Kudos to you and Frappe!
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WindMeister8 In reply to Suzuka-sama [2017-03-03 18:31:49 +0000 UTC]
Exactly! It's already happening to us, that's the scary part. I just hope the end of the world isn't going to happen in our life time. T.T
Yeah, history repeats itself in Somebody To Die For but hopefully, by the conclusion of the story, we'll have something different!
Thank you so much Suzuka!!
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Weemelia [2017-03-03 09:45:34 +0000 UTC]
Oh my god, that was a beautiful story, I'm speechless, this is soo powerful, this story reprensents what is happening right now to our land, so this is very sad at the same time, I think I had tears in my eyes as I finished reading the story!
I think that the child at the end represents some hope, innocence and warmth, I loved that!
I hope you win the contest! Frappe's work is really beautiful by the way, your duo is awesome! <3
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WindMeister8 In reply to Weemelia [2017-03-03 18:28:17 +0000 UTC]
Ahh thank you Weemy!! <33
I know right?! It's already happening to us, what with all the freak weather and global warming. I just hope the end of the world isn't in our life time. ><
Yes, you got it!! XD The child symbolizes all that and also of forgiveness.
Thank you~ I hope so too!! Frappe did a great job on the drawing!!
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irismatidia [2017-03-02 20:07:17 +0000 UTC]
Oh wow. WOW!! This is a wonderful story. End of mankind is often described as something horrible and a punishment, but here, well it is a punishment but also feels right in a way. Nature taking back its rights, yessss. And the way you wrote it seems simple yet powerful (oml, what am talking about??) It's like a Miyazaki
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WindMeister8 In reply to irismatidia [2017-03-02 22:07:11 +0000 UTC]
Thank you iris!!!
Hehehe yeah we humans don't deserve this Earth. It does feel like Nature is showing us its wrath now though, what with all the freak weather these past few years. Hopefully it doesn't happen too soon! ><
Ahh *blushes* OMG really?? I'm so honored you would compare it to Miyazaki!! Thank you so much!!
The whole story is actually a precursor to what will happen in my original story (currently the Somebody To Die For series). So I hope when I (eventually) publish it, you'll like that too!! <33
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WindMeister8 In reply to Frappe7 [2017-03-02 17:02:49 +0000 UTC]
Me too!!
We should give ourselves a pat on the back. XD
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aw-sam-1 [2017-03-02 08:30:06 +0000 UTC]
Lovely story .
This would definitely happen if man doesn't stop taking the earth for granted and stop abusing it.
The ending with the child was so heartwarming .
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WindMeister8 In reply to aw-sam-1 [2017-03-02 17:04:56 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much!!
Yes I can definitely see it happening, especially given all the freak weather we've been experiencing all over the world this past few years. :/ I just hope it doesn't happen in our time.
Aww thank you~ We need some hope to be able to do better! And this child serves as a precursor to my original series, so the whole story is really important. XD
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aw-sam-1 In reply to WindMeister8 [2017-03-04 07:51:45 +0000 UTC]
For years this topic has been put on the backseat of importance. Hopefully as you've stated it happens centuries later after our time.
Since the story has a "Wall-E" feel to it(almost cried at the end of it), can't wait to read through the journey .
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WindMeister8 In reply to aw-sam-1 [2017-03-04 17:05:13 +0000 UTC]
Indeed!
Yup and we'll have to hope that a World War III doesn't break out either! ><
Aww I'm so happy that you were that moved by it~ If you're interested in taking a peek at it, you can check it out here! -->Somebody To Die For
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aw-sam-1 In reply to WindMeister8 [2017-03-05 08:24:05 +0000 UTC]
Will definitely check them out. It's been a while since I've had a good read
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WindMeister8 In reply to aw-sam-1 [2017-03-05 16:16:22 +0000 UTC]
I hope you'll enjoy it! XD
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aw-sam-1 In reply to WindMeister8 [2017-03-05 20:33:33 +0000 UTC]
Already read the first two chapters, must say I'm sold. I think I'll look for Code Geass after I'm done.
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