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Published: 2019-01-16 13:27:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 1824; Favourites: 63; Downloads: 2
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These multiple scenes are made tell the story of my character Kassim's debut in the army and a follow up to: As A Last Resort/En Dernier Recours
Scene 1 <- Why I left -> Scene 3
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Comments: 30
boom17 [2019-03-17 08:42:26 +0000 UTC]
that last smile just reminds me of Judge Frollo: "this foul (scarred, in this story) creature may yet prove one day to be, of use to meeee..."
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writerinafoxhole [2019-01-27 21:56:40 +0000 UTC]
Damn I'm so excited about this, you did an amazing job, its so smooth to read and wow the expression are AMAZING!
Good job on this strip, its great!
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WitchinVikin In reply to writerinafoxhole [2019-02-13 16:07:42 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, I try to make them as smooth and flow well as possible
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boom17 In reply to WitchinVikin [2019-03-17 08:43:30 +0000 UTC]
This whole story and its art flows smooth as a Guinnes this fine S:t Patrick's Day..
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ElithianFox [2019-01-23 10:39:54 +0000 UTC]
Damn, this is immensely cool! I hadn't seen the previous part, but now that I did I'll be excitedly awaiting the next part! Love all the different angles and perspectives you're applying here, this looks like it must've taken ages to come out in this quality! ;v;
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WitchinVikin In reply to ElithianFox [2019-02-13 16:07:00 +0000 UTC]
(Sorry for the very late response)
I'm glad you liked it so far, I'm working on scene 3, I'm just crazy these past few days. Hope you will appreciate what is coming up also
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boom17 [2019-01-20 18:17:56 +0000 UTC]
hmmm, now this seems promising.
You have gold here my friend, now lets see how it shines......
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K-Zlovetch [2019-01-20 00:43:51 +0000 UTC]
Mince, le vieux à des sentiments quand même. Du coup, il risque d'être fichtrement exigeant...!
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WitchinVikin In reply to Hellypse [2019-01-18 20:04:14 +0000 UTC]
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WitchinVikin In reply to gizmo01 [2019-01-18 03:25:31 +0000 UTC]
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Amarna In reply to gizmo01 [2019-01-17 12:47:41 +0000 UTC]
Merde, quel sale type !
Kassim boit ses paroles et lui va se servir de lui
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WitchinVikin In reply to Amarna [2019-01-18 21:01:49 +0000 UTC]
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Shattering-Gravity [2019-01-16 21:32:09 +0000 UTC]
Oh my goodness, I'm so pulled into this! It has such a perfect mix between fantasy already written and fresh ideas I haven't seen mixed in before. Love it!
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WitchinVikin In reply to Shattering-Gravity [2019-01-18 21:04:57 +0000 UTC]
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Fayen-ri [2019-01-16 19:05:12 +0000 UTC]
Magnifiquement géré ! Entre l'interaction de Kassim et Sarouan, la présence de Laleh n'est pas ignorée, très perceptible tout le temps.
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WitchinVikin In reply to Fayen-ri [2019-01-18 21:05:09 +0000 UTC]
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Gnoll-El [2019-01-16 18:28:56 +0000 UTC]
Why do I get the feeling that the general has just found a useful new tool in his tool box? Nice work.
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Andromeva [2019-01-16 15:21:30 +0000 UTC]
Ooooouhhh!!! The plot thickens!
Lovely outcome for the style experiment!
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WitchinVikin In reply to Andromeva [2019-01-16 20:13:54 +0000 UTC]
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Bubba-Buu [2019-01-16 15:19:33 +0000 UTC]
Ahhh, I love this! The expressions, the story telling! The sense of desperation and dread. I really dig how you tell stories, you are so talented! I love this, and I can’t wait to see what you do next!
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WitchinVikin In reply to Bubba-Buu [2019-01-16 20:11:10 +0000 UTC]
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WitchinVikin In reply to Uinn [2019-01-16 17:35:08 +0000 UTC]
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K-naille [2019-01-16 13:47:55 +0000 UTC]
Ah, pendant toute la scène l a l'air d'un brave type paternel et tu conclus sur ce sourire machiavélique!
On en apprend beaucoup sur Kassim!
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WitchinVikin In reply to K-naille [2019-01-16 17:10:38 +0000 UTC]
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K-naille In reply to WitchinVikin [2019-01-16 18:40:14 +0000 UTC]
C'est hyper efficace, du coup! On s'y attend pas!
Chic, plus de Kassim, j'achète!
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