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Published: 2009-05-20 13:53:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 4635; Favourites: 34; Downloads: 0
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Description Dude!! Chapter one is finished!


Anyways, I am going to get started on that surprise I mentioned before, as well as the next chapter next week since I won’t have to worry about the con anymore. : D



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Chapter 2 – [link]

Page 27 – [link]



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Within the Circuit (c) River-bird
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Comments: 30

Rei-hina [2014-06-09 08:42:53 +0000 UTC]

yeah that's really good, the action and story work well and good job with the drawing ^w^
thanks

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thebabebandit4 [2011-05-27 16:11:17 +0000 UTC]

WOW !!!!

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Destiny-Smasher [2011-03-27 22:00:08 +0000 UTC]

Very very interesting stuff! I normally like seeing the characters explored in modern-day AU without bending but the sci-fi edge makes great sense and adds a unique play to things. Definitely digging the ideas at work, like the setup - just enough references and homage to the original story while a LOT of stuff that is straight-up different or mixed around. Cool work, for sure.

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FollowingStars [2010-11-14 09:37:07 +0000 UTC]

That. was. EPIC!!!!! MUST READ MORE!! *frantically pushes next button* More I say!

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Within-the-circuit In reply to FollowingStars [2011-01-13 01:02:06 +0000 UTC]

I am working on the next page tonight!!! I'm feeling inspired to get back to work on this project.

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FollowingStars In reply to Within-the-circuit [2011-01-13 09:39:23 +0000 UTC]

Hazzah!!

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RavenPl13 [2009-05-25 19:54:19 +0000 UTC]

I can't wait for more!

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Within-the-circuit In reply to RavenPl13 [2009-06-07 23:05:00 +0000 UTC]

8D and more will be delievered!

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Shahrezad1 [2009-05-25 05:11:38 +0000 UTC]

It's the end of chapter one already? Seriously? *blinks rapidly, surprised* Wow! That was a really awesome chapter.

Oh, I love the perspective on his hand, by the way. Especially when it comes to the 'looking-up into this face' pose. You're doing a really great job with the anatomy, as well, and I like the backgrounds you put into this page.

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Within-the-circuit In reply to Shahrezad1 [2009-06-07 23:05:37 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! It is funny how fast chapter one seems when you re-read it, but when you think of the time it took for me to do it. Hmm I gotta get faster at it.

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Shahrezad1 In reply to Within-the-circuit [2009-06-09 00:04:21 +0000 UTC]

I understand completely, on that score. *chuckles lightly*

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paintedbluerose [2009-05-22 22:13:44 +0000 UTC]

Something's up. Aang isn't sayin what though... I'm not sure if I like that.

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Within-the-circuit In reply to paintedbluerose [2009-06-07 23:05:47 +0000 UTC]

ohh mystery

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Neon-Starz [2009-05-22 02:12:25 +0000 UTC]

Yay! Congrats on the first chapter being completed! You did an amazing job and I am proud of you! Can't wait for the next chapter, I know it is going to be just as great as this!

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Within-the-circuit In reply to Neon-Starz [2009-06-07 23:06:01 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Next chapter will be starting soon!

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NybCR [2009-05-21 06:56:17 +0000 UTC]

Yay, so cool! Awesome first chapter for the comic. 'Twas worth the wait, methinks.

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avkanar00 [2009-05-21 02:56:05 +0000 UTC]

AWESOME!!! yay!
can't wait till next page!

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Kataang15Love [2009-05-21 02:41:34 +0000 UTC]

OMFG. You rock! awesome comic!

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Kuusho [2009-05-21 00:57:06 +0000 UTC]

YES! THIS IS AWESOME

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lightskin [2009-05-21 00:21:41 +0000 UTC]

An amazing first chapter!

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Melawen26 [2009-05-20 22:19:25 +0000 UTC]

Yay! Great chapter.

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DanaBeyer [2009-05-20 21:00:15 +0000 UTC]

The Dragon's Den Inn???
Ohhhh...mysterious....

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jamnikowa [2009-05-20 20:18:44 +0000 UTC]

*singing* Aaaand chaaapter twooo cooooming sooon!!!

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Lona818 [2009-05-20 19:55:38 +0000 UTC]

This was an amazing chapter

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Leathee [2009-05-20 19:47:40 +0000 UTC]

Awee God, I had such a crummy day, but I came home to this and it made everything better. I won't be able to get a hard copy, though, because I don't live anywhere near Canada, and we don't have money to go right now, either.

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Match25 [2009-05-20 18:03:29 +0000 UTC]

awe, the chapter is over. cant wait to read the second chapter and yes still personally hoping for Taang

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Edniz [2009-05-20 17:39:44 +0000 UTC]

Can't wait to see the next page!

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xGhostfeatherx [2009-05-20 16:47:43 +0000 UTC]

Woo-hoo! Yay for Chapter 1!

Ooh ooh, is this where Iroh comes in? 8D

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jessi-bear [2009-05-20 14:56:49 +0000 UTC]

*thumbs up*

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myah5000 [2009-05-20 14:32:46 +0000 UTC]



Aang be disturbed.
Dragon's Den Inn? Dare I expect to see his tea-loving cookiness?

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