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Published: 2018-10-21 22:51:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 980; Favourites: 42; Downloads: 1
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1 hr sketch.I'll probably end up inking this later. Everyday I become stronger!
I think my style is finally starting to emerge now.
Do you think this should be tagged 18+ or just general?
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Overall, this is a very good piece. The pose and structure are great, and the pose you intended is clear and well executed. My advice to you would be to watch the line of action (or balance/center of gravity) in your pose, and to focus a little more attention or do research on hand figures. If she's looking behind herself, the hips should be swayed out because of the upper shift of weight. Her legs should also move in compensation, as when anyone poses, unless standing at attention, both feet/legs together are very rare in a natural pose. This makes her appear a bit tense despite the rest of her pose. The hand also looks unfinished, with a lack of definition around the joints. I used to do this a lot when I started drawing hands, but after practicing a bit and looking at reference, I eventually got it. Don't be afraid to try posing the hand and flay out the fingers; that adds a bit more flair to your character's personality and also makes things look more natural.
Under the nose also took me a little bit to understand, where I couldn't tell the curve of the lip apart from the mouth itself. I saw it after a few seconds of looking, but the vision should be immediate with any character piece, even in its rough stage.
The impact of the eyes was what I saw first; the rest of the sketch a bit underwhelming, as the character takes most of the attention, with sparkles being the only thing in the negative space to provide balance. The clumps of fur on the body are also in very odd spots, making the character appear to be unkempt, while the rest of the body (like the legs) are very well kept. To offer more of a balance of this, try thinking a bit more of the whole figure, and try to ease in to the fur patches instead of having them appear out of nowhere in the design.
Again, this is a brilliant character and your work is astounding - what I say may sound a bit harsh, but it's just nitpicking polish stuff. Add some color to this beauty, and you have yourself one heck of a character! Keep up the great work, and I hope to see more soon!
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Thanks for the critique, it really means a lot to me that you took the time to check out my piece and tell me your opinion about it.
Thank you!
Yeah, I can see what you are talking about, trying to stand in a mirror and do this pose is uncomfortable unless i let my left leg go forwards.
I think I need to tone down the fluff on the shoulders, they tend to get a bit too crazy.
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Like I said in a few other comments; these things come with practice! 
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I think my main issues is i require critiques, I look at my pieces and see absolutely no problems with it, until somebody tells me.
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As someone who's been in art for a number of years and has school experience under my belt for it, I guarantee you, that's how it is for everyone
Believe me, you're only doing good for yourself, listening to outside views! Actually, I'm very proud that you've been able to do this, as many artists I know are actually completely against criticism - but it's a double edged sword. Your path may be harder because you have to take each piece as a learning experience, but in the longrun, it'll do you a world of good and train you on what makes good art
People's criticism's aren't meant to hurt; despite some may pinch a little and what people say about the whole thing, we all wanna see you improve along with us! No matter anyone's level of experience, a different set of eyes is always an invaluable asset because they always offer a view that you never have because you're emotionally invested in your art(i.e. you seriously can't see anything wrong even if you wanted to). Even in school, as the youngest person attending there, I was treated with warmth and was even told that my insight was very good, even though I didn't have much experience in their field. Same thing applies anywhere, really - just remember to not take things personally or toss anything with potential out because it upsets you(within reason~ I know people can be jerks sometimes, lol), because what could hurt you a little today may be the best advice you've ever gotten down the line ♪
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Thanks for the support!
Just gotta keep drawing and drawing!
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Thank you!
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You're welcome.
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Looks good. I don't think it needs to be considered 18+ because there isn't really any type of nudity being shown.
And dat booty though 🍑.
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Thanks, dude.
Yeah I guess technically it's PG-13 and all she's doing is showing off her bling looking smug.
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