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WolfofAztec — Battlemaster
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Published: 2009-10-30 23:32:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 176; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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This is the legendary war hero of the sand elves from my story, Teyrah Dirai La'amrah, The Stone Keeper, War Master under the Chief of Chiefs. She lost her eye in a clan blood feud to a spear point from which she kept. Legend has it that she finished pulling her ruined eye out of her socket before brutally slaying her young assailant by the sword. Now she is revered an' feared amongst even those whom follow her. They also say she is slowly descending into her own special madness...Related content
Comments: 7
Ooohhh...
Love the symbols on her clothing and headdress, and her hair is beautiful, though I agree with Miho, it looks a little odd.
A word of advice: Detail your intended focal point and then slowly lose detail as you go out; it'll direct the eye toward where you want it. As is, the eyes can't find where to settle. Not a single point keeps drawing the eye. I'm not sure if the focus is her good eye or her bad eye, or if it is her headdress. Add directing lines (in her hair? the surrounding environment?) to help the eye find your intended focus.
Good Job!
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Good advice mayhap I can make some more pics wih her in it an' applies those. Maybe some drawings that flashback to her younger days as a warrior.
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as per our agreement...
Compliments: I love the head piece (very well done!), you really have your ruins down, the hair, skin, beads,cloth textures are amazing (espesially(sp)the beads), and your shading is always well done...
Repair: The jaw line is funky (so are the lips), the top of her head(hair) is kinda messed up, theres something about the arrows that doesn't seem right, and you nead to work on your scarring...
Suggestions: do something about the background it looks unfinished, show the edge of the arrow bag to give her a bit more diminsion, as for the lip thing smooth the out a bit the need to be more curvey less pionty.
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OIY!!! what would I do without you two!? thanks a million. I might just have to remake this one or make more...
I might also need to sketch out more concepts and write out a bio and some more concise details on the character.
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...die a natural death?...
sounds good
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HAHAHAHA....hahahaha....hehhehehe, heh.....wait. oh yeah! I would!
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