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WolfofAztec — The Runner
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Published: 2012-04-06 04:37:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 498; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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This is my first OC based off of James Cameron's Avatar, a blind Na'vi they call The Runner. He lost his sight fighting the RDA mining operation when a bullet severed his spine. It managed to repair itself due to the amazing natural carbon fiber materail that knits back well. But his eyes never came back. Now he sees only through his loyal ikran and relies on his hightened sense of hearing, touch, and smell along the forest floor.PS Hurray for Bamboo Pen and Touch!
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I so love how everything glows! It's incredible. His ears are expressive, and definitely accentuate his facial expression. The detail on his bow and knives are brain-numbing. A little critique: Some of the lines are a little too hard, like on the orange feather where the center shaft looks slightly like an attack from Paint. The edges of the feather, where the lines are thinner and smoother are excellent; I'd love to see more of this in your future works. Oh, and the top of his noggin: I can see where the hair hits the edge of his skull in a thick line. Perhaps try to use the curve of hair to denote the back of his head instead of a solid line. Otherwise, awesome! *Has to play catchup now*
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*Big grin* Thank you ever so much for your valued critique. I need to work on either finer line art or dabble more in work like Bor'Ragraz.
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opinion=hairs shading needs a little work... positive= like his freckles(?...little shiny dots that are covering him) and how well they're displaced the back ground really lovely... critique= you should rely less on the lines on his body and use you amazing shading abilities to blend and light the skin to show the lines (am I making any sense to you?)
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aye, thanks for the feedback. I'm currently expirementing on less lineart or much thinner lines. So we'll see which works.
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