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Alright, I finally got it done. XD I know I probably really suck at drawing ravens, huh? Oh well... anyway, which panel is your favorite? I like how panels 4&5 came out best.
Anyway, enjoy the page!
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Comments: 16
WickedSpecter [2011-11-14 02:00:28 +0000 UTC]
Omg you have rats loose in your house? *shivers* I hate rats, especially the ones with red eyes, creepy. Anyway on to your page! I really like how more diverse your getting when it comes to your page panels, nicely done. Love the third panel, the tree background is nice and the wolfs pose is cute.^^ These is only one thing bothing me, and thats the last panel. near the top right theres a big gap of nothingness that just keeps dragging my eyes away from the other panels almost immediatly viewing this page.
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Wolved In reply to WickedSpecter [2011-11-14 02:38:46 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! And yes, though they seem to be MUCH more calm. And I notice that now... mistake on my part, it's bothering my eyes now to see it.
Thanks for your advice!
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Anark-mana [2011-11-06 20:24:38 +0000 UTC]
why am I reminded of the way I wake up my sister.....
wait...where'd the raven come from???
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Wolved In reply to Anark-mana [2011-11-07 04:47:14 +0000 UTC]
lol. XD
Oh, they are just to emphasize how loud Ruby was when she yelled at Red.
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ARVEN92 [2011-11-05 18:17:32 +0000 UTC]
I knew it...
RED'S IN TROUBLE!
The closeup of the mouth in panel 5 is epic And the pose in panel 4 made my day! XDDDD The poor fellow seems used to this though XDDD Ah, if I may give a little advice, always in panel 4, I think the wolf's right front leg is a little too long
Maybe positioning the shoulder slightly farther right, and dragging the elbow in that direction too would help
I hope I was useful XD
I totally love this page and can't wait for more! The last panel is so intriguing wonder what's happening! XD
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Wolved In reply to ARVEN92 [2011-11-06 02:08:34 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much! And yes, he ends up having to spend time with Ruby and knows how loud she tends to be. I had a hard time with that panel, yes.
Thanks for your advice, once I'm done replying I'll have to take a look for myself so that I'll know when a leg's to long from now on.
Thanks again!
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ARVEN92 In reply to Wolved [2011-11-07 13:47:21 +0000 UTC]
No problems!
I can see it XD Poor him <3
And that's okay! i'm glad I could help you^^
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Destynee33 [2011-11-05 17:59:26 +0000 UTC]
AH IT FINALLY CAME OUT!!!
Gosh do I love this! It's gotta be one of my faves. Just something about the layout, the lighting the poses... I love panel 4 is it? With Note (or whatever the name is, sorry can't remember) covering her ears like that. And the ravens are awesome XD
Gah that must be horrible having rats in the ceiling!
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Wolved In reply to Destynee33 [2011-11-06 02:06:02 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. And yes the name's Note. On a quick...note, Note is a he. XD No worries! And yezzz, truly. <.>
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