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Published: 2009-09-17 23:33:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 437; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 31
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Pretty much a test/practice run, this time with expressions.I was finished with this last night-- but I wanted to add some sort of background today after school. I like it, turned out pretty good considering I fail at that type of clouds. ^^
I'm not sure, though... is her head too big? It looks right, but then again, it doesn't. I really had fun with the shadows, although I don't think I put enough in. Also, I might try different ears next time, I don't like how these keep on turning out.
Art (c) me
Fursona/char (c) me
Done in MS Paint
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I like her expression ^_^ she looks like she knows an untold joke and is secretly making fun of you ^_^ very fun picture. I notice that someone already mentioned the lower jaw and I agree with what they said. In addition, I would suggest drawing the line of her mouth all the way to the front of her muzzle instead of stopping it. not a big thing but I just thought I would point that out. Nice picture overall, I really like the background
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That's sorta what I was aiming for, exactly.
-nod- As I said before, I'll work on that for sure, along with what you said. Yay, background love~ xD
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Holy shit that's so awesome! D:
I really love the expression.
The head is fine!
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CB Thanks~
So do I, I'm glad it came out so well.
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Awwwwwwww!!!!!!! I like this one a lot. Must took some time and patience.
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A little bit, yes.
Thanks!
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Like usual, you have a deft sense of proportion. I think your ears are fantastic, but they could definitely be better - something I think is the product of using MS Paint. Head size is primo; no worries there.
Problem areas that I /do/ see, however, include the neck and eyes.
The curve from the lower jaw is rather... continuous and unformed rather than contiguous; there's no separation of "fur" to really show that the jaw ends and the neck begins, other than the abrupt curve.
With the eyes, I think that they are set just a hair too low on the snout/skull; perhaps consider bringing them up more toward your eyebrow "lines."
Again just general thoughts, and they're all personal opinion stuff.
Much Love to you, WolvesWithin.
<3,
-Spy
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Thank you so much! You make great critiques. ;3
I'll be sure to work on the lower jaw and neck area, along with the ears and eye placement. ^^
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so what wolf is this you seem to be drawing it a lot
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She's my fursona, or at least part of her.
More realistic and "down to earth" in a way.
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awesome I am still working on a fursona, it has changed like 6 times and I have my realisticy fursona and my wolf with like dragon wings and stuff fursona and I can't decide between the two
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I'm having the same problem, although, I think there are two sides of her... I'm not really sure yet either. x)
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awesome I'm glad I'm not the only one
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oooooh pretty fur I especially love the fur it flows so perfectly
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no wait I like the nose the best the nose is awesome
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...homg. i kinda gasped irl when i saw this in my inbox.
and i'm bored so.
im. now. or iscribble. O:
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Really? c:
Hmm, I saw that you wanted to do iscribble earlier, sooo... there is where I'll be. I might be a little slow though, just started to role-play in a guild.
-poofs-
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ohhey? i'm thinking about making a guild on neo... to relive the old days... not so shurely though.
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I'm shurely if you're shurely. 8D
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