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Published: 2014-06-10 16:52:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 4951; Favourites: 308; Downloads: 0
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Your loving smile,
On luscious lips,
Once red,
Now coloured,
In shades of blue.
My only mistake,
When I stole your breath,
Was falling in love with you...
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Thank you for that and although I am greatly honored by your choice, I believe I still have little to display in my gallery.
I am pretty sure there are many other artists with a lot more talent and presence (in deviations) than me who would deserve a mention.
Still I am more than happy to give any type of feedback and critiques as it tends to help us grow and mature in the same way that wine is refined with time and attention to details.
Only recently I decided to switch from an observer to someone vying for some feedback and why not some attention so I will await my turn, so to speak, for the time being.
Thanks once again for taking the time to respond.
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A death Kiss. The opposite of true loves kiss. So perhaps in this version, Prince charming had the ability to steal ones breath with a kiss and kill the sleeping princess.
That's my interpretation, and I'm sticking to it.
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Yes you're right :'3
He killed her and therefore a mention for you m'dear. Thank you for enjoying it as always ^^
-Chennie
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She could have died, or he might have used her, and then realised that he really did love her. Not sure. Still a beautiful poem as always. <3
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Well you got the theme of death and murder right :'3 A mention for you m'dear
-Chennie
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:'3 Thank you! 'Tis an honour.
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