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Published: 2015-02-09 16:06:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 23013; Favourites: 128; Downloads: 0
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You are comfortable now,
Though tired from your day at work.
You lay your head upon the pillow,
And you start to fall asleep...

It is quiet in your apartment,
The silence is soothing.
You soon begin to dream,
And though your dream is initially pleasant...

Something seems to be off in the things you see around you.

You find yourself walking through the streets,
The old pavement beneath your apartment.
It looks like it always has except for all those cracks in the stone.

Crick-crack, crick crack.

You turn your eyes from the paving,
To see the streets lined with people.
Shivering, grim; their eyes hold little hope,
Save for a warm night' meal.

You begin to feel a little more frightened.

Your tie is getting pretty tight.
You stagger into your office, your lips going blue.
You try to alert someone,
But your colleagues no longer have faces...

They are simply mouths, large and unrelenting,
Belting you with a storm of words that drowns you out.
You are silenced, in a world of sound.
And there is no one left to hear you scream.

Shrieking through the haze,
You stumble about like a man on a tossing ship.
Picking clinging hands off your feet.
You stomp on them, thinking only to save yourself...

Eventually you lurch into your apartment,
Tired from a hard day's work.
You fall upon your bed and hug your pillow,
Perfectly comfortable, once more...


- Written by Siddhartha Chen, 10th of February 2015, Darkest Hour Series

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Comments: 50

RadiantGloom [2015-05-03 23:16:12 +0000 UTC]

Yep. I just, yep. Same, haha

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TwiUnderSeeker [2015-02-20 01:22:55 +0000 UTC]

It's good to here something from you again. Β Β 

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kierakiller [2015-02-18 12:02:22 +0000 UTC]

Wow so captivating I was pulled in great skills there man

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FloweringChaos [2015-02-15 05:45:58 +0000 UTC]

Strong start to your album. Β  Β I was captivated by this piece - it really spoke out to me, even though I don't really feel this way in my personal life. Β Wonderfully done.

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phoenixmel [2015-02-11 04:45:27 +0000 UTC]

With my job and classes, this poem sounds exactly like my life. Makes me want to cry.

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mdst313 [2015-02-10 20:01:12 +0000 UTC]

Flagged as Spam

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WordOfChen In reply to mdst313 [2015-02-11 03:09:21 +0000 UTC]

I believe this is spam

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mdst313 In reply to WordOfChen [2015-03-17 15:42:06 +0000 UTC]

no

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fableweaver55 [2015-02-10 19:30:59 +0000 UTC]

Once I was like that. Until one day, I decided I could no more abide by this kind of life because it wasn't a life at all.

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WordOfChen In reply to fableweaver55 [2015-02-11 03:08:34 +0000 UTC]

That must be a tale of bravery and you will treat me to it over some virtual coffee x'D

But yes, I love sharing stories ^^

My skype name is: Semshol and you can find me existing there commonly LOL

-Your boy, Chennie

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fableweaver55 In reply to WordOfChen [2015-02-11 18:18:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, maybe I can catch you someday on Skype and we can swap stories. Though I'm not sure there's much bravery involved in mine. I was just so miserable (and my dream of becoming a professional novelist was languishing somewhere in a forgotten drawer at the back of my mind) that one day I just snapped.

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WordOfChen In reply to fableweaver55 [2015-02-14 14:56:44 +0000 UTC]

Well once I'm settled down and if our skype times match-up, I shall hear it regardless :'3

-Your boy, Chennie

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fableweaver55 In reply to WordOfChen [2015-02-16 14:24:38 +0000 UTC]

Haha, thank you! Feel free to note me once you're settled down then and we'll figure out the time zone stuff

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WordOfChen In reply to fableweaver55 [2015-02-16 14:27:52 +0000 UTC]

Well I'm actually going to be at my auntie's place for awhile, and I'm on skype pretty much all day, so if you happen to pop on you can message me x'D

And if I'm ultra busy/dying I will tell you so, so don't worry x'D

- Your boy, Chennie

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fableweaver55 In reply to WordOfChen [2015-02-16 14:43:14 +0000 UTC]

Okay will do

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FenrirRose [2015-02-10 17:47:09 +0000 UTC]

Clearly still popular, seeing as you've doubled your target Welcome back!

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WordOfChen In reply to FenrirRose [2015-02-11 03:07:16 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, thank you ^^ I am glad to be back and it is time to raaaawk!

-Your boy, Chennie

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Nhizyr [2015-02-10 15:21:19 +0000 UTC]

Welcome back Chennie... c:

Ah I just love how this transports emotion without being angsty, I think I missed your poetry /o/

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WordOfChen In reply to Nhizyr [2015-02-10 16:48:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank you kindly for enjoying it :'3

It's been a long while since I talked to you .3.

Skype me sometime if you're free x'D Though I know you're often busy!

- Your boy, Chennie

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Nhizyr In reply to WordOfChen [2015-02-10 16:57:47 +0000 UTC]

Thank you kindly for making me enjoy it!

And yeah it has been! ;A; I feel really bad about it too. And while I do not, strictly speaking, have time for Skype at all, I shall skype you nonetheless! xdΒ 

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Zephyras-Lied [2015-02-10 02:56:44 +0000 UTC]

Good thing I don't get these dreams whenever I nap during class. Seeing a teacher as just a mouth would be terrifying. Amazing work as always, I'm glad to see you're back~

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WordOfChen In reply to Zephyras-Lied [2015-02-10 16:48:33 +0000 UTC]

Bwahaha, if you got those types of dreams, I think you'd be in need of as much help as I am ;3

- Your boy, Chennie

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DylanSeto [2015-02-10 02:15:13 +0000 UTC]

Great job, Chen I really missed seeing your work on here.

Now - get yo ass up and grind. I need my rival back. From what I've seen/read you've been through some shit over the past few months, now it's time to kick depression's ass and tell us about it.

Besides, where's the fun in chasing a static goal?

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WordOfChen In reply to DylanSeto [2015-02-10 16:48:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Dylan, always good to have your cheers (^_^)/

I shall most certainly get back to the grind.

- Your boy, Chennie

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i8candy [2015-02-10 00:00:44 +0000 UTC]

Whoa, this is incredible!
Very relatable as well! <3

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WordOfChen In reply to i8candy [2015-02-10 16:49:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much for enjoying it ^^

- Your boy, Chennie

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Vivacia18 [2015-02-09 23:35:18 +0000 UTC]

Ah, I missed you're lovely little slices of darkness I can't wait to see what kind of dream inspiration this will give me tonight

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WordOfChen In reply to Vivacia18 [2015-02-10 16:49:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you my dear, more to come, with more gore, more broken ideals and more of the usual Chennie goodness :'3

- Your boy, Chennie

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Garrison-Kelly [2015-02-09 22:26:33 +0000 UTC]

Dreams can show us the weirdest parts of our subconscious. This poem captured that sentiment perfectly.

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WordOfChen In reply to Garrison-Kelly [2015-02-10 16:49:33 +0000 UTC]

Agreed x'D always agreed on that lol

- Your boy, Chennie

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DeeryDeerth [2015-02-09 19:20:51 +0000 UTC]

This poem is pretty awesome!

...but also confusing. The way I read it, it sounded a lot like workingdayception. If that makes any sense.

Looks like you've earned yourself another favourite, too. I think you may well reach those 50 favourites soon!

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WordOfChen In reply to DeeryDeerth [2015-02-10 16:50:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you kindly :'3

It is a workingdayception kind of thing. Live, die and repeat :'D

I blew past the goal thanks to the help of everyone though, that means something ^^

- Your boy, Chennie

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DeeryDeerth In reply to WordOfChen [2015-02-10 21:28:55 +0000 UTC]

You are most welcome!

Ohh dear. I think I know how you felt back there. I've had these workingdayception sensations before, too.

That's really awesome! Congratulations for running past the goal! It looks like people really expected you back, and gave you a warm welcome, too. I'm really glad for that! ^w^

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WordOfChen In reply to DeeryDeerth [2015-02-11 03:04:18 +0000 UTC]

Agreedo ^^

-Your boy, Chennie

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SECRET-NINJA-SUPER-M [2015-02-09 19:04:12 +0000 UTC]

Ah, I love how easily the story flows, the imagery was kinda terrifying!

Your self-challenging goal seems to be well on it's way.

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WordOfChen In reply to SECRET-NINJA-SUPER-M [2015-02-10 16:50:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank you kindly :'3

I'm glad you enjoyed my work (^_^)/

- Your boy, Chennie

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HiiroKage23 [2015-02-09 17:05:34 +0000 UTC]

I missed you and your work. I'm so happy I get to read again the works of the great Chennie! Heheh. Keep it up, I really love this. I could keep talking but I have college work to do. This was definitely worth doing first though ^^

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WordOfChen In reply to HiiroKage23 [2015-02-09 17:11:39 +0000 UTC]

To be told that hits me right in the heart, thank you so much :'3 I appreciate that. Go get your college work done and if you ever want to talk...it's usually easier to find me outside of DA lol. I can give out my skype and facebook since I am running around outside most of the time.

-Your Boy, Chennie

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HiiroKage23 In reply to WordOfChen [2015-02-10 02:21:34 +0000 UTC]

I didn't mean to hit you in the heart >>. I'm just a crazy fan of your work is all. I finished my work though if that means anything (at least until tomorrow), I have skype and facebook although I don't use them much. I appreciate everything though. I truly mean that from the bottom of my heart.Β 

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WordOfChen In reply to HiiroKage23 [2015-02-10 07:35:38 +0000 UTC]

Lol it'sa positive expression :'3 Nothing bad meant by it.

My skype is: Semshol and my facebook is in the link in the text. It is easiest to find me on Skype as I am only rarely ever off. Other than that you can probably find me on DA once in awhile, but yeah skype is basically easiest.

Enjoy your day (or night) ^^

- Your boy, Chennie

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HiiroKage23 In reply to WordOfChen [2015-02-11 00:19:51 +0000 UTC]

I sent you a request although I may not send many messages at times, and atm it's 7:19 pm so I guess it's considered night. Enjoy your day/night

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reecuu [2015-02-09 16:32:27 +0000 UTC]

I like it. I really do! It was like a daydream-nightmare as I read it, even though I can't relate with that expression of panic. I can interprete it in my phobia ^-^

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WordOfChen In reply to reecuu [2015-02-09 16:56:20 +0000 UTC]

Ohohoho, thank you so kindly for enjoying it ^^

I am glad people are still liking my works :'D

Thank you for the support and yes, panic is different for all of us, but if you just change a few words, it can be modified to fit a particular panic.

Thank you for reading it my friend :'3

-Your boy, Chennie

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reecuu In reply to WordOfChen [2015-02-09 17:11:57 +0000 UTC]

that Hohoho reminds me of Sandy Claws...

No Problem! Your work is great ^-^
that's true

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SHINeeLover009 [2015-02-09 16:30:12 +0000 UTC]

It's so nice to read something from you again ;o;/
I've been missing your stuff... (Especially since all other authors I watch seemed to suddenly disappear as well and I had nothing nice to read for a long time... orz)

Also, this is pretty nice~
With that end it reminds me a bit of those 'endless stories' like 'A father had seven sons. The seven sons said 'Father, tell us a story' and the father began: A father had seven sons. The seven sons said...' and so on and on. -nods- Even if it's not exactly the same in the end after all it's imaginable that it just continues the same way all the time.

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WordOfChen In reply to SHINeeLover009 [2015-02-09 16:55:02 +0000 UTC]

Wow, that is a pretty epic interpretation. Thank you for enjoying my works. More to come and I can guarantee more emotions and new perspectives :'3

-Your boy, Chennie

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SHINeeLover009 In reply to WordOfChen [2015-02-09 18:37:16 +0000 UTC]

It's just what randomly came to my mind while reading though XD
Aww, I can't wait to see more of your stuff soon~ X3

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Michel-le-fou [2015-02-09 16:14:14 +0000 UTC]

Glad to read yours again. I missed you and it a lot. What's new?

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WordOfChen In reply to Michel-le-fou [2015-02-09 16:54:24 +0000 UTC]

Michael! My friend :'3

Well, a lost job and an unsteady life is what is new, but also a resolve and a dedication to get back to what I gave up and get started from the beginning again.

It's nice to approach poetry as a newbie I'd say ^^

I'm always glad to have your readership my friendΒ 

-Your boy, Chennie

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Michel-le-fou In reply to WordOfChen [2015-02-10 05:22:40 +0000 UTC]

Good to hear on a way. I have my share of woes but still I have to say, it will not stop my poetry. That is what even Heaven knows.

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