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changing Eilidh and Carlwm a bit....mainly Carlwm.I want serious crit guys! What do you want to see?
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They both look good to me. You can do whatever you want.
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Seriously, they look spectacular!!! You've gotten a lot of detail into their design, and it's great!Buuut, to me, glasses don't seem to fit Carlwm... and his head's a little too small. Other than that, they look wonderful!
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I think the glasses look kinda cute 
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Looks good :3 But the only thing which I find somewhat awkward is just the guy's head being a little small
Other than that :3 Nipples!
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yeah I've changed that now n_n
I love the reaction I get when i draw nipples, it's hilarious
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I think these are very well done. All I can critique you on is that you might want to do a head count measurement. Meaning, plan how tall, or how many heads tall your subject is first before you map out the pose...That way the feet don't get cut off if you run out of room on the page...It happened to me all the time. Until I started measuring how tall each character would be. Making circles basically, which is stacking a circle over a circle till you get the desired height. But other than that, I really really like your style. The lines are very crisp and sharp. Whatever lead you're using it looks wonderful. I hope I've helped! 
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thankyou very much n_n yeah it's an H pencil...my new favourite lol
I should start mapping them out
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Its no problem. You have a lot of potential. Just wanted to help ya.
Yeah I usually use a 7.0 lead in mechanical pencils. They're great for detail.
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thankyou 
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I like seeing your underdrawings, I don't think I have before.
My vote for what do you want to see is:
1) Backgrounds, or some reference, maybe even minimal
2) Possibly words? I don't know if you want them to speak...
3) Maybe have them doing some action (poses).
I like the way that you draw.
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I don't post them up very often but I kinda like unfinished sketches too sometimes n_n
background...I'll probably go with that but i think that the rest is going to come later. This was just basic get-the-ideas-down thing n_n
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I gotcha. I just like to see how people work...
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I'm actually pretty much finished...minus the background. So expect to see that kinda soon
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Great! 
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I have two skirts actually so I'll have to take some pictures soon...and a pair of shoes that I painted
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Wonderful! I cannot wait to see! You are the only person I know who does that, and I think it is great!
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really? ._. cool...I guess that makes me a tiny bit individual 
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Yes really! Except me, I used to alter clothes a lot. I used to go dancing in kilts and skirts. I never cared what people thought and some thought it was way cool. I did it because I liked it.
You are unique though!
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aww bless, I think it's a real shame that people start to conform more when they get older. I'd like to think I could still dress individually when I'm middle aged
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It isn't that, really. I just don't club anymore and that is where I dressed up for! If I went clubbing I would still dress uniquely, and not care what people thought. I could express a little more than I do, though.
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yeah...expressing yourself seems to be something that a lot of people link with youth. stay individual and unigue! stand out!
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I like being encouraging n_n
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: iconspinplz : is how you make it... 
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okay, well, first nipple overload with comments lol! 
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yeah maybe a bit
I like her top too! I need buckles so i can make one
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Lol, I know what you mean, my boyfriend is exactly the same.......
And true, colour probably will sort it out
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lol he's not all that bad, I'd miss it if he stopped
hope I can colour it soon though, I'm having marker problems lol
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Likewise, I'm just saying it's predictable lol
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it is indeed
we any firther on with this devmeet thing?
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Not yet, someone else messaged me about it (he has a lot more people lined up for it) and I asked if he wanted to help organise it.....so I'll let you know what happens wth it!
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awesome! I'm guessing that was Alex...Kael. should be good
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Yeah, that was him
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He needs a slightly longer face.. and ohmagosh kitty nipplez.. badbad helen 
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aww and i was so happy with it
and Eilidh has nipples too...that's right! she does
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all the rest of it is awesome though.. And you're nipples do like to make themselves known
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thankyou n_n to be fair, i wasn't concentrating much on his face...it was more the body and hair and trousers lol
and yes...yes they do
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