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New fc, don't kill me!!! It's about time I chose a secondary fandom. I was only very slightly involved in the transformers fandom a few years back. But I think drawing a crap ton of detailed robots and stuff will improve my attention to detail and get me ready for concept art class. Will update a back view. Design possibly might change.
Like always, I end up making a oc looking excessively evil looking for some reason. I also didn't expect to put too much thought in this but I ended up doing it anyway, lol.
Note: I realized I gave him the same expression as my Dr. Nefarious drawing near the bottom .-.
I hope he doesn't look like Nefarious, I was just trying out expressions when it it turned out like that >.>
Name: SkullCrusher (Name may change since currently his name sounds like what a bulky powerhouse would have)
Nickname: Skully
Age: Earth years unown, but he is well over millions of earth years old. Possibly 25 years for a cybertronian.
Height: 18ft
Gender: Mech
Born: Constructed cold
Alt Mode: F-22 Raptor. Pre-war he was a cybertronian jet.
Faction: Neutral/Rouge
Function: Infiltrator. Likes disassembling machines on the side.
Weapons: Missiles, cannons and channeling energon through his claws and feet. The energon attacks if used excessively without a steady source of energon could be fatal and can weaken him drastically in long fights.
Personality: He's a bit on the crazy side. Talking to himself constantly, and easily angered by silly things. Despite being insane, he is highly intelligent and is capable of hacking and breaking into most places. He is extremely sarcastic, which is a trait he carried over from his pre-war self. Can range from being serious, to completely out of it and in his own little world. Comparing and pointing out random things, making it seem like he isn't paying attention or even changing the subject easily.
Likes:
- Energon
- Has a soft spot for cute cuddly things
- human entertainment and media
- Disassembling both human and cybertronian technology
Dislikes:
- Those stopping him from getting energon
- The one (unnamed Decepticon) that originally ripped off his face
- Being mocked, mostly about how he failed during the great war
- Jokes about him being related to terrorcons
Weakness:
-Constantly needs a lot of energon in order to be a proper threat and defend himself.
-Is physically weak, and is smaller than average cybertronian.
-He is insane. Doesn't take certain situations seriously and can get distracted. Talks to himself which can cause social awkwardness.
-Is addicted to energon, and will become very unstable, agressive, crazed, and desperate if below moderate amounts of energon. Would probably jump off a cliff for energon when low on energy.
-Can die if energon reserves completely burn out.
Strengths:
-Is extremely fast and agile
-When in full strength he can use devastating energon based attacks
-Can also use his insanity to trick people into thinking he's distracted. Sometimes he really is distracted though.
Personal quote:
Describing dark energon, "I do not believe this is grape flavored energon, it is in fact plum flavored."
When fighting, "Too slow. Maybe move a little bit faster!" *laughs*
Talking about nameless Decepticon, "I don't know his name yet, but one day his name shall be called before me. When that day comes, I will hunt him down and destroy him!"
Status:
Strength: 3/10 Pretty pathetic when it comes to strength. Don't expect hard punches or lifting from this guy.
Speed: 9/10 He is a stealth Jet, so naturally he's pretty fast.
Agility:9/10 His thin and small frame make it easy for him to dodge attacks and move flexibly.
Endurance: 4/10 Since he can burn through energon quickly, he tires and weakens very fast.
Defense: 3/10 His thin frame makes it easy for someone to damage him if hit hard enough.
Intelligence: 8/10 Extremely intelligent, and has vast knowledge of hacking computers. Is a tech genius.
Attack: 7/10 While most his normal attacks are rather weak and rely more on the amounts of hits he can dish out, his energon based attacks are extremely deadly and can tear through metal.
Aim: 5/10 His aim isn't perfect, about average, but it's enough to get by when infiltrating facilities and what not.
Temperament: 5/10 Most of the time his temper is at average, but he tends to get angry at dumb things like if he lost in a videogame or something.
Story :
(small story, still working on it. Not final.)
Originally from the city of Vos, SilverSwipe was a seeker who had rebelled during the war in search for personal work. He started doing infiltration jobs, eventually being teamed up with FireSpark who originally hated him for being a seeker and even more for being constructed cold. She soon developed respect for him after proving to be a worthy partner and even friend. Defending him whenever fellow cybertronians decided to mock their size and SilverSwipe's origin.
As the war worsened, SilverSwipe and FireSpark were persuaded to join the autobots after hearing the speeches from Orian Pax, before he became Prime. They were stuck fighting and recruited for a job they knew they most likely wouldn't survive. But they wanted to fight for what they thought was right. Little did they know was that the current Prime leading the autobots, Zeta Prime, was corrupted.
Times were desperate; There was a lack of soldiers on the field, causing unlikely cybertronians to fight during the battles including newly awakened protoforms. SilverSwipe, being a frail infiltrator, and unskilled in warfare; Had to fight those larger than him. During the battle his best friend and partner Firespark was killed and struck down before his eyes; Her spark ripped clean from her chest and giving enough time for a Decepticon to grab and rip 2/3 of his face off; His limp body was thrown and left there forgotten among those who had fallen; Zeta Prime, destroying a town full of innocent people not far off from the distance. He felt betrayed, lied to, and abandoned by the autobots.
Since his optical lenses and sensors were still fully intact; he dragged himself to a abandoned medic bay, and there self treated himself, unknowingly injecting himself with infected energon. Shortly after, he contracted the cybonic plague and was discovered by Decepticons who had stumbled across the medical Bay as the war still raged on. With no other choice, but to vow allegiance to the Decepticons in order to receive the cure. He was taken but was instead used as the Decepticon's guinea pig instead of a soldier; He was denied a face and openly mocked as he was tested and experimented on for energon based warefare. During the many experiments the decepticons laughed at him, calling him weak, names involving his lack of a face plate, and that he was only good for their tests. He proved a failure because the energon based weapons now equipped into his hands and feet burned through too much energon, his energon supply. This caused him to go insane and crave energon. With constantly being deprived easily of energon along with being mocked, and around those he hated; He escaped, gathered enough supplies to create a temporary mouthplate, one that resembled a skull, almost animistic in nature. He renamed himself SkullCrusher. Then vowed revenge on the one Decepticon that destroyed his life, along with his constant search for energon to try to improve his weakened state.
Relationships:
FireSpark: Partner, fellow infiltrator and best friend (Deceased)
Extra:
- Most of the time avoids fighting, unless it involves energon. He tries to preserve his energon reserves as much as possible.
- Does not like stupid people
- Isn't necessarily mean, just has a short temper and will at most flip desks or break something when angry.
- Usually doesn't realize when he's talking to himself even when in front of someone.
- Is good at hacking into computers.
- Usually not aggressive and is passive when moderately or fully fueled with energon.
- Sometimes is sadistic especially towards the ones he greatly dislikes.
- Mouthplate could be knocked off exposing the remains of his face if enough force is applied. He usually retreats when this happens.
- His mouthplate is moveable, and has a hinge attached to it, allowing jaw movement. Since only Skully's face was ripped off, and none of his facial components were damaged. He can move the mouthplate's jaw sometimes. Mostly only when screaming or yelling, otherwise the mouthplate stays static and unmoving when talking normally.
- Skully temporarily wore a visor when he was with the Decepticons, but it was quickly torn off him when he refused to comply to one of the many experimental procedures and was forced to obediently participate to earn it back.
- His name was not originally SkullCrusher, it was originally SilverSwipe.
- His design is based on Halloween colors, slightly feral animal possibly a werewolf and a skeleton.
- Skully's wings stay swept downwards, in robot mode.
- After his change to SkullCrusher, he seems to love cute cuddly things more than his pre-war self, which also loved cute cuddly things and found them fascinating.
- He is able to socialize normally most of the time, but he is a extremely odd individual. He is more comfortable alone.
- Doesn't like Decepticons or Autobots. But isn't out to get them, or seek fights besides the one who ripped his face off.
- Has deployable heelstruts located on the back of his calve plates when fighting so to not lose balance.
- He was at first a neutral who simply was a hired infiltrator along with his partner, taking any job before joining the autobots.
- Was from the city of Vos
- Had the nickname Skully, before the torturous experimental procedures. His partner called him the name often from the fact he'll jokingly suggest doing crazy antics that resulted in her calling him a numskull more so in in a playful manner. He hated it, but after her spark was distinguished on the battle field in front of him, he accepted the nickname fully.
Pre-war
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Writing-in-the-womb [2020-08-17 00:01:04 +0000 UTC]
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FuchsiaPrime [2019-06-10 20:51:42 +0000 UTC]
I love the detail, both in the drawings as well as the storyline. you might not have much, but I can tell the thought that you put into him. I also think it is interesting that he has the ability to siphon energon from his opponents, that isnh't commonly seen in Transformers ocs, and I like seeing unique things in ocs!! I hope you keep drawing him, and other transformers!!
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panadareaper [2017-02-08 18:51:15 +0000 UTC]
PowerSweep: (sparkling-11 years of cybertronian) Hai Mister, why do you look starving? Energon? *hands him some Energon*
(hey, I want to test my new oc PowerSweep, roleplay please?)
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Writing-in-the-womb In reply to panadareaper [2020-08-17 00:02:44 +0000 UTC]
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HarmonyClawDraws [2016-06-16 23:47:14 +0000 UTC]
I love this so much. Amazing job on the design
Also if there is a creature like a predacon smaller than him and is scared of him, how would he react?
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XenoMind In reply to HarmonyClawDraws [2016-06-17 05:12:48 +0000 UTC]
Thanks
Probably mess around with them, such as trying to scare them. Then he'll get bored and go somewhere else unless in need of energon.
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HarmonyClawDraws In reply to XenoMind [2016-06-17 15:33:39 +0000 UTC]
Your Welcome. I can imagine how much fun he would have doing that
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TheShyCorona [2016-04-21 14:54:12 +0000 UTC]
His design is amazing! I especially love the idea of the mouth plate and the spiky look of it
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Mushroom-Basket [2016-02-16 16:05:30 +0000 UTC]
OMG this is so cool!!
Let me steal your designing skill huehue ;w;
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HellboysLady [2016-02-06 03:17:28 +0000 UTC]
Oh WOW this looks like a awesome Character! GREAT WORK ON HIM!
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temarcia [2016-02-01 22:57:04 +0000 UTC]
This is awesome - both the character design and the idea for his backstory! : D I love his face-less head shot there, so creepy. : D
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XenoMind In reply to temarcia [2016-02-02 04:38:22 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I love drawing creepy looking stuff :'D
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temarcia In reply to XenoMind [2016-02-02 14:17:49 +0000 UTC]
Then don't stop drawing him! : D
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Irios-Atelis [2016-02-01 01:57:19 +0000 UTC]
This is absolutely gorgeous! I really love the way you've done the mask and how much expression you've managed to put into it! I'm also really liking the info you have on him, it's very creative and makes for an interesting character. Will certainly have to follow your stuff ^u^
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XenoMind In reply to Irios-Atelis [2016-02-01 02:47:59 +0000 UTC]
Thanks so much, means a lot to hear that! ^^
I end up going a bit crazy with giving him a at least passable story. I just can't post any oc I make without a good amount of info. :'D
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Irios-Atelis In reply to XenoMind [2016-02-01 21:21:10 +0000 UTC]
You're very welcome ^u^
I totally get that, I absolutely love character development so mine always start out with a good amount of info I just got three really awesome books (Emotion Thesaurus, Positive Trait Thesaurus and the Negative Trait Thesaurus) so I'm using them to go through and revamp all my characters to make sure they have a balanced personality
I'm starting with my main bab (Ace) and though he did have all the negative traits, they were admittedly a bit understated so I'm working to bring them to more prominence to make him more balanced.
But as you can see, I can ramble quite a bit about development XD
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XenoMind In reply to Irios-Atelis [2016-02-01 21:44:15 +0000 UTC]
I'm in critical thinking and have to take psychology classes this year; I have to study similar things such as those, and since I used to read a lot of books in high school I ended up with the need to make everything as balanced as possible. Both physically and mentally when it comes with characters. I know that situation though, I'm constantly always fixing and developing my main ocs and fcs. Even if they do end up really well developed, I still think there is always room for more developing.
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Irios-Atelis In reply to XenoMind [2016-02-03 02:23:04 +0000 UTC]
Ah really? I'm currently about to start my second year of psychology at Uni so it's certainly within my interests as well XD
And I can totally understand that, I strive to do the same with my characters whenever I create them. Though a couple need to go through revamps since my main boy (Ace) I've had for a little over five years now so at the beginning there I had no idea about character development and whatnot. Though thankfully he's always been quite balanced, I'm just making sure of it years later when I know what I'm doing XD
There certainly is always room, that's the fun part ^u^ And I love integrating my character's stories with others too, I find that really tends to boost character development and helps find out things about a character you'd never have guessed XD
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XenoMind In reply to Irios-Atelis [2016-02-03 20:48:45 +0000 UTC]
I'm only in my first semester in uni for game design and development. But we have to know about psychology, critical thinkingg and all that stuff just to ensure creativity I suppose, and to think outside the box. But I've always liked psychology since I had it in high school. I think we all at some point had a character that was bad xD
My oc Crome I had for 5 years from october 8 2010, was also pretty bad at first too :'D I've luckily always had balanced ocs too, since I've read so many books and had a rp that last 3 years in high school that involved a major mary sue. Sooo, I've been able to avoid overpowered characters that are both mentally and physically too overwhelming.
I've not put my ocs in other people's stories canonly, but I do rp a lot and do combine stories when roleplaying and drawing it sometimes. I think the rping is what really helped me reorganize and fix my characters more undesirable traits xD
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Irios-Atelis In reply to XenoMind [2016-02-04 08:20:08 +0000 UTC]
Oooh really? How are you finding it? I've always had an interesting in game design and whatnot
It certainly makes sense though, a working knowledge of psychology could help immensely when designing games.
Absolutely, though Ace was my best in terms of balance, luckily I've also brought the other's up to speed XD
Ooh awesome! I'll have to go find some more stuff on him
That's fairly similar to how it went with me, but 3 years with a Mary Sue? Yours or someone else's? How did you not die of frustration? XD
I never used to but a couple of friends introduced me to the concept and I have to say, it really gives the character story a massive boost. Ace got so much more development than I ever thought and through that became way more balanced. I never thought he'd be the type to get a partner but somehow he did, and his partner was never intended to get a partner either so it kinda surprised both of us
But RP'ing is certainly the best way to see how character traits work with each other, I just love doing it, though lately I've kinda dropped out of the RP'ing world, I haven't been able to find the time or the muse :,C
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XenoMind In reply to Irios-Atelis [2016-02-04 15:38:18 +0000 UTC]
I'm taking most of the unexciting classes first, but after taking first year seminar. It's not really a good idea. It's best to just take a fun class for every boring class I have to relieve the stress of work xD. I've been to college previously for programming and animation. But I didn't take any of it seriously since I was a stupid teenager who just came into adulthood. Also I didn't have a car at that time, and with me hating the bus, I just laid in bed and missed classes.
My characters were pretty normal and had no powers until the rp got ridiculous. My friend's oc was a huge mary sue. She would make out with all my ocs and have their children. What's worst is that all of my ocs were okay with this. They didn't care she was sleeping with everyone, and throughout the rp people would die and come back to life. Then her character would get all these powers and so would mine. Her oc was worst for it though. She also slept with canon characters from tv shows and videogames too. I was a naive teenager back then, and had no idea the rp was just wrong. So after 2 years of not rping with her, I ended up telling her everyone died from a asteroid that caused the earth to explode.
That's great to hear! I love rping but I'm careful now since I ran into a couple of weirdos on facebook who had tried to forcefully violate my ocs, after that one 3 year rp. But so far I only really found out that facebook is the only place to avoid since DA isn't too bad when it comes to weirdos wanting to rp with you. I also hadn't been rping a lot recently, it's been a few months since I've rped. But even then I'd go off somewhere for a week and not continue on as often as I used to have. A couple of years ago I used to rp everyday like it was a daily routine at a certain time in a chatroom where everyone would meet up.
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Irios-Atelis In reply to XenoMind [2016-02-08 10:35:58 +0000 UTC]
Ah yes, that sounds like something I'd probably try >.< But there are certainly classes for each year so I can't really choose only bad or only good. But I certainly see how doing both would be better than only doing the bad ones, it kills the motivation otherwise.
Awww, at least you're back and taking it seriously now, its better to do it later when you're enthusiastic about it rather than trying to force yourself to do it when you've got not desire or motivation.
I did the whole missing classes thing last year in second semester, I'm hoping to change those habits since I need to up my grades a little...
Oh wow, that sounds like this thing I read. It got the title of 'Worst fanfic on the internet' and it certainly is, the main character is the definition of a Mary Sue and it's so bad it's hilarious (My Immortal Fanfic).
My characters used to be on the mary-sue side, less so in the fact of sleeping with people but more so in the fact that they'd be able to do things a normal person was never supposed to be able to do. That just sounds absolutely ridiculous though but omg that ending is so perfect XD I really have to try that the next time I'm stuck in an RP with a Mary-Sue XD Luckily I know a couple of people who aren't like that at all and who write really well.
Oh wow yeah, that's not so good at all. But I don't think Facebook is really the best place to RP, Deviantart would be the way to go, there are plenty of people here who are really great writers. There's also this site which is really great for finding good people to RP with, that's where I used to RP with a little group of people.
But yeah I get that, when an RP is new I'll reply daily but as it gets older they start to get less unfortunately, though I tend to try and keep going.
Ah you used to do chatroom things? I haven't RP'ed in a chatroom in years since I began RPing. I find the ones either through notes on DA or on sites like the one I linked to be the best place, since I'm a Literate RP'er and chatrooms just don't work for nice long posts XD
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XenoMind In reply to Irios-Atelis [2016-02-08 16:49:11 +0000 UTC]
Hopefully you'll catch up! I'm now too scared to missed too many classes and I panic badly if I see that my grades are going under a B now :'D When I used to just not care if I got Cs or Ds.
Oh god, "My Immortal" I read that a couple of years ago. But to try to ease the pain; me and some friends skype called and played a drinking game while reading it :'D I ran through a whole case of winecoolers and only reached chapter 11 afterwards. That fic is just plain bad, and it's sooooo long. When in a tough situation and in a long rp, just bring out a Apocalypse situation to end it :'D Unless the sue has the ability to stop it, then I just don't respond anymore. So far I hadn't brought the Apocalypse ending in a while since I hadn't had a bad rp, and most of my friends rp literate and are pretty good.
Oooh, I'll check that site out when I have have the motivation to rp. Yes, I used to rp in chatrooms and yes, it's not the best for literate rps. But since I am a literate rper too, and roleplay with paragraphs, I made the chatrooms like my long posts. Unfortunately I easily typoed in there and it's not as effective as Skype where you can go back and correct them. Note rps I tend to forget exist after a while :'D I like rping in live chat. I cannot rp in script, I need to know about the environment, how a character feels, what they are doing, and why it's happening. I need to be able to imagine the whole situation instead of just reading a script where I can't imagine it as well.
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Irios-Atelis In reply to XenoMind [2016-02-09 01:43:46 +0000 UTC]
I'm sure I will, if I can stop procrastinating for two seconds I'm sure I could get somewhere XD
Ah yeah, we don't go by the alphabet grading system in Uni anymore but I was happy if I just got a pass, (4) but I'm really hoping to get something a bit better this yeah (hopefully a 6 with the best being 7)
Hahaha yes! Oh wow that sounds fun, I'll have to try that XD A couple of uni friends and I would meet up and we'd read it and just spend the whole time laughing but turning it into a drinking game sounds like a great idea!
Pffft yes, I half did that once, this girl had a kinda mary-sue who wouldn't react to anything seriously (totally wasn't afraid of anything and could beat everyone eva) so I made up something about my characters finding out hers were betrayers or something then leaving. But the apocalypse sounds like way more fun.
It's good to hear that you've found some more literate people though
It's really great because there are rules keeping it all literate and whatnot. I had all my TF RP's up there though at the moment they've all kinda been put on hold.
I'd just find chatrooms hard because it's real-time and posts can be lost in all the chatter and whatnot. That was the problem I found with Skype so that's why they all got moved over to that site. But there's also Google Docs as well where some RP's used to be kept which is quite good too.
I've honestly never done a Note RP, I tend to not like all the clutter in my inbox which is why I choose to do it on a website instead.
Absolutely, I can't do script stuff at all, it's much harder to get a sense of tone and other things that you'd be able to get in a more story-style RP.
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XenoMind In reply to Irios-Atelis [2016-02-10 18:04:15 +0000 UTC]
I wish you luck then!!! ^^
It's fun to get together and take turns as you drink to anything remotely wrong with the fic. First we tried with grammar mistakes which we ended up stopping. "My immortal" had way too many grammar mistakes to the point if we read one chapter we would had went through a whole case of alcohol quickly :'D So we just went with taking a sip for whenever something really cringy happened. Still ended up going through a case though xD
Oh god, I hate that kind of mary sue. The one that is invincible and can dodge everything. I once tried to kill my oc just to get out of a rp like that xD But back then I didn't think about destroying everything with a meteor, or the planet getting vaporized by a suddenly dying sun.
Real time chats I just put any chatter I make into parenthesis to distinguish between the rp and someone talking and we do turn based to keep it really organized xD Since I know very well about the fast moving people who type extra fast, lol. But I'll give that place a try one day when I'm not piled up with college homework.
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Irios-Atelis In reply to XenoMind [2016-02-11 07:31:05 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I'll need it!
Hahaha it sounds like so much fun, it'll certainly be something I'll have to try. I'll suggest it to my friends when Uni starts back, lucky there's public transport because there's no way I'd be driving home after that XD Maybe something cringy would work, I'd be impossible to try and get through all that going off grammar and still be able to walk afterward
Yup, just the fact that she didn't seem to take the character seriously. He has plenty of flaws (and I'm working on adding more) but he's a robot who's super overprotective and is perfectly ready to hurt anyone who threatens his person. But this puny little human girl didn't care and would just flounce around completely ignoring his threats and I couldn't let my character do anything because with that amount of rudeness towards him he'd just shoot her....
Hahaha yeah, the destruction of the Earth would certainly be a great way to end it XD
I tried doing that but there was so much chatter we'd lose the RP posts XD It's good that you managed to keep it organised though, I get really particular about that kind of thing XD That's me though, I'm a fast typer generally, but I still prefer the forum ones because they're a little slower and it's easier just to sit and think over a post (and find my many typos) before posting
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StormRaven333 [2016-01-31 13:31:35 +0000 UTC]
oh man, that's awesome. Lighting on armour: Nailed it! ^^
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XenoMind In reply to StormRaven333 [2016-01-31 19:27:56 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, it's been a while since I shaded robots so I'm glad it came out looking good!
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