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XenoPredDragon In reply to ??? [2012-06-29 12:35:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. But I feel I need to work out a character sheet to lock the different characters into a strict design. As lately I have been jumping bit back and forth with the design of the regular Xenomorphs, if you have not noticed that is good too.
But thanks for the comment.

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warrior1944 In reply to ??? [2012-06-29 07:19:20 +0000 UTC]

Yes, finally someone who make the xenos look smart and not stupid as in most pred vs alien stories, wouldnt be smart to move the pred without doing some safety measures. Go aliens Great work on this as well

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XenoPredDragon In reply to warrior1944 [2012-06-29 12:38:44 +0000 UTC]

Ah true, they have been very simplified some places, specially in the "AvP" universe movies. And I am glad people take notice to the Xenomorph in the story, even thought the red predalien, Vex, is my main character.
Thanks for commenting!

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Thegarfieldtouch In reply to ??? [2012-06-29 05:51:08 +0000 UTC]

gonna love them aliens!!

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XenoPredDragon In reply to Thegarfieldtouch [2012-06-29 06:20:30 +0000 UTC]

Yes, they have become a cultural horror creature.

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Thegarfieldtouch In reply to XenoPredDragon [2012-06-29 06:47:18 +0000 UTC]

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Ryu86 In reply to ??? [2012-06-29 02:15:23 +0000 UTC]

Oh man poor ol Vex! Looks like his plan to escape is pointless, now with all with the heavy security in place! Just what does the hive plan to do with him? Now if only he had some kind of stung grenade hidden with him somewhere so he can escape!

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XenoPredDragon In reply to Ryu86 [2012-06-29 03:03:13 +0000 UTC]

You're the one who's always come up with ideas and stories to how he should escape. But at the moment I plan to take him deeper in.

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Ryu86 In reply to XenoPredDragon [2012-06-29 03:18:41 +0000 UTC]

I knows! >w< Its just that he deserve freedom not a slave to the Queen's will and influence! His daughter is out there still!

I always loved that escaping, chase scenes in movies and books! ^^

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XenoPredDragon In reply to Ryu86 [2012-06-29 05:01:38 +0000 UTC]

Well true, I don't want him to become a Drone. And aw, so sweet that you remember her, but I don't think I will bring her into this story.

What escape and chase scene?

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Ryu86 In reply to XenoPredDragon [2012-06-30 00:45:35 +0000 UTC]

Yush! I think what's keeping him alive is the fact that his daughter is alive and strong! As long as he still thinks of her in his predator heart he will remain one tough cookie!

Oh I was refferening about escape chase scenes in movies! I always love to see the hero/protagonist escape without a scratch! Its gets me every time! Maybe Vex will too!

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XenoPredDragon In reply to Ryu86 [2012-06-30 04:52:31 +0000 UTC]

Awh so very true, and very well said. Thank you.

Ah those kind of escape/chase scenes. Maybe in the future they will have to run.

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Ryu86 In reply to XenoPredDragon [2012-07-01 03:22:42 +0000 UTC]

No problem Vex is my number one favorite alien hunter!

Oh Yush! Hopefully to see some chase scenes!

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XenoPredDragon In reply to Ryu86 [2012-07-01 04:07:45 +0000 UTC]

Oh so glad that you think so. Stay tuned for more!
More characters will come, and I have gathered the comments with "alternative endings & stories" for a long sheet.

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Ryu86 In reply to XenoPredDragon [2012-07-02 23:48:28 +0000 UTC]

Oooh I cant wait for it!
I just saw them its purely epic! Now I gotta submit my questions ^^

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XenoPredDragon In reply to Ryu86 [2012-07-03 00:11:03 +0000 UTC]

I have picked out seven comments that gives about 4-5 alternative endings and stories, which I will use. Yours is one of them.

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Ryu86 In reply to XenoPredDragon [2012-07-04 06:00:32 +0000 UTC]

ooooooh That's awesome! I can't wait to see it!

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XenoPredDragon In reply to Ryu86 [2012-07-05 00:13:35 +0000 UTC]

Might have to wait till I get back home from the road trip. But still got all summer to think it through.
Thanks for showing such an interest!

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Ryu86 In reply to XenoPredDragon [2012-07-06 02:43:02 +0000 UTC]

Take your time my friend have fun on the trip and bring back a postcard! ^_^ You're most welcome! I really have become your biggest fan!

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XenoPredDragon In reply to Ryu86 [2012-07-08 23:33:46 +0000 UTC]

Yeh, maybe I'll do make another postcard! Good idea!
Thanks!

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Ryu86 In reply to XenoPredDragon [2012-07-10 05:03:11 +0000 UTC]

WOOHOO!!! Glad I can help!

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DaikiTheWolfTIC In reply to ??? [2012-06-29 01:26:50 +0000 UTC]

That brave Drone will forever be... in Xenomorph History

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XenoPredDragon In reply to DaikiTheWolfTIC [2012-06-29 03:02:42 +0000 UTC]

Ha yes, he always get the dirty and quit... direct jobs when handling the prisoner.

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DaikiTheWolfTIC In reply to XenoPredDragon [2012-06-29 03:07:07 +0000 UTC]

"Good Job". Said the queen. "I am so proud of you"...

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XenoPredDragon In reply to DaikiTheWolfTIC [2012-06-29 03:16:36 +0000 UTC]

Then the Drone says; "I must go, my planet needs me.".

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DaikiTheWolfTIC In reply to XenoPredDragon [2012-06-29 03:32:34 +0000 UTC]

"No!". Replies the queen clenching her chest. "I need you here Ricardo, by my side". The queen blushes.

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XenoPredDragon In reply to DaikiTheWolfTIC [2012-06-29 03:35:41 +0000 UTC]

I am uncertain if I'll have him named Richardo. Hurr hurr... But I think we got the point.

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DaikiTheWolfTIC In reply to XenoPredDragon [2012-06-29 04:15:26 +0000 UTC]

It'll be fun! I guess so others would too

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XenoPredDragon In reply to DaikiTheWolfTIC [2012-06-29 04:59:49 +0000 UTC]

I guess the fans can call him that if they like. But I will still refer to him as Drone or Worker.

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DaikiTheWolfTIC In reply to XenoPredDragon [2012-06-29 05:12:17 +0000 UTC]

Well.. If the see this they might... I'll still call him Ricardo

but yea call him what you want it's your story after all

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XenoPredDragon In reply to DaikiTheWolfTIC [2012-06-29 06:24:44 +0000 UTC]

Sure, keep it up and others may catch on.
And true, thanks. But so many people have come with so many suggestion to alternative turns or endings in the story. I have picked out some, which I think I can illustrate well enough to draw, and shall do so in a long sheet of suggested alternative endings.

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DaikiTheWolfTIC In reply to XenoPredDragon [2012-06-29 06:57:31 +0000 UTC]

I shall make it into a thing!

thats so nice of you c:

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DragonusPrime In reply to ??? [2012-06-29 01:25:50 +0000 UTC]

can't wait to see were this goes.

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XenoPredDragon In reply to DragonusPrime [2012-06-29 03:02:18 +0000 UTC]

I guess we just will have to wait and see.

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Queen-Koopa In reply to ??? [2012-06-29 01:22:29 +0000 UTC]

wow this is getting brilliant so much

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XenoPredDragon In reply to Queen-Koopa [2012-06-29 02:59:35 +0000 UTC]

Oh glad you think so! I think this is building up into something big!

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Queen-Koopa In reply to XenoPredDragon [2012-06-29 21:31:07 +0000 UTC]

Ohhhh it is to me
BTW would you like me to do a picture for you

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XenoPredDragon In reply to Queen-Koopa [2012-06-30 01:43:37 +0000 UTC]

You don't need my permission to draw something. I am more than happy to get gifts. Thought that is very considerate of you, thank you.

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Queen-Koopa In reply to XenoPredDragon [2012-06-30 23:02:40 +0000 UTC]

heh, no prob, it because you are a great artist and brilliant too, what OC of your you like me to draw

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XenoPredDragon In reply to Queen-Koopa [2012-07-01 01:37:08 +0000 UTC]

Aw you! Well I don't know, do you have any favorite of my oc's that you may enjoy to draw?

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Queen-Koopa In reply to XenoPredDragon [2012-07-02 01:40:40 +0000 UTC]

ok then, i want to draw Vex and Al please

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XenoPredDragon In reply to Queen-Koopa [2012-07-02 02:15:07 +0000 UTC]

Ha sweet! Go ahead, and have fun!

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Queen-Koopa In reply to XenoPredDragon [2012-07-03 21:32:02 +0000 UTC]

[link] i done Vex,

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XenoPredDragon In reply to Queen-Koopa [2012-07-03 23:59:01 +0000 UTC]

Oh! *clicks link*

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Queen-Koopa In reply to XenoPredDragon [2012-07-04 00:45:20 +0000 UTC]

you likey alot

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AryVeldfire In reply to ??? [2012-06-29 01:21:40 +0000 UTC]

Nawww, poor Vex. :C Must be so frustrating for him to not know what the Aliens are going to do to him. And that gooey stuff on his mouth must taste terrible!

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XenoPredDragon In reply to AryVeldfire [2012-06-29 02:57:34 +0000 UTC]

I think he's at the point of his life where he does not care too much. But we'll see how it'll progress, maybe Vex will learn some new life lessons being in the hive.
And probably, luckily they just did it over his mandibles. As he cannot open his mouth without spreading his mandibles property.

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AryVeldfire In reply to XenoPredDragon [2012-06-29 13:04:53 +0000 UTC]

That's true. He's been through so many humiliating predicaments already, so I guess it puts a damper on this one.
Life lessons? Oh boy, I can't wait to see where this is going!

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XenoPredDragon In reply to AryVeldfire [2012-06-30 04:54:10 +0000 UTC]

True, he's been through a lot.
And I'll see if I can come up with anything for Vex to learn.

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jkillyleagh953 In reply to ??? [2012-06-29 01:13:31 +0000 UTC]

Is it me, or is the top right xeno smiling XD

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