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Published: 2016-04-09 13:48:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 4144; Favourites: 43; Downloads: 7
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senpai andΒ once told me that i should make more comic. the reason why is that bcuz i really suck balls at making any characters dialog or any interesting story. also, i always used a very simple english so itll ended up being so damn generic dialog..
anyway, gave me about decision-making comic.. so... i should try it out N here it is..!
p-plz be gentle with me and my horrible dialog..
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when you said "mark", I thought they'll be carving something on him...like, I dunno, a swastika? ...*insert Inglorious Basterds quote here*
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they say "mark" for marking the execution time n date must be take! dang, i really need to make execution manual n rules
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No worries, my brutal brutalest basterd! The important thing is ithe man is not headless
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This is really good, honest 
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This is...How should I put it?The best thing I've read today.
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Loved it. The dialogue was ok, just a few little details but it's still understandable.
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Yeah definitely do more. And I don't think you need top notch dialogue to make a good story or characters. It helps but, I personally don't think it's a great need.
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Cut yourself some slack , you're not a professional yet xD so don't be too hard on yourself.
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yoouuuu siir should really do moar of these, its really breath takingly awesome
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THANKSSSS Very much!
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***INTENSE DELIGHTED SQUEALING***
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I LOVE IT SO MUCH OH MYGOSH
ok so
I thought it was gonna be all goofy, right?
Then its all like BOOMFEELSIN YOUR FAAACCCEEEEEEEEEEEEE so many feels ;;0-0;;
and i LOVE IT its so intense and- i- i--... i just love it. I love it.Β
Amazing. 
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Hurgh! late reply!
:') hngh! THANKS!
.. but the dialog.. i cant help the dialogue.. in fact, dialog or dialogue..?
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Uh....
*seeks the help of autocorrect*
Dialogue
Dialog
Wait they're both there??? 0_0 gotta Google this.
Looks like it's dialogue? It's the one I've always seen.
Idk! It's great any way XDΒ
Better than me..... vanish for two weeks and get hurried in school like me... *sobs silently*
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I love how rare the profanity is. Sometimes, rare profanity can be very strong.
You wouldn't expect a "fuck" to come out all of a sudden. lolz
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Ohohohoh, great! A comic! And as mentioned below: CONFIDENCE!
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my confidence was under the clouds of dialog faultiness most of the time.. T3T but thanks!
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Damn, this was intense and suspenseful. And I had no idea how it was going to end.
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i could help you with the dialogs if you ever wanted to uvu i dont make webcomics YET but i HAVE written alot of stories id want to turn into webcomics when i learn more about it ovo so dialogs are actually pretty fun for me! o7o
but in all honesty, your dialogs are just fine already! you should be more confident in yourself >v<
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of corse i would o7o i work on comics with alot of people! id be glad to help uvu
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I had no problem with the dialogue, I think it was on point 
And it was intense, so cool
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.... QmQ i dont even know what "eloquent" means...
but Thankss!
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"Being eloquent is about using words well."
www.vocabulary.com/dictionary/β¦
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