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Published: 2009-11-22 17:50:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 507; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 6
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-The sea removed us,
moved us.
We are coiled waves of weeds,
beneath sheets of shells, and
we stagger.
The salty, sweet sun burns our eyes,
burns us black, and we melt apart,
uncoiled in corners of coral.
The sun removed us,
ruined us.
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Aw thanks.
And hey, it's you! I log onto DA like once a week now because it's stupid. How have you been?
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Are you still writing much?
I've been good, you know, just being (apparently) a grown up these days, job job job job. Nothing exciting
how are you?
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I haven't written anything since Synthesis. Although, lately I've been having the desire to write prose, which is weird and makes me uncomfortable since I hate writing prose.
I'm okay. I'm starting college finally, which is also weird and makes me uncomfortable.
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I'd love to see some prose from you
good luck with college. what are you studying?
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We'll see about the prose, I have some ideas.
I'll be studying music theory & composition. That is, if my financial aid ever goes through.
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i really like this. i think we write in kind of a similar style, so i was wondering if you could check out some of my work? id really appreciate it!
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the sun and sea removed us - that's wonderfully sad and true
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Thank you. Nice to hear from you again!
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i really love this,
after the last words i wished for more.
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