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She says I crowded herbut I only cared
She says I pushed her
but I only asked "what's wrong".
She says I moved to fast
but I've only just begun.
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rider-on-the-storm [2005-04-04 07:37:51 +0000 UTC]
good poem, i want to see what happens after you have begun
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Xyokai In reply to rider-on-the-storm [2005-04-04 08:49:35 +0000 UTC]
She broke up with me, actually. Maybe we'll be able to get back together later on, but she's still afraid to have a mental and emotional relationship. Thank you for your comment, sorry that it's anticlimactic.
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rider-on-the-storm In reply to Xyokai [2005-04-04 22:36:10 +0000 UTC]
Im sorry to hear that dude, im sure things will end up great in the end
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Xyokai In reply to rider-on-the-storm [2005-04-04 22:48:06 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, I just wish she could really think about it not a a teen, but for her best interests. It really would be good for her to have a long distance relationship, from a psychological point of view, so she's in one where she cannot be hurt, but must allow that person so care.
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rider-on-the-storm In reply to Xyokai [2005-04-05 04:18:03 +0000 UTC]
I agree.
...How much farther away is she from you?
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Xyokai In reply to rider-on-the-storm [2005-04-05 10:30:42 +0000 UTC]
She lives in Chicago and I in Phildelphia. I went out to see her once, but then a week later she broke up with me, nad then I posted 5 poems in 3 days.
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rider-on-the-storm In reply to Xyokai [2005-04-06 00:56:01 +0000 UTC]
jesus...that sucks bro
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Xyokai In reply to rider-on-the-storm [2005-04-06 02:11:18 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, but we're teens, can't act like it would last forever, plus, it's not like she was all too ready for a healthy relationship. Meh, atleast it's gotten me to post plenty of poetry and works.
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rider-on-the-storm In reply to Xyokai [2005-04-06 06:31:39 +0000 UTC]
haha yeah i suppose....
...who knows man, maybe you will find a better person in time...possibly somtime soon
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Xyokai In reply to rider-on-the-storm [2005-04-06 11:08:11 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, thanks for your support
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rider-on-the-storm In reply to Xyokai [2005-04-04 22:36:01 +0000 UTC]
Im sorry to hear that dude, im sure things will end up great in the end
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