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Xyokai — Smile Again
Published: 2005-04-24 14:55:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 55; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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I've beenTrying to smile
For what seems
like forever
And now I'm
Finally able to
With reason
And purpose
All because
you care
And all because
You said yes
I'm finally able
To break this shell
But I need you
To help me find
The way from crazy
I've taken my time
And dealt with problems
But I can't
Finish this alone
I need for
You to help me
So I can smile
Once again
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Comments: 2
That's rather good isn't it! I think, though, u need to split it uup into stanzas. Would make more sense,. Maybe between shell and but I need you. well done!
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Thanks for your comment, I'll take that into considderation when I write another poem.
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