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Published: 2005-05-10 23:41:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 79; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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I stood there, stolid and silentWaiting in false hope
Looking with fixed gaze
The Other side of the mirror
I'm trying to convince
Myself there is no glass
That I can put my hand up
And fall right though
I imagine there's a world
One where I can smile
With people who like me
And no risk in being myself
Then I put my hand up
Tears form in my eyes
The glass is still there
I am still trapped here
I wonder, though
If I had spent
Just one more second
Would there still be glass?
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Comments: 5
rider-on-the-storm [2005-05-11 01:32:47 +0000 UTC]
that is just awesome man, the thoughts you have are the same as mine
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Xyokai In reply to rider-on-the-storm [2005-05-11 15:00:17 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the comment, I'm happy with it, esspecially since I now have 50 poems (though not all posted, obviously) that I have completed, as well as have not lost to the abyss
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rider-on-the-storm In reply to Xyokai [2005-05-11 22:14:12 +0000 UTC]
awesome man, ive only completed like...6 in the past month
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Xyokai In reply to rider-on-the-storm [2005-05-11 23:15:25 +0000 UTC]
Don't worry, the inspiration will come, I also am supposed to be a novelist, but I've been on writers block awhile now with that, just been working on art and poetry, though poetry is slowing now
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