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SK-Vela [2014-09-04 20:24:30 +0000 UTC]
It would be nice if you would color the ones you like the best. Otherwise, great!
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Epitaph-of-Faust [2013-04-14 11:56:40 +0000 UTC]
Sometimes the black/white contrast can be used as a indicator for weight. If you take, as an example, the second from left to right - middle row - you've drawn a lot of the weight on his back, which is illustrated well in context of the contrast. But the third - left to right, top row - looks oddly weighed. This could perhaps be because of the dark cloth in context to the pose pulling his weight a little too much towards his left leg, instead of his left shoulder, whilst having an uneven line striking the opposite way than the weight of the pose would suggest.
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yefumm In reply to Epitaph-of-Faust [2013-04-14 19:52:51 +0000 UTC]
pretty crazy stuff man, never even considered that, thanks!!
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memod [2012-09-21 08:59:01 +0000 UTC]
Those are really nice, I definitely like the shapes that you got going on there. They are strong, bold and edgy. Good stuff =]
Daniel
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yefumm In reply to memod [2012-09-21 09:48:48 +0000 UTC]
hey thanks alot, your stuff is awesome
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TheAlmightyPillock [2012-09-20 12:36:13 +0000 UTC]
Very impressed by this. What size do you work these at? number one could be made easily into a very nice Ammut with some slight changes. ia ctuly really like number 9's head, though possibly nit quite right for Anubis, still make a greate charicter.
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yefumm In reply to TheAlmightyPillock [2012-09-21 09:48:05 +0000 UTC]
hey thanks, these were done on us paper size, each one, and then shrunk to fit onto one page
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phatpandax3 [2012-03-29 17:51:43 +0000 UTC]
i actually love all of these! its such a refreshing change to see them all in different poses.
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yefumm In reply to phatpandax3 [2012-03-29 18:31:03 +0000 UTC]
yay i finally understand your wise words
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StLemons [2012-03-28 13:15:46 +0000 UTC]
On second thought no I don't think the chest skull would work on 15, not without being much smaller like a necklace I guess.
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yefumm In reply to StLemons [2012-03-30 05:41:17 +0000 UTC]
thanks for the awesome comments dude, it took me a while to read and analyze them all, but i really appreciate it, you have my sincerest thanks
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StLemons [2012-03-28 13:09:59 +0000 UTC]
(counting top left to bottom right)
number 10s tail doesn't fit so well with the ancient Egyptian theme, but is otherwise a really nice threatening shape and would cast all kinds of dangerous looking shadows. With that said it looks too huge for number 10s legs to be carrying. It would however maybe fit number 15. If you shortened 15s hair a little and maybe shortened his arms too, just to give them a bit more power (right now they are just sortof hanging like they fell asleep, not very characteristic of a god of death/afterlife).
I would love to see 11s chest skull tried out on 15s form. But it may start to way overcomplicate him.
What's great about 15 is that he basically takes on a lot of what makes greek gods good, he's masculine, powerful and healthy. Sure he represents death but he is not necessarily the personification of the concept of being dead. He is allowed to be more like a leader or a lord to be respected, worshipped and feared.
With all this said, 13 and 17 would both be good if you WERE to be just sortof symbolizing death. At their best they would never say a word, they would just come and go in the backdrop. not always necessarily being the focus even, just ominous and occasionally overpowering. Like how if someone was having a fever dream this bloody dead mess of a dog would be standing over them just breathing on them in the dark. 13 would be my favoured one for that, but 17 would work in a more Neil Gaiman way where he actually probably would speak to people sometimes and be sociable.
number 2 would be an excellent anubis in a cyberpunk future. Where he visits homeless people to carry them away. haha.
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Rheatheranger In reply to StLemons [2012-04-17 10:36:58 +0000 UTC]
nice comment I followed it all, however, I wouldn't change anything on no.17 except maybe shorten the arms a bit as u said
and maybe change the weapon on no. 9 it is too simple...those chars are amaizing and I would like to se a special scene for every one of them
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