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Yolly-anda β Chapter 7 - The Offer
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Edit: I just changed the title ;3This is just the preview picture of chapter 7 of my fanfic.
Guess who xD
Yes, this is Silverpelt and Stonefur. They are at Sunningrocks in Riverclan's side, that's why therer's so much rocks around..
Mmm I should have made the stream bigger. Oh well, hope you guys like it.
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Artwork Β© Yolly~
warriors cats Β© Erin hunter
Made in photoshop CS4
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This is just awesome,I love how their eyes stand out so well ^.^
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Oh,thats a amazing Picture!
I love Stonefur^^
His blue eyes were beautifulβ₯
The white cat is still beautiful,too<3
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Not trying to be rude, but I could barely tell that was a river...but everything else is great !
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Still you did a good job, better than me of course
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This has been featured here:
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Thanks so much for submitting such beautiful work!
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CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM ALERT!!!
That stream looks unnatural. It looks more like a stripe of paint than a land feature. Streams usually zigzag and curve a little, and the banks rise noticeably. Your banks look a little too flat. It would also look nice if a couple of stones poked out of the water.
But I wuv your kittehs!
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Thank you to the compliment or the criticism???
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bah, I don't mind helpong tips ;3
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I are SO EXCITED 
And such purdy expressions
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It's good but maybe try to make the stream banks a little rugged so you can tell it's a stream
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You know river banks how they're not smooth?
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ah okay well I'll try next time ^^
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I love it!! It looks like it's from
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actual movie~
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I love it!! It looks like it's from
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actual movie~
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welcome~
(sorry about the typos in that last comment 
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Awesome! It is great. Do not know where to find fault
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So pretty 8D I love how everything is colourless except from the eyes!!
I love your style so much *_*
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Is the story you're going to animate?
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into a storyboard, ya :3
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DARN IT, you had me all excited for the chapter! DX
Oh well, it's a gorgeous picture, the only thing that bothers me though is the background seems so plain compared to them. Their popping out, while the background looks so...dull.
-shot dead for critique-
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lol It's okay, I don't mind. But I hope you'll grow to like that style since my storyboard with mainly be like that. I mean, the characters will pop out while the background looks motionless and dull. It's hard to make things pip out without color xD;
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omg i love it =3
I like how stonefur looks =3
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wooo Stonefur looks a lot like I imagined Bluestar 
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I could 
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You shall do this FIRST! Because your eyes are the most epic thing everr
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This is a instent 
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Awww, I just can't get enough of Silverpelt!
I love Stonefur's expressions in this one too
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