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Yon-kitty — Yori and Blackie
Published: 2011-10-04 08:28:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 5340; Favourites: 236; Downloads: 72
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I was drawing a concept for Yori's outfit and I just felt like drawing Blackie too XDBlackie is not mine though, this character belongs to :3
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Hello, just wanted to say that you did a fantastic work.
Keep doing your best~
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Lovely characters. I love the simplicity of the piece. It's so clean.
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This one is really a great lineart ... 
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Great job!!! i really like the way you colored it!!!! nice job!
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Waaw ='D They're really pretty <3 And their movement and anatomy are just perfect to my mind ^^
Good work ='D
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aww thank you so much !!! >w< <3 I'm still learning it , but since I started studying realistic anatomy I noticed a huge improvement in all my drawings xDD
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Yay! You're welcome dear ^^
Hehe! I think I gotta watch all your drawings to see the improvement, but the few that I've already seen were excellent :'D
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Yori looks good. Don't worry about her design. She looks simple, it's the flamboyancy of Blackie next to her that gives you that impression. Both characters look great and you have such a gentle style.
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Blackie's design looks very similar to the character I'm writing about. o.O Nice!
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Heh, great minds think alike, im glad you like her
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wow really? hahaha that's interesting!! If you ever draw her I'd be curious to see it (even though her design isn't mine mwahahaha XD)
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*sigh* sadly, I don't draw. I'm just here to admire other's creative work. I have a detailed idea in my head, but it looks awful on paper. XD
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ahahaha really? (you kidding me?? huh?? lool XD) hahaha jk that's Yori! 
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I prefer the simple things ^^
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yori looks more action oriented (if that makes sense) and more appropriate if she's suppose to be a thief (based on what i saw in another pic)
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aw thanks!
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small details are good. just try to think of things a thief would need, like pockets. thus it becomes a balancing act between being fancy and being sensible.
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My goodness I think I'm in love with the girl on the left!
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really? 
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Heck no, she is fantastic! Clearly the better of the two!
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o*o
This
this is amazing!!!
I love Yori's design, and she doesn't look boring near Blackie! She just probably needs some things added! If you don't want to change the dynamics of the outfit I suggest adding a trim somewhere to the lining of her top or her shorts and short straps. You can also add some jewelry or something, if I have time I could redline it with some new additions :3?
I love how you drew Blackie's older design *u* Although here she looks the age of what she is at the beginning of the story (at the beginning of the story she looks like her younger self in the ref, which is the more elaborate princess look). The one you drew is the one where she and Youko become thieves. I love how you drew her though, she looks so so precious! It is as though younger Blackie decided to dress up as older Blackie <3
I really love both their hair, you made Blackie's curls look so so luscious!!!
My favorite though has to be Yori's belt buckle, that buckle is so sexy and kick butt >3<
I love her boots too! Cute design >3< a little more additions and it will be just as cool as Blackie's outfit (as if it already isn't, I personally like it :3)
Thank you so so much!!!~
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indeed!! I think straps would make a nice add! I was also thinking of fishnet stockings, not on the entire leg though, or maybe in just one of them
sure you can do that if you want! ^^ If she had jewelry I'd probably add a small collar necklace or some kind of earring in one of her ears :3
But you're right, I think that is because I only know her when she was young though... so I have this idea stuck in my mind yet xP but I'm really glad you like it! ^^ I love drawing curly/wavy hair on girls I think it looks a lot more cute so I really enjoyed drawing her hair
and aw thank you >u< I had to draw at least one detail that wasn't so plain hahahaha XD
by the way I don't doubt I'll be stealing your character at least one more time if you don't mind! mwahaha
If I found more people with cool OC's I was thinking in maybe creating a group for that... (?) I think YYH has too many fans that end up liking yaoi pairings only xD it's cute, but we need more variations too! mwahaha
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I think if you add fishnet stockings to just one that it would be cool! You could also add bandages to add to the idea that she might have been in a skirmish (in some of Blackie's designs she actually has bandages on her, just so she looks more action oriented).
In your third paragraph you said you have "this idea stuck in my mind yet" it would be better to say "so I have that idea of her stuck in my head" or you could just remove the yet since it isn't needed (so you could say "the idea stuck in my mind"). Aww, thank you!!! I am glad you enjoyed her hair, my personal favorite is her younger design's hair, it is so intricate *U*"
Aww, I don't mind, use her all you want dear <3 just please make sure you refer to me as the creator <3 but if you do draw her (say if you draw a scene in the story) stick to the reference i.e., blackie's thieve clothing (above) wouldn't be worn while she is young and not yet a thief. But you can still play with clothing and dress her anyway you want--she wouldn't wear the same outfit everyday, but try to stick to the central idea of the story~ If you don't mind my saying <3
Yeah!!! We could totally start a group called the "Thieves Guild" (which might be a bad idea considering art theft LOL, but we could make sure people realized thieves had to do with YYH OC's) or maybe something, we could come up with ideas, I would be glad to run it with you!!!
I was thinking, I could have Yon make a cameo appearance later on in the fic (once they cross the sea to go to Makai.
And, one funny thing I noticed that other people seemed to not have--didn't yon have a skinny short haired cat's tail? Not that I don't like her new poofy persian cat tail, I think it is precious *A* I just noticed the tail change x'D
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I thought of bandages, but if she's still alive it's because people were rarely able to significantly hurt her(you'll see why!
Thank you for actually correcting my English! Many people don't even when I ask, that bothers me a little bit xD
If we ever create this group, it's gonna be so fun! The only thing I get worried about is that I am having less time to dedicate to manga and this dA account, so if you really want to do that and don't have a problem with it, you being the founder (or the queen of the thieves! XD) would maybe be the most reasonable option I think. ^^ I love the name !! I think we will have to let it clear on the description that people can post OCxcanon pairings with all the YYH characters they want and not only Kurama
and omg !! *.* if you really put her on your fic, I'll be so happy!! She always had the poofy tail , although in the past I used to change it sometimes XD ahahaha
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Nice! I cannot wait to learn more about it!!!
Haha, no problem, I feel a little bad because I don't want to sound harsh when I am being honest ;A ; instead of "that" it would be better to say: which bothers me a little bit
Haha I know right?!! That is the problem with me too ;A ; I am SO busy with pre-med (seriously, pretty soon I will only be able to check dA on the weekends...and maybe not even then!) But we can always co-operate the group and have people help us run it~ But I am not sure, y'know? Aww haha, you could be the princess x3 Definitely! We would have to make a discrepancy in that!
Aww good!!! I hope you liked what you read (if you have finished it!). I am going to complete some chapters this weekend--hopefully--so when I do do you want me to continue e-mailing the fic to you :3? But yeah, just let me know what her personality is and etc. central things like that. Oh okay, I could have sworn I have seen her with a thin tail somewhere OTL. my bad.
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