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I asked for a red pen
but she gave me
blue.
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Comments: 26
AyeAye12 [2013-12-01 11:54:24 +0000 UTC]
How hauntingly tragic. I pity the peons who simply say this is a statement; it is more than any vernacular can comprehend to usher into reality. How hauntingly brilliant.
I like the bit where she gives you a pen.
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your-methamphetamine In reply to AyeAye12 [2013-12-04 16:14:46 +0000 UTC]
god, I know, I can't even begin to explain how achingly tragic it was to hold it when she gave it to me.
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thepoetboy [2013-11-25 20:11:36 +0000 UTC]
ooooooh i love the simplicity its all staccato and heavy impact
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your-methamphetamine In reply to thepoetboy [2013-11-26 16:32:05 +0000 UTC]
haha, thank you!
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your-methamphetamine In reply to roylapost [2013-11-25 15:50:40 +0000 UTC]
didn't iiiiit? I'm so brilliant.
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Adrolyn [2013-11-23 15:33:13 +0000 UTC]
Not pretentious at all. She simply wanted to be with you so much, that she sped toward you so fast that it blue-shifted the red pen.
I'm sure that's what you meant.
Ur awzum.
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your-methamphetamine In reply to Adrolyn [2013-11-24 14:25:17 +0000 UTC]
aww, you're lovely. thank you <3
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your-methamphetamine In reply to SpicyCereal [2013-11-24 14:25:04 +0000 UTC]
BECAUSE IT DOESN'T MAKE SENSE
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SpicyCereal In reply to your-methamphetamine [2013-11-24 19:06:52 +0000 UTC]
WULL YEAH I GET THAT BUT I JUST
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0hgravity [2013-11-23 09:24:14 +0000 UTC]
wow! this is an amazing poem! I'm so blown away by this. I don't even know what to say but I'm going to say it anyway what I can't say...
okay so I think this poem is about the future's past in someone's eyes. like oh my gawd so powerful.
yeah, that's all I can say. keep writing foreeeeeeverrrrr. I'm your biggest fannnnnnn!!!!1111!
this is amazing
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your-methamphetamine In reply to 0hgravity [2013-11-23 09:26:11 +0000 UTC]
ew mah gahd thenk yew so much!eleventyone!!11!
we put a LOT of THOUGHT into this and you totally read into our depth! you deserve to be our fan, maybe a little <3
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0hgravity In reply to your-methamphetamine [2013-11-23 09:26:59 +0000 UTC]
maybe a little????!?! are you kidding MAYBE A LOTTTT. gawd. I'm kind of insulted right now
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your-methamphetamine In reply to 0hgravity [2013-11-23 09:27:54 +0000 UTC]
well maybe if you had meaningless sex and quoted band lyrics you didn't know about you could be a part of us
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0hgravity In reply to your-methamphetamine [2013-11-23 09:29:47 +0000 UTC]
ohhhhh OOOOOOOH I see how it is. y'all think y'all are so much better than me! well maybe you are ): I'm not cool.
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your-methamphetamine In reply to 0hgravity [2013-11-23 09:31:01 +0000 UTC]
yeah you'll never be
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