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Published: 2008-03-29 10:22:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 4866; Favourites: 46; Downloads: 73
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Well, not really a curve.These days are so hectic I only managed to submit these kinda stuff. Who wants this kinda slipshot stuff in their gallery anyway....
Screwed up Sakuragi (The bald guy...)'s face, Rukawa (2nd guy from right)'s posture, and gorilla's face. Meh. At least it doesn't look dirty anymore, thanks to photoshop. But....I'm hugely unsatisfied about this. Posted here because I want critiques.
Fanart once again.....(I need to be more original, SHIT, and create original art....Why the hell I can't do it???)
Slam Dunk CharactersΒ©Takehiko Inoue
ArtΒ©YVS51 or Yenee
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Comments: 45
Maaaan that's soooo nice! I looooved it! <3 <3
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man, this i spretty good already! i think it looks awesome the way it is!
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Not nearly enough Slam Dunk Fan art out there! I'm gonna try to do more SlamDunk art myself. Great job on this though. Your style shines while still staying true to the Characters.
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Thanks a lot! 
Looking forward to yours!
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Cool idea! It's really hard to make such poses but you did really great!
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Wow this is cool, don't worry about getting little bits wrong it still looks great and you can tell who everyone is perferctly *Huge Slam Dunk Fan Here* XD
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*shakes you violently* REALLY????? I LOVE SLAM DUNK TO BITS XD
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Yay i read the whole manga series recently, my friends are annoyed with me though because i can't stop talking about it hehe also i have done two pieces of FanArt on it myself which im about to upload soon XD
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I can't stop talking bout it when I 1st started reading it too XD ok, looking forward to yours!
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Heheh well you've seen it now XD i'll try and do more and ill try and do something more creative too but i'm still learning so there never any good lol
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Nice^^
I think you've did Maki's face the best(that's Maki right?). you did a great job at all of their poses though... But still, Gori's dunk pwnd them all!
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Yea, that's Maki.
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Woah! You're really good at anatomy and detail!!
You've improved so much since I saw you C:
Excellent work!
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Hmm critiques, I think the third guy's poster is a bit awkward when compared to the rest. He's taking a step but it looks like he's just cemented there. I like the concept of it though, cool dynamics as usual :3
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Oh wee! Thank you so much for the detailed comment! lol cemented there...XD
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lol, I wrote '
Haha, hope that wasn't too harsh.
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I...don't have anything to critique....
Dammit, why did you improve so fast?? >.<
...wait! I found one! You made Sakuragi looked short and fat!!!
(okay...that's not me who said that, that's my maid, she's a huge fan of Sakuragi... =.= )
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XD Gosh, now you've influenced your maid to go into comics too??? Man...I don't know what to say.....
Let's say Sakuragi had a sudden love for takoyaki lately. XD
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I influenced her a looooooong time ago....
I'm a bad influence, I really am! >;D
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Dont let me see you and your maid at an anime convention....I'll laugh till I drop XD
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...well...that might not be a bad idea...
i mean, I always take her along to comic rental store, everyone knows her already...
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Wargh, you'd even bring her along....Dont tell me next time if you're coming here you're bringing her along too....Maw! XD
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Ohmygod. You AMAZE me! With every drawing, I'm more and more in awe of your skill. O_O <3 I love the dynamism and anatomy.
Possibly, the only thing I could crit (because I have no idea about basketball movements) is that maybe the second guy from the right could be drawn in 3/4 view, because the sequence near the end sort of flows in that direction. Does that make sense? ^^ ; lol sorry, I'm bad at describing. orz
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Oh okay, I get your point. And naah, your description ain't hard to understand XD And thanks a lot! You're improving fast too!
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oi oi oi!!! No jabbing at self allowed! Something is better than nothing, right?
I think the last two guys' transition is not smooth enough.
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*Jabs at self*
Ok....Maybe without the guy in the middle it'll be better. Thanks!
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+ the details are well done
+ great job on having the shortest to tallest, nice thinking, if its a coincidence, well, heh,. great stuff!
- but you gotta have the 1st guy (dun like saying their names, sorry) be aligned with the others. hes flying.
- no other comment.
great job!
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What no other comment.
Serious? Then I'll have to stick him to the ground then XD Thanks!
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that means, that is all.
but i can suggest something to try out, making the inking have thick vs thin strokes, have you seen those American comic inking? yeah, like so. even if. this is japanese art. i know, but, just suggesting...
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I'm not japanese, hence it's not considered japanese art. XD Even though the characters are japanese. I'm still not used with that G-pen yet, so patience....XD
I'd scratch the paper and make a hole outta it with the sharp nib....
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haha.. its ok, it takes time to master it. keep it up!
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this is a great piece, i love that you made each one a different player!
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Thank you! You have no idea how happy you made me XD
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i'm glad that your happy, this is a really good piece!
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