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Published: 2015-08-30 19:44:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 1029; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 4
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...on some more clouds.Because Pit is just badass like that.
And because Nintendo logic.
And I think I kinda killed the shading. (Who wants to help me hide the body?)
Yup, this is the reason I've been posting nothing for 2 weeks, aside from a squiggly and rushed ref.
w hoops I messed up on the right foot *cries forever* oh well just pretend he has paws
y'know, like he's still got a bit of dog in him from Chapter 18 :'D
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Comments: 16
This peice is gorgeous, no doubt one of your best works and it's Beautiful. I think that it's stunning but since you asked for a critique I'm going to write one, and because I think it's amazing I'm going to have to be a little bit nitpicky to try and give you the best advise possible, so please don't be offended.
Vision:
I think that the art in question is very pretty, your depiction of the angel is gorgeous and show the innocence and playfulness of him well, I applaud you on that. I don't think that there is much to critique here
Originality:
The only reason why I gave you a four for this is because it's not your own character (according to your bio it's from Nintendo) other then that the design and the setup are very well-coordinated
Technique:
Your shading is stunning. The way the shading blends and the folds in the cloth are perfect and the anatomy is well done. The colors are rich but not to eye blazing when you do use color. The only thing I can actively find wrong with it is the lack of "flow" the art looks very still rather then the way somebody would sit in reality, this is a tough skill to master, and many people struggle with it (myself included) my reccomendation is to go to a public place and watch people, as creepy as it sounds that's one of the best ways, other ways it to draw with references until you get better at it yourself. Not to say that your drawing is completely laking in motion, you have improved a lot from your older works.
Impact:
I think that this rating is used for art with a message so I'm not sure what to put for this one. I think that's it's one of your best drawings yet so I will remember it. I apologize for this one
There you go! Sorry for being nitpicky, I'm honestly just trying to help, please don't be mad ;-;
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TWO WWEEEEEKKS *cries*
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YES NINTENDO LOGIC
HNGG He looks so cute <3
;; And that beauts shading <3
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Nintendo logic is best
AND TWO WEEKS
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