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Published: 2014-06-04 18:20:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 778; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 6
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Im trying to create something catchy for Blender Cookie Architectural Render contest. I would love to get some feedback so I can improve my work before posting itEdit:
Thanks to everyone who helped - I managed to get to 2nd place
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Comments: 10
goocio [2014-07-08 17:17:26 +0000 UTC]
Congratulations - great 2 place in Blender Cookie contest !!!
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Zajeczyca In reply to goocio [2014-07-08 18:25:30 +0000 UTC]
Dzieki, nie wiem jak to siΔ staΕo...
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Delmuu [2014-06-04 22:20:42 +0000 UTC]
beautyfull, i really love this.
Nice color and love this light.Β
Only one thing seems bit strange: the handle on door, maybe a bit lower in the side.
I find the rest perfect.
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Zajeczyca In reply to Delmuu [2014-06-05 05:33:30 +0000 UTC]
Thanks Lu I will change that as soon as I come back fom work
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LuceamLuceo [2014-06-04 18:48:34 +0000 UTC]
First of all: wonderful work! I really love the depth of it and the soft DOF, as well as the refracted reflection in the water carafe and your choice of materials - they look really very beautiful. And the blue plaid is a real eye catcher. Overall with all the little details in here I like as well very much, how you are guiding my view through your work!
Three little things are catching my eye: first thing is the handle of the door in the back, it seems to sit slightly too high. Another thing is the switch on light of the bed table lamp. I am very much aware, why you decided to switch it on, but nevertheless it makes me asking myself, why is it switched on during the day.
And last thing are the cherry branches themself. They look a bit artificial, but this may comes because the branches are that dark.
But all together a really wonderful work!
Good luck for you in the BC contest!
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Zajeczyca In reply to LuceamLuceo [2014-06-05 05:33:07 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much for your comment! I will re-render stuff you mentioned. That helped me alot, thanks!!
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LuceamLuceo In reply to Zajeczyca [2014-06-05 08:01:42 +0000 UTC]
Very welcome! I am glad, I could help a bit
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