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Another terror filled page, featuring Tiamat from the earlier frame I submitted.Enjoy
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did you stop making these pages if so it's a shame
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They're still around, it's just other things got in the way, requests, commissions, studio work and of course, most hampered by real life day-to-day stuff. I'm in the middle of getting things done, it's just one thing at a time and the other stuff, only when I am taking a break from the one thing!
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glad too hear that i can read the end of the story,
it suck when a wrighter stops when the story is so great
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I was refurring to Tiamat, you know, five heads, five fases.
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Heh, I know, I was treading on the popular conspiracy theory, that Dungeon Master was the one keeping them trapped and also that Uni was there to lure them back into the realm whenever they got close to going home
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It is, I've just had no where to draw properly for the past year and a bit, but I am just finishing off another page and will be up shortly!
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are you going do the ending the never have released
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Yus, I have the script and have plotted a adaption for the comic version.
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great thanks for doing that
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WOW! A comic! Amazing pencil shadings and the various poses are great! Awesome story. Please keep it up!!
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I will tell you, you're certainly an excellent artist! The dragon is certainly an excellent example, as are all the backgrounds- you are a master of texture and shading.
My only issue is a small one, but still a noticeable one: sound effects. When the dragon roars, it sounds almost benign ['Rarrhhh', with proper capitalization, in Comic Sans MS font, seems a bit too gentle for such a diabolical creature]. What I suggest is using a heavier, maybe more jagged font, and using capital letters to suggest ferocity. You know, 'RARRHHH!' instead of 'Rarrhhh.'
...That's all, though! [It may look like a lot, but it's really only one suggestion.]
Keep up the good work!
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Good suggestion, easily sorted
Thanks for the constructive comment
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Change has been implemented
And thanks!
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Hey, it looks great!
Awesome, even!
Nice job! ...Um, I mean, nicer job!
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Yup, much scarier than 'Comic Sans'
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Glad you like it 
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You catched the drama in the scene... I love the DM's face.
And now I'll wait for Venger LoL
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Thanks.
I also did a slight experiment with this page. The rivets on Hank, Bobby and the DM's costumes looked a little flat when I finished the other pages, but this time, they look much better.
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