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Published: 2005-06-26 16:53:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 2422; Favourites: 32; Downloads: 193
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As a small child, she could remember her special friend. Her father found his work more stimulating than the company of his own daughter, but she was never alone. Her mother's social schedule left her in the care of nannies whom provided her with no more warmth than that of the snow outside her window, but she was never alone. He was there, with his ember eyes and Cowboy hat, bringing a warm spot in her otherwise cold heart. Making her laugh, listening to her stories, embracing her when she wanted.He was her Dearest Friend. Her only friend.
She had told her Parents once of her Friend, during a particularly boring social event, at least by her standard, and they rewarded her imagination by sending her to a place called Shady Hills. They said that she was an Embarrassment. Her father spitting out curses that she simply couldn't be their child, and her mother simply shaking her head piteously, saying such things as she was better off in a place where she wouldn't offend their peers. She was taken to a room where they would send electricity into her skull, until she could no longer see his bony face, and his sweet voice turned to no more than a whisper. She was given time to interact with the other that resided here, and she had told them of her Friend, with his Cowboy hat and his Ember Eyes, which always earned her another session in the Electrical Shock Chamber until he had abandoned her altogether. So she stayed in the Sanitarium, alone in the Dark.She knew that she couldn't escape this place, with the exception of sleep.
A very very long sleep.
She began to hoard the pills that they gave her, the ones that made the world dull, and gray around her. After a week, she had a good handful of the poison, and popped them into her mouth.
"Spit them out" A voice said, and reflexively she did so, and looked around the padded room. In the corner she saw two red pins of light, staring at her. Her face screwed into a mask. "What do you care!" She spat, "You've abandoned me a long time ago, like everyone else"
The lights blinked "I've never abandoned you, it was they that built the wall around you, but you've weakened that wall. Do as you have done this week, and you will see..." The light blinked out again. She didn't want to believe. Belief brought nothing but heartbreak. She had believed that her parents would come for her, but they never came. She believed that the White coated men would come to their senses and release her, but they didn't. She did as the lights said however, knowing that she would have more pills to bring her the relief she wanted if she was again disappointed. The week passed, and no sign of the lights again, as she considered the pills.
The Door suddenly unlatched, and in the glare of the hall lights, a familiar figure stood in the doorway. His Red Ember eyes shined brighter than she had ever seen, and the familiar Cowboy hat placed rakishly on his head. His bones gleamed like Ivory in the light as he beaconed to her. "You gonna sit there all night, or are you ready to leave..." and for the first time in a very long time, there was a warm spot in her Cold heart.
The Shady Hills Sanitarium had never had an escape from within their walls, with the exception of the Teenager named Keade Nataka. She had some how passed through the locked Cell, and evaded several checkpoints in her escape. Other inmates mentioned something about a Cowboy Hat, but these were discounted to their Dementia. To confound the mystery, a single Skeletal footprint was found in the snow, next to bare footprints which must have belonged to her. Perhaps an orderly had assisted her, or the Cell Door had not been Latched completely. The Inmates knew the truth, however.
Her friend had come to collect her.
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Comments: 47
ositox7 [2012-07-10 05:46:07 +0000 UTC]
I'm very very touched how the story was simply enjoyed hope you do more cause i'll read it and probably like it as well
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zephre In reply to ositox7 [2012-07-10 07:12:44 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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ositox7 In reply to zephre [2012-07-10 16:28:56 +0000 UTC]
your welcome and yes i truly did
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xXlamiaXdeaXx [2007-09-02 23:20:32 +0000 UTC]
o.o
[-heavily applauds-]
Brilliant.
Wow.
o_O
xx.
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zephre In reply to xXlamiaXdeaXx [2007-09-04 17:04:13 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! Im glad you liked it, and thanks for the Fav!
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StupidStoner [2007-04-13 03:16:50 +0000 UTC]
the story made me cry because i felt like that for a week.
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zephre In reply to StupidStoner [2007-04-13 21:46:44 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, Im glad you liked it
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StupidStoner In reply to zephre [2007-04-14 00:01:11 +0000 UTC]
When you were little littler did you ever feel not real like you were an observer, like in those kind of dreams were you are looking at yourself doing stuff.
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VampireKitten08 [2006-12-29 20:30:56 +0000 UTC]
*claps* wow, that was an amazing story...it was touching, and very compelling... maybe you should write a longer story, same idea though...
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zephre In reply to VampireKitten08 [2006-12-30 17:24:04 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. I have more planned, I just haven't had time to put it all together into something that would make sense. Thanks again!
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Eddie-McGee [2006-10-07 21:39:19 +0000 UTC]
Oooh... Creepy.
That was really awsome. lOVe the pic and the story.
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zephre In reply to Eddie-McGee [2006-10-08 06:56:16 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, Im glad you liked it!
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Arts-Magazine [2006-06-15 11:18:15 +0000 UTC]
Congartulations!
Your work have been featured at :devarts-magazines:
in 'Theme of the Week' !
- =Mistress-gothca
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RHEMORA [2006-05-26 01:25:49 +0000 UTC]
excellent work, i really like this one :clap. well done
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zephre In reply to RHEMORA [2006-05-26 02:40:44 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, Im glad you liked it! It was alot of fun to do..
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ArtPhr33k [2006-03-10 23:04:20 +0000 UTC]
Wonderful story! I love her pose, very relaxed, great hand placement on her too. Man, that has got to be the freakiest skeleton I have ever seen! Great stuff!!!
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zephre In reply to ArtPhr33k [2006-03-10 23:53:53 +0000 UTC]
Yup, Mr. Bones is one of a kind. Next time he may have Big Furry Chaps! Thanks for the comment!
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celestialblue [2005-11-01 17:14:33 +0000 UTC]
Wow, the story that goes along with this is chilling.
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zephre In reply to celestialblue [2005-11-01 18:47:07 +0000 UTC]
Im glad you liked it. I was planning to continue it more once I have time.. Darn work!
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zephre In reply to Bloodredsangre [2005-10-29 01:17:43 +0000 UTC]
Thanks Im glad you liked her, and thanks for letting me into your contest.
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AblativeLove [2005-10-28 19:20:41 +0000 UTC]
wow...He looks just like jack. But jack left me when the little grey men came. Btw, awesome picture. totally
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zephre In reply to AblativeLove [2005-10-29 01:20:12 +0000 UTC]
THanks.... and thank the little grey men as well, Im certain thay had somthing to say about it... I like to listen to the magic Coconut myselff.....
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AblativeLove In reply to zephre [2005-10-30 14:48:01 +0000 UTC]
I've yet to meet the magic coconut. shame. sounds cool.
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zephre In reply to AblativeLove [2005-10-31 21:20:07 +0000 UTC]
Oh you will ... you will...
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elefAntti [2005-10-28 14:49:55 +0000 UTC]
Great piece. I like the story too
The idea is wonderfully disturbed.
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zephre In reply to elefAntti [2005-10-28 15:25:09 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, Im glad you liked it. I should be adding to that soon...
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zambicandy [2005-10-28 08:10:40 +0000 UTC]
wow this is really awesome. I love the lighting. Fave**
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zephre In reply to zambicandy [2005-10-28 15:30:19 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, More will be comming soon!
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zephre In reply to mizukoiuchi [2005-10-03 15:34:24 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, Im glad you liked it!
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zephre In reply to paintgirl [2005-06-30 16:30:43 +0000 UTC]
Thank You, your the best!! I really like your work as well
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paintgirl In reply to zephre [2005-06-30 16:32:01 +0000 UTC]
Hey sexy stud man, flattery will get you everywhere. But there is a line..lol
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zephre In reply to The-Blesser [2005-06-26 17:21:51 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for looking and adding me to your Favorites, Im glad you liked it .
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Iryss [2005-06-26 16:55:49 +0000 UTC]
Welcome to DA! This is really good, a little creepy though.. May I ask what program you used?
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zephre In reply to Iryss [2005-06-26 17:08:07 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the comment and Viewing. It started in Poser, with the Aiko figure, Base skeleton and an Enviroment package freebie. Afterwards it got alot of cosmetic changes in Photoshop 7. The story came out of my sick little head. Im glad you liked it...
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