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Zephyr-azure — Zeph's SoulSilver Nuzlocke 15.5
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Published: 2015-04-29 02:16:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 4334; Favourites: 53; Downloads: 5
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There's so many things about this page that feel cluttered. The speech bubbles, the sudden change in Zeph's and Morty's tempers, how quickly it transitioned to the end. I had to cut SO MANY THINGS outta Burned Tower just to allow the story to progress somewhat ("kill your darlings" they say).
Still, stylistically, this might be the best page yet, and there's more to come for sure (just not until aprox. mid-May, I'm busy as hell for the rest of the next couple weeks). In the meantime, I'll be revising the story again and cutting out extraneous scenes so that I don't end up blocked for another 8 months again
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I do see some new changes within your style Zeph! I can't really put my finger on it, but it looks pleasing to the eye ^^
I guess Morty's temper just took a dive because of his broken teacup that could've been gifted from a good (maybe dead..?) friend? Would sound like a good reason to me, at least.
Love the Croconaw who's just 'wheeee'ing from one side of the building to the other xD
Good to see you're making updates again!
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Hey if it's pleasing then it's good, right? ^^
Well, the gift part was supposed to be a joke, but it would definitely fit better than what I had in mind XD (planning to do an extra comic or two in the future following Morty's POV)
Haha, thanks!
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I would say a lot more on how amazing this page is but I am dumb and really bad with words XD
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Shhhh say no more
Thanks a lot :''DD
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The faces and expressions in this are EVERYTHING! xD
And that last panel xD
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Haha XD it only seemed like the most natural way to react after finding your psycho rival
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I've been waiting forever to use that line XD
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Zeph's danger radar is a question to humanity
a very entertaining one though
her fACE IN THAT LAST PANEL THO
and silver looks like a frickin psychopath
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Haha isn't it great, watching as people lose their minds and burst in anger tantrums? Quite the spectacle
He kind of is though lol
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Very entertaining indeed (´▽`)
good point
aLSO I finally figured out who Zephyr reminds me of, Rizzoli from Rizzoli and Isles :0
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*looks up Rizzoli on wikipedia* hmm that's almost about right
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I was watching the show and it hit me like holy crap
she's like a slightly more mentally stable zeph
bruh
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my god
her expression in the last panel
i swear to god
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It does feel kind of cluttered, but it's still good. So, uh... Yeah.
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Yeah I kind of just wanted to get this page outta the way lol
Next page will have much more effort put into though, now that we're getting to the good stuff ;D
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While we're on the topic, I really like what you did with your Umbreon's personality.
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Thanks, I'm really glad you do!
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