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Zephyrift — Snow Clan Story?
Published: 2013-05-30 21:57:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 216; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 0
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Description Swiftstar looked in the direction of the end of camp. So much has changed in her Clan ever since she became leader. Her best friend had kits, she had gotten an apprentice…so much. She counted the members of her Clan. Twenty-eight, she counted. That was far more than the original six they started off with. The lively leader had eight lives left. She hadn't lost a life since five months before, battling rouges. They leaved her land alone.
Snowkit’s land, she thought. After all, we owe much to our fallen kit. She didn't deserve to die, and I regret that I could not save her. She walked to the center of camp. Shyfoot passed her. “Something is on your mind. What is it?” he meowed. She knew Shyfoot had an easy time of telling what is on her mind, so she daren’t resist, or else he’ll just push on.
“I regret Snowkit’s death. I wish I can make it up to you all.”
“Is that it?”
Swiftstar flicked her tail. “Yes.”
“Don’t think about it. Snowkit gave you a life for playfulness and joy.” Shyfoot sook his head. “Why bother telling you? You’ll just worry anyway.”
“Thank you, Shyfoot. I…I just need someone to confide in.” As she said that, Nightstep and Crystalpelt padded up. Leopardsnow padded out of the medicine den.
“Swiftstar, you can always confide in me,” her best friend told her.
“I suppose you won’t leave me alone. Okay, fine. I’ll tell you later, Crystalpelt, I promised Tigerpaw to go hunting.”
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Comments: 20

SkywardSylphina [2013-06-01 12:57:33 +0000 UTC]

Yes continue! This sounds great so far buddy!

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Zephyrift In reply to SkywardSylphina [2013-06-01 13:30:57 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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SkywardSylphina In reply to Zephyrift [2013-06-01 14:05:50 +0000 UTC]

Welcome!

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Katrov [2013-05-31 21:24:49 +0000 UTC]

Nice! I haven't read warriors in a while, and this sounds great! Continue!

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Zephyrift In reply to Katrov [2013-05-31 22:06:17 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Katrov In reply to Zephyrift [2013-05-31 22:07:37 +0000 UTC]

Np!

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sclongami [2013-05-31 10:10:52 +0000 UTC]

Yes, continue! I miss the Warriors so bad, so this'll be a close second!

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Zephyrift In reply to sclongami [2013-05-31 19:03:37 +0000 UTC]

Ah!

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iceumbre14 [2013-05-31 01:51:17 +0000 UTC]

Heck yeah you should continue!

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Zephyrift In reply to iceumbre14 [2013-05-31 01:52:36 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Overlord-Of-Stuff [2013-05-31 00:44:39 +0000 UTC]

Nice! It'd be cool if you continued!

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Zephyrift In reply to Overlord-Of-Stuff [2013-05-31 00:45:45 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Zeldeon [2013-05-30 23:06:53 +0000 UTC]

(^u^)
small note- left, not leaved.

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DreamPuppeteer [2013-05-30 23:04:57 +0000 UTC]

^-^

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JazzyLizzie [2013-05-30 22:41:54 +0000 UTC]

Cool :3 I suggest making chapters longer than this, though.

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chrompetitive [2013-05-30 22:29:35 +0000 UTC]

Def continue!

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Azu--kun [2013-05-30 22:23:21 +0000 UTC]

The answer to your question:
Yes, yes you should continue this, I like it. A lot.

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Zephyrift In reply to Azu--kun [2013-05-30 22:24:02 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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FantasyVentriloquist [2013-05-30 22:02:30 +0000 UTC]

Yeah! Sounds great!

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Zephyrift In reply to FantasyVentriloquist [2013-05-30 22:10:54 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Written for SnowClan.

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